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Lightbulb rate ke mehal banaate rahe.. - 15th May 2005, 11:21 PM

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roz ek nayi ummeed se ek kadam badhaate rahe,
zindgi rooth ti rahi, aur hum manaate rahe..

na socha tha ho jaayenge is kadar tanha,
har aahat pe tere aane ki aas lagaate rahe..

har ane wala pal hansi laaye lab pe tere,
khud ko teri khushiyon ka saamaan banaate rahe..

nazar na lag jaaye zamaane ki, yaado ko teri,
har mehfil me jhooti so muskaan hum sajaate rahe..

har pal jeene ki chah mein, rate ke mehal banaate rahe,
waqt ki lahre mitaati rahi, aur hum banaate rahe..

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Hi Pallo,

har pal jeene ki chah mein, rate ke mehal banaate rahe,
waqt ki lahre mitaati rahi, aur hum banaate rahe..

BEautiful

Really fantastic writing....
kuch aks hai ismein....

Bahut hi khoob....yunhi likhte raho...

I really liked it a lot

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16th May 2005, 11:04 AM

pallaviji

yehi kahoongi ki koshish karte rahiye
ek din aapka yeh reth ka ghar itna mazboot ho jaayega ki lehrein ise baha nahi paayengi

all d best

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thanx soni..... bahut dino baad dekha hai tumhe.. hope u r cool & mast.... & u all make me smile when i see ur views.. thanx again soni...
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Hi Pallavi Ji,

Very beautiful writing indeed. Thanx 4 sharing such a gem with us.


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16th May 2005, 12:19 PM

thanxx rohin..... ki tumhe ye itniiii achhi lagi.... but ye kitni achhi hai aap logo se hi pata lag raha hai... kal dil me sirf ek line aayi thi aur bass banti chali gayi... 5 min me likhi hui lagta nahi tha achhi hogi... but still nice to see all of u with me.. thanx again...
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16th May 2005, 12:20 PM

thanx salim...
ab kya kahu hanx ke siwa.. i think aapse mil bhi pehli baar hi rahi hu... anyway hope to c u soon again.... & really nice to welcome a new frnd to my inbox...
tahnx again..
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very nice Pallavi ji


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16th May 2005, 02:15 PM

roz ek nayi ummeed se ek kadam badhaate rahe,
zindgi rooth ti rahi, aur hum manaate rahe..

na socha tha ho jaayenge is kadar tanha,
har aahat pe tere aane ki aas lagaate rahe..

Waaaahh! Beautiful Sher!!


har ane wala pal hansi laaye lab pe tere,
khud ko teri khushiyon ka saamaan banaate rahe..

nazar na lag jaaye zamaane ki, yaado ko teri,
har mehfil me jhooti so muskaan hum sajaate rahe..

again.. beautifully expressed!!!


har pal jeene ki chah mein, rate ke mehal banaate rahe,
waqt ki lahre mitaati rahi, aur hum banaate rahe..

Well Said!

Hi Pallavi!

Bahut hi pyaara kalaam hai.....Accha laga ise padhkar... really well expressed.... yun hi likhit raho.... TC...


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17th May 2005, 12:13 PM

har ane wala pal hansi laaye lab pe tere,
khud ko teri khushiyon ka saamaan banaate rahe..

waah ustaad waah !


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17th May 2005, 07:21 PM

thanx a lot pulkit
ye jo ek ek ko chun ke taareef karte ho..lolzzzz.. bass kya kahu.... thanxxxxxxxxx
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17th May 2005, 07:24 PM

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har ane wala pal hansi laaye lab pe tere,
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waah ustaad waah !
kahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnn ho.. hadhhhh haiii... come back soooon deeep... bass mujhe nahi pata.. aur ye wahh bhi khud mujhe dena...anyways... thanx..... ek aur baat kehni hai.... abhi batati hu... take care


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