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One request to admin - 15th July 2009, 11:50 PM

Hi

Admin saheb se ek darkhwast karne yahan aaya hu ke diya jale ji ko ye baat samjha di jaaye ki kisi dusre ki ghazal post karte waqt use modify na karein....

Meri ek ghazal

Tere shauq mein, kya se kya ho gaye hum ..
Haqiqat the, Aik khawaab sa ho gaye hum ..

Rah-e-ishq mein, jab Fanaa ho gaye hum,
Shikasta Dilon ki, Dua ho gaye hum ..

Fasaana gham-e-ishq ka, kehte Kehte,
Kisi tute Dil ki, sadaa ho gaye hum ..

Jahaa manzil-e-Muddaa aayi 'Kavish'
Wahin !! karwaan se juda ho gaye hum

Is ghazal ko mohtarma ne

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64804

is thread mein post kiya hai isse alag kuch nahi kahna ghaur kijiyega aur unse daryaft bhi

Shukriya

Nadeem Ahmed Kavish
   
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16th July 2009, 06:18 PM

Nadeem saahab,

aap ne jo link diya hai, wahaa.n mention (by writing unknown) kiya gaya hai ki yeh poetry un ki likhi huii nahii.n hai...

shukriyah!

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