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hum hi milte haiN kya SATAANE ko...!! |
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hum hi milte haiN kya SATAANE ko...!! -
26th June 2013, 09:51 PM
Bahut waqt baad kuch romantic sa likhne ki kosish ki hai, par ye pata nahin ki kitna romantic likh paaya huN, umeed karta huN aap logoN ko jyada niraash nahiN karuNga...
Dhoond ke har naye bahaane ko, Hum hi milte haiN kya sataane ko...?? neend me choom kar ho tum jaati, kya kaheN tere aise aane ko... jo suna haarte haiN ishq me sab, hum bhi taiyaar aazmaane ko... jab salamat haiN haath-paauN mere, chahiye aur kya kamaane ko... chot to jaan-boojh kar khaayi, kaun kehta hai dil lagaane ko... chhod jaayeNge jab zamaana hum, yaad aayeNge is zamaane ko... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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29th June 2013, 08:51 PM
nice creation lucky bhai....but romance kam raha......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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29th June 2013, 11:32 PM
Hi lucky
bohot accha likha hai pata hai shurwaat to tumne pyar ki kardi lekin akhir tak aate aate sari shayri apne pe leli lekin accha laga padhke tAecaer be happy  jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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30th June 2013, 01:00 AM
Lucky Bhaii:
namaste! bahot hi achchhi Ghazal paDhne ko mili... dil ko Chhu gayi !dil se daad aur duaaeN KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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30th June 2013, 09:16 AM
waah bahaut khoob Taish bhai .... seedhee sachchee aur rawaan ... dheron daad !!
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30th June 2013, 02:17 PM
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shukriy aru bhai, waise jitni aashiqui ho gayi wahi bahut hai mere jaise e liye...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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1st July 2013, 05:29 PM
Dear Lucky...hai to romantic hi
 yeh sher hame jayada pasand aaya...  neend me choom kar ho tum jaati, kya kaheN tere aise aane ko... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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2nd July 2013, 04:08 PM
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aap aaye bahaar aayi, waise khud pe lene meN koi buraayi thode hi na hai, aakhir khud hi to likhi hai, waise jaan kar behad khshi hui ki kalaam aapko pasand aaya, umeed karta huN aage bhi aapka saath mujhe isi tarah se milta rahegaaa....!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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20th July 2013, 03:49 PM
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20th July 2013, 03:50 PM
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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22nd July 2013, 04:40 PM
Kya haal haiN chote ghalib
Bahut achha likhne lage ho Humaari dher saari duaaeiN aur daad Tumhari shayri ka andaaz tumhare hi jaisa hai Teesre sher ko ek base phir se parhna Apna khyaal rakho |
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