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Exclamation I won't mind...!!! - 12th December 2007, 07:02 PM

If u wanna use me,
I won't mind,
but...
use me properly,
coz I don't wanna be
used again...in love,
by anybody else, like u,
So...
Trash me completely,
when ur
need is over


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parwane to khud rakhte hain shauk jalne ka
   
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13th December 2007, 02:35 PM

Ahh...

Excellent!! How Helpless people becoe in love........ Indeed

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13th December 2007, 06:36 PM

thank u susheel ji....
thank u very much


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14th December 2007, 08:20 PM

You have written your agony in a very simple way............i jus don have words to appreciate ur work.........keep it up...


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Love 15th December 2007, 12:44 AM

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If u wanna use me,
I won't mind,
but...
use me properly,
coz I don't wanna be
used again...in love,
by anybody else, like u,
So...
Trash me completely,
when ur
need is over

nahut hi khub likha hai mere dost bas aage bhi aise hi likhte rahena ab main bhi kuch likhna chahta hu ummid hai aapko pasand aayega

in the crowd and in loneliness
in the depth of my thirst
in the pain and in anguish
i miss u always,i miss u always
in song and in music
in my dreams and while i am awake
in the sunlight and in the shade
i miss u always,i miss u always

your love is my life
i can't forget your love
i try my best day and night
but i can't erase your image
in the depth of my thirst
in the crowd and in loneliness
in pain and in an anguish
i miss u always,i miss u always

i never dreamt that
i'd have to live without u
o sweet heart i would leave
everything for u
in the shadows of your tresses
in the crowd and in loneliness
in pain and in anguish
i miss u always,i miss u always
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22nd December 2007, 04:03 PM

hey krenil.....
you wrote wonderfull
realy.....its v v nice.....
keep it on...


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Mujse Itana rista banaye rakhna
Mera Pyaar dil mai basaye rakhna..
Wakt ko koi bandh nahi sakta par is
Pyaar ko palko me sayaye rakhana

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hey krenil.....
you wrote wonderfull
realy.....its v v nice.....
keep it on...

thanx anu mujhe bahut hi khushi hui ki tumhe ye achha laga bas aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena
aapka dost krenil
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thanx anu mujhe bahut hi khushi hui ki tumhe ye achha laga bas aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena
aapka dost krenil
ki kasti gai kinara gaya
tute dil ka sahara gaya

agar koi puchhe "krenil" kaha gaya
to kahena "dreamgirl" ki yado me mara gaya

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kya khub likha he tum ne.............
krenil.. ab hume apni dream girl ka naam to bataoo...to hum aapki dreamgirl se aapke baare me puch sake..... v sweet......


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Mujse Itana rista banaye rakhna
Mera Pyaar dil mai basaye rakhna..
Wakt ko koi bandh nahi sakta par is
Pyaar ko palko me sayaye rakhana

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ANU...
   
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