Dil ki ye aarzoo thi koi hamsafar mile... -
13th July 2006, 11:57 AM
Dosto ...aj jo kalaam likha vo mohobat k rivazo se hat ke hai..lekin ham samajhte hai ki sab ko apne apne jazbaat pesh karne ka haq hai..so kuchh likhne ki koshish ki hai jo aapke saamne hai...
Dil ki yeh aarzoo thi koi hamsafar mile...
tum kya mile hame aur andhere mile...
khushiya thi jo chand vo bhi fisal gayi..
toot k bikhri zindgi..sanso k taar tootne lage..
dil-e-daman tumari bewafi se lahuluhan ho gaya..
tume dekhte hi 'mohobat' naam se ab tees si uthe..
daagdaar ho gaye sanam tuj sang preet bada kar..
na khushi mili, na zindgi...gamo se tar-tar ho chale..
armaan tha mohobat me khud ko mita denge..
tune mgr jo jakhm diye..zindgi ko aur nasoor kar gaye..
na jite hai na marte hai..is zingdi k sehra main..
vah re sanam is mohbat me maut bhi na mile...
Dil ki yeh aarzoo thi koi hamsafar mile...
tum kya mile hame aur andhere mile...
Re: Dil ki ye aarzoo thi koi hamsafar mile... -
13th July 2006, 03:43 PM
GAM E LASHKAR SAHIBA
aapke har sher ko jaise jaise padhta gaya,,waise waise yun laga jaise dil ki jamin par gamon ki fauz badhti chali aa rahi hai..siskiyan,,laachari,,aur ashq ke gubaar udaati hue..gam ki talwarein seene ko chalni kar dengi jaise,,aahon ke abr fiza ko aur bhi khaufnaak bana rahe hai....bas..bas...ab aur nahin saha (padha) jata...!!!
bas dua karta hoon bekasi ke sehra mein bhatke is gam ke kaarwan ko mohabbat aur sukoon ka koi saagar mil jaye.aapki gazal par meri daad kubool kijiye...is umeed ke saath ki apne gam ke lashkar ko aap khushion ki talaash mein bhi daudaayengi.
take care
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
GAM E LASHKAR SAHIBA
aapke har sher ko jaise jaise padhta gaya,,waise waise yun laga jaise dil ki jamin par gamon ki fauz badhti chali aa rahi hai..siskiyan,,laachari,,aur ashq ke gubaar udaati hue..gam ki talwarein seene ko chalni kar dengi jaise,,aahon ke abr fiza ko aur bhi khaufnaak bana rahe hai....bas..bas...ab aur nahin saha (padha) jata...!!!
bas dua karta hoon bekasi ke sehra mein bhatke is gam ke kaarwan ko mohabbat aur sukoon ka koi saagar mil jaye.aapki gazal par meri daad kubool kijiye...is umeed ke saath ki apne gam ke lashkar ko aap khushion ki talaash mein bhi daudaayengi.
take care
Helo manoj....sabse pehle thanks aapke yaha aane k liye...socond thanks aapke itni gehrai se padh kar uski itna gehra response dene k liye....such me dil hai hi gamo ka pitara...iske alawa kuchh bhi nahi....paras apne ek post per kehti hai..ki jab kisi khushi se daman choo jayega to vo fir se likhengi...par manoj muje nahi lagta aisa hota hai...hamare liye shayed gam..gam aur dher saare gam hi hai...bas yahi keh paungi...sukoon maano ek divye swapn sa ho gaya hai...
thanks agains manu for coming here...u hi aate rahiyega..
Re: Dil ki ye aarzoo thi koi hamsafar mile... -
15th July 2006, 09:54 AM
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Originally posted by gam-e-lashkar Dosto ...aj jo kalaam likha vo mohobat k rivazo se hat ke hai..lekin ham samajhte hai ki sab ko apne apne jazbaat pesh karne ka haq hai..so kuchh likhne ki koshish ki hai jo aapke saamne hai...
Dil ki yeh aarzoo thi koi hamsafar mile...
tum kya mile hame aur andhere mile...
khushiya thi jo chand vo bhi fisal gayi..
toot k bikhri zindgi..sanso k taar tootne lage..
dil-e-daman tumari bewafi se lahuluhan ho gaya..
tume dekhte hi 'mohobat' naam se ab tees si uthe..
daagdaar ho gaye sanam tuj sang preet bada kar..
na khushi mili, na zindgi...gamo se tar-tar ho chale..
armaan tha mohobat me khud ko mita denge..
tune mgr jo jakhm diye..zindgi ko aur nasoor kar gaye..
na jite hai na marte hai..is zingdi k sehra main..
vah re sanam is mohbat me maut bhi na mile...
Dil ki yeh aarzoo thi koi hamsafar mile...
tum kya mile hame aur andhere mile...
hello friend
adhoori hasrato ka janaja hai yeh, par bahut khboosurti se nikala hai appney, daad hazir hai kabool kijiye.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
hmmm sab theek toh hai ji???????
kaafi dard mehsoos karrahi hoon tumhare har lafz mein..umeed hai sab khairiyat se hai....
waise kalaam pasand aaya mujhe..dil se likkhi har baat dil ko choo jaati hai..haina!
tum yuhin likhte raho lekin umeed karti hoon ke yeh dard bas shayri tak seemit hai
apna khyaal rakkho...tumhari apni
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
Thanks aman ji...vaise me aapko nahi jaanti lekin khushi hui ki aap yaha aayi aur apni dictionery me hame b add kar liya...yahi soch kar dil ko bahut khushi hoti hai...jab koi kisi anjaan ko apne saath le leta hai...
aapko hamara kalaam pasand aaya....hamari koshish safal ho gayi..ek insaan ko is se jyada kya chahiye hota hai...thanks u hi aate rahiye...aur hame khushi dete rahiye..aur khush rahiye..ok bye..
adhoori hasrato ka janaja hai yeh, par bahut khoobsurti se nikala hai appney, daad hazir hai kabool kijiye.
Thanks sunita ji...badi khoobsoorti se aapne bhi tareef ki hai...dil se kabool karte hai aap ki daad ko...aur umeed karte hai k aap u hi aati rahengi....