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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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bekhabar ho ke zamaane ko KHABAR kar aaye..!! -
6th August 2014, 07:32 PM
Jaane kyuN dilkiya ki aaj kuch post karuN, to ek do maheene puraani ghazal bazm ki nazr hai... Kuch khaamiyaan reh gayiN hon muafi ka talbgaar rahuNga...
na karo pyar kaha sabne magar kar aaye...
bekhabar ho ke zamaane ko khabar kar aaye...
mere paikar me tere ittr ki khusboo mehki,
vo jo khwaaboN meN bhi aaye to saNwar kar aaye...
daagh saare maiN mitaa duNga hasiN chehre se,
mere aaNgan meiN kabhi chaand utar kar aaye...
Dard mushkil meN hai jaaye to kidhar ko jaaye,
Zakhm itne mere paikar pe ubhar kar aaye...
maiN to ahmaq* tha muhabbat ko samajhta kaise,
tum to daana** ho muhabbat ka safar kar aaye...
*bewkoof, Idiot... **Samajhdaar aadmi, Wise man...
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6th August 2014, 07:49 PM
Lucky bhaii:
namaste!
kaise hoN bhaii... ummid kartaa huuN sab Khairyat hongaa.. aapko maiN tab se paDhtaa aayaa huuN jab maiN bazm meiN nayaa thaa... aur aaj bhee aapko paDh kar utni hi KhuShii hotii hai... andaaz-e-bayaan wahi pooraanaa.. yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan baDhaate rahiye
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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~$uper M0der@tor~
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6th August 2014, 07:52 PM
Welcome back taish saahab....
aapki ghazal beshaq kisii tareef ko mohtaaj nahii... chun chun kar beshkeemtee alfaazon se sajaya gayaa hai ise.. aur aap to is hunar me kaafi maahir hain....
saaare aashaar ek se ek aalaa hain.... kuch mere pasandeeda sher quote kar deta hoon...
mere paikar me tere ittr ki khusboo mehki,
vo jo khwaaboN meN bhi aaye to saNwar kar aaye...
daagh saare maiN mitaa duNga hasiN chehre se,
mere aaNgan meiN kabhi chaand utar kar aaye...
maiN to ahmaq* tha muhabbat ko samajhta kaise,
tum to daana** ho muhabbat ka safar kar aaye...
bahot khoob .... likhte rahiye
Shaad....
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6th August 2014, 09:27 PM
Bohat khoob Taish sahab. ...
Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain
Dil se dheron daad qubool kijiye
Khush rahiye
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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6th August 2014, 10:42 PM
Bahut khoob tanish ji......................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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6th August 2014, 11:18 PM
Waaah !! Sabhi aashaar khoob rahe !!! Aap ke qalaam meiN gehraayee ke saath saath taazgee bhi mehsoos hoti hai !! Dheron daad Taish bhai !!
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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7th August 2014, 02:28 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dhaval
Lucky bhaii:
namaste!
kaise hoN bhaii... ummid kartaa huuN sab Khairyat hongaa.. aapko maiN tab se paDhtaa aayaa huuN jab maiN bazm meiN nayaa thaa... aur aaj bhee aapko paDh kar utni hi KhuShii hotii hai... andaaz-e-bayaan wahi pooraanaa.. yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan baDhaate rahiye
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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bhai bilkul durust huN aur aapki hausla afzaayi ka shukra guzaar huN, bhai farq hai aap ab ustaad haiN maiN ab bhi ek adna s shayar huN, par dil ko bahut tassalli mili ek itne puraane dost ko puraani bateN yaad dilaate hue, umeed karta hun aapka saath aage bhi yuNhi milta rahegaa...!!
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7th August 2014, 12:18 PM
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Originally Posted by Taish
Jaane kyuN dilkiya ki aaj kuch post karuN, to ek do maheene puraani ghazal bazm ki nazr hai... Kuch khaamiyaan reh gayiN hon muafi ka talbgaar rahuNga...
maiN to ahmaq tha muhabbat ko samajhta kaise,
tum to daana ho muhabbat ka safar kar aaye...
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waaaaahhh!! Taishji,
bahot hi khubsurat ghazal pesh kii hai aapne..
khas kar maqtaa... behad laa jawab..
dheroN daad hamaari jaanib se
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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8th August 2014, 01:33 AM
maiN to ahmaq tha muhabbat ko samajhta kaise,
tum to daana ho muhabbat ka safar kar aaye...
Wahhh! Taish jii,,
Bohat bohat umdaH...... dherooN daad!
Likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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11th August 2014, 04:08 PM
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Originally Posted by zainy
Bohat khoob Taish sahab. ...
Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain
Dil se dheron daad qubool kijiye
Khush rahiye
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shukriya zainy ji.....................
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19th August 2014, 04:44 PM
Yaar...ye to kamaal ghazal ho gayii.......
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19th August 2014, 09:32 PM
Taish miyaaN aadaab
bhai kya khoob Ghazal hui hai, yeh bhi kehte nahiiN ban raha ke kaun sa she'r haasil-e-Ghazal raha, daad Tikaa lijiye
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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22nd August 2014, 01:07 AM
maiN to ahmaq* tha muhabbat ko samajhta kaise,
tum to daana** ho muhabbat ka safar kar aaye...
simply beautiful
thanks for sharing
regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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1st September 2014, 11:02 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Taish
Jaane kyuN dilkiya ki aaj kuch post karuN, to ek do maheene puraani ghazal bazm ki nazr hai... Kuch khaamiyaan reh gayiN hon muafi ka talbgaar rahuNga...
na karo pyar kaha sabne magar kar aaye...
bekhabar ho ke zamaane ko khabar kar aaye...
mere paikar me tere ittr ki khusboo mehki,
vo jo khwaaboN meN bhi aaye to saNwar kar aaye...
daagh saare maiN mitaa duNga hasiN chehre se,
mere aaNgan meiN kabhi chaand utar kar aaye...
Dard mushkil meN hai jaaye to kidhar ko jaaye,
Zakhm itne mere paikar pe ubhar kar aaye...
maiN to ahmaq* tha muhabbat ko samajhta kaise,
tum to daana** ho muhabbat ka safar kar aaye...
*bewkoof, Idiot... **Samajhdaar aadmi, Wise man...
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Dear Lucky.............behad khoobsurat ahsaas.....kuch aur nahi kahungi en ahsaasoN ke liye, bas reps add kar rhi hu ++++++
duaoN ke saath
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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