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Muskuraate aap hain.... -
13th March 2011, 01:14 AM
Mere dil pe aye sanam bijli giraate aap hain, Surkh AankhoN se kabhi gham aazmaate aap hain. kab se baitha hooN liye surat wafaa ki raat din, Vaade karke besharam fir bhuul jaate aap hain. Maaho anjum ko taraashaa jaane-jaaN rab ne magar, kehte hain wo bhi,haseeN raaton ke naate aap hain. laajo-sharmeeli adaaon ko bayaan kaise karoon, aa ke chilman me, shama ko khud bujhaate aap hain. Thee duaaon ki jo raaten wo abhi tak yaad hain, "shaad" main ruswaa huaa aur muskuraate aap hain. shaad............... |
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13th March 2011, 11:36 PM
woww.... more than 100 views but not a single comment..
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13th March 2011, 11:42 PM
... aur reply dene ka record hum todhe dete haiN ... chinta kis baat kii ...
kab se baitha hooN liye surat wafaa ki raat din, Vaade karke besharam fir bhuul jaate aap hain. Bahut Khooooooooob ......... Shaad Bhai .......... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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14th March 2011, 12:08 AM
shukiya rajinder bhai......
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14th March 2011, 12:17 AM
Waaaaahhhh!!!!!
Shaad bhai aapki is kalaam ke bare mein kya kahu samajh mein nahi aata. Main to shaad bhai ki isi adaaygi ka fan hu. Shaad bhai keep it up.... Or ham bhai logan ko bhi thode tips diya kijiye sahab. Bahoot khooob nazm lagi aapki. Likhte rahein hamare liye...... Nakamyabi ka andhera AnjAAn!!! _____________________________________
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14th March 2011, 10:19 AM
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aap aa gaye aur is andaaz se jo meri tareef kar gaye bandaa behad shukrguzaar hai aapka.... bhai yoon tareef karte hain jab aap dost log to darta hoon ke kahin guroor naa ho jaae khud pe..... khair jo thoda bahot, toota phoota kuch likh paata hoon aap sab ke saamne rakh deta hoon, aap pasand karte hain, aapki muhabbat hai.... itna hi kahnaa chahunga ke bas yoonhi saath banaae rakhiyega....aur rahi tips aur sikhane ki baaten to jahan tak mera sawaal hai abhi tak main khud bhi seekh hi raha hoon.. bas likhte likhte hi polish hoti hai har quality... isliye aap bhi bas likhte raha kijiye... apna khayal rakhiye.. shukriya.. shaad... |
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14th March 2011, 11:55 AM
Bahut accha likhaa hai aapne, Sameer Bete...! HameiN bhi pasand aaya aapka kalaam...!
Bas maqte maiN aapke taqallus ke baad wo "main" accha nahiN lagaa...! It seems that you have mentioned yourself twice...! What about replacing it with a " aaj " or something like that...? It's only my humble opinion...! Keep it up With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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14th March 2011, 12:07 PM
ati hai muskan har ek anshu k baad
najre jhukti hai har ek lamhe k baad aaj bhi traste hai hum uske liye badla hai tho wakt ki aaj hum hai kisi or k or wo banne ja rahi hai kisi or ki |
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14th March 2011, 12:10 PM
dosto
pyar karna bura nahi per pyar karne k baad uska hamari jindgi me na hona bura hai aise hi kuch baate hai jo me aapko batana chaunga hum hamesa aisa kyn feel karte hai, ki jis se hum bahut pyar karte the usse aj bhi milne k liye taraste hai meri shaadi ho chuki hai, or jis se pyar karta tha main uski bhi hone ja rahi hai meri ab usse 1 month se baat nahi hui hai, mun rota hai usse baat karne k lie per apne aapko usse door karne k liye me usse baate nai kar rha kyn ki uski bhi ab shaadi hone ja rahi hai |
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14th March 2011, 02:28 PM
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Shukriya Chachajaan, jo aapne apna waqt betejaan ke liye nikaalaa... Aapki saari raay tasleem aur sar aankhon par aapki naseehateN... Beshaq ho sakta hai aap ka pahloo durust ho, aur jo aapne farmaaya hai wo bhi sahi ho, aksar agar hum bolchaal ki language me dekhen to aisa qatai nahi hota hai... kisi sentence ke do tarah hain bayaani ke...agar main kahta hoon.. 1) accha shaad ab chalta hai... yaa fir 2) "shaad" main ab chalta hoon..... dekha jae to dono jaldi hazam nahi hote hain... lekin jahan tak shayri aur taqhallus ke istemaal ki baat hai to main ye batane ki gustaakhi karunga ke above mentioned dono lines bilkul sahi hain, koi galti nahi hai.... kyonki shayri me aksar aisi baaten kahi jaati hain jo seedhi na lagen, ghuma fira ke seedhi baaten kahna hi shayri hai... example ke taur pe janab "Ahmed Faraaz" saaheb ke chand aashar pesh karta hoon. aapko bhi mahsoos hoga ke ye ek adaa bhi hai shayri kahne ki, haalaki Rare hai magar aisa bhi hota hai....ab dekhiye aap taqhallus ka kamaal, kaise alag alag tareeqon se istemaal kiya jaa sakta hai.... 'Faraz' tuune use mushkilo.n me.n Daal diyaa zamaanaa saahib-e-zar aur sirf shaayar tuu. tuu bhii dil ko ik lahuu kii buu.Nd samajhaa hai 'Faraz' aa.Nkh gar hotii to qatre me.n samandar dekhataa tum taqalluf ko bhii iKhalaas samajhate ho 'Faraz' dost hotaa nahii.n har haath milaanevaalaa tavaaf-e-manzil-e-jaanaa.N hame.n bhii karanaa hai 'Faraz' tum bhii agar tho.Dii duur saath chalo ( ye perticular sher aapko mere quoted sher sa lagega... ) Ab dekhiye chachajaan, yahan par mentioned sheron ko aap agar padhen to paaenge normally dekhne pe ye 2nd person sher hain,, yaani taqhallus me shayar apne naam ko aise istemaal karta hai jaise ke wo saamne waala banda hai ( 2nd person, jisse baat direct ki ja rahi hai)... lekin agar aap sochen to paaenge ke wo saamne wala banda koi aur nahi shayar khud hai, lekin istemaal aise kiya gaya hai.. ab chalte hain dusre masle ki taraf......... ham ne bhii us ko dekhaa kal shaam ittefaaqan apanaa bhii haal hai ab logo 'Faraz' kaa saa aaj dil khol ke roya hai to yuu.N Khush hai 'Faraz' chand lamho.n kii ye raahat bhii ba.Dii ho jaise In do sheron ko agar aap dekhen to yahaan taqhallus as a 3rd person ki tarah istemaal huaa hai... yaani ki shayar ka jo naam hai na wo khud hai, na saamne waala hai balki koi teesre bande ki taraf ishaara hai... lekin at last agar socha jaae to wo teesra banda bhi khud shaayar hai..... dekha kamaal taqhallus kaa... ab le chalta hoon aapko apne sher ki taraf jo aapne quote kiya hai...... Thee duaaon ki jo raaten wo abhi tak yaad hain, "shaad" main ruswaa huaa aur muskuraate aap hain. ab dekhiye yahan pe shaayar baat jinse kar raha hai wo uski mahbuba hain (yaani 2nd person).... shaad taqhallus ko shayar 2nd person ki tarah istemaal nahi kar sakta kyonki wo to uski mahbooba hain, 3rd person ki tarah bhi nhai kyonki haal unka khud ka hai.... isliye as a 1st person ki jagah hi use hua hai jo ki rarest rare hai bahot hi kam shayar ise aise istemaal karte hain..... ummeed hai ke main zyaada na bol gaya houn.. bas aapne jo poocha tha mujhse jo mujhe sahi laga ya jo meri jankari me tha maine bataya... masla sahi galat ka nahi seekhne sikhaane ka hai.... agar aap isme kuch add karna chahen ya aapki koi raay pesh karna chaahen to u r most welcome sir..... actully i am waiting for that.. shukriya tahe dil se jo itni bariki se ghulaam ke kalaam pe nazar daali aapne... aage bhi roshni daalte rahen....... aapka baalak.... shaad.... |
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14th March 2011, 05:20 PM
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Rahul, kitna dard leke tum yahan aaye ho, tumhe kya jawaab doon kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai.. tumhare likhe chand sheroN ki tareef karooN ya tumhe hausla bandhaun ye sochna mere bas ke baahar ki baat hai.. bas itni hi dua karunga ke Allah tumhe sukoon de..... shaad.... |
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14th March 2011, 06:50 PM
Nahin, mere Laadle...! Aap ne jyaada bola hi kahaaN hai...?
Chache ko samjhaate samjhaate, aap ki jo ungliyan thak gayiN, uss ke liye kshamaa maaNgte heiN hum...! Aap ka bahut shukriyaa...! Jeete raho Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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14th March 2011, 07:56 PM
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Ello... kar di na wahi baat... kaahe ki thakaan chaache... aapke liye to sau ungliyaan qurbaan..... wese ek raaz ki baat bataaun.... likhne me badaa maza aata hai mujhe, aur ek baar gar shuru ho gaya to bas fir ungliyaaN rukti kahaan hain....  ummeed hai koi baat nagawara na guzri hogi..... aate rahiye saab, bachhaa samajh ke maaf kar dijiyega...baatoN ko dil se na laga baithiyegaa.... shukriyaa.. shaad... |
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15th March 2011, 06:02 PM
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aappke post mai humesha ek alag si shyari hoti hai phad ke bhut mazza ata hai orr bhut hi acche shabdoo ko app use karte hai bhut sahi likhte hai lagta hai ki wakai kuch phad rahe hain bas aise hi likhte rahye orr atte rahe orr hum logon ko apni behtarin shyari se nawazte rahe bhut bhut shukriya yasir हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे |
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15th March 2011, 07:20 PM
laajo-sharmeeli adaaon ko bayaan kaise karoon,
aa ke chilman me, shama ko khud bujhaate aap hain. Good One ...... Shaad Bhai ! Bahut romantic ashaar leke aaye iss peshkash meN ... Accha laga padhke ... dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi umdaa kalaam likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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16th March 2011, 12:29 AM
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Yasir bhai ye aapki meherbaani hai jo aapne nacheeez ko itni izzat dee.. shaayad main is qaabil bhi nahi, magar aapki daad aur aapki duaaen sar aankhon par.. yoon hi saath dete rahen, aate rahen.,...khush rahiye. shaad... |
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kya sukun kya dukh |
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kya sukun kya dukh -
16th March 2011, 04:34 PM
sabkya sukun kya dukh sach kuch tho tha uske sath,
ab es sukun ko le kar hum akele bethe hai es mod per, duniya me aye the uska naam le kar per sath hone se phale hi juda ho gaye nahi jante hum ki kya wo aaj bhi tarasti hai hamre liye kisi dusre k hone k baad, ya hum hi taraste hai kisi dusre k hone k baad............ Rahul Bansal Sahaj Institute of Management & Technology Sikandra, Agra 91-9319483649, 8445126529, director@simtedu.co.in, www.simtedu.co.in |
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16th March 2011, 09:09 PM
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aapka bahot bahot shukriya Naresh bhai jo aapne har baar ki tarah is baar bhi saath banae rakhaa, aapke aashirwaad se is mahfil ko nawaaz diya, main dil se shukrguzaar rahungaa aapkaa.... yoonhi aate rahen, duaaon me yaad rakhhen.. shaad... |
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18th March 2011, 09:40 AM
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acche lage aapke ehsaas rahul... likhte rahiye aur agar apne ehsaason aur alfaazon ke liye alag sa thread banaaenge to aur bhi acchi baat hogi.. never mind. shaad... |
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19th March 2011, 02:11 AM
nice shayari. thanks for sharing.....................
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19th March 2011, 09:42 AM
thanks for coming mittal..............
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19th March 2011, 12:05 PM
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Wah Wah Facebook me bhi aap chaye hue ho or yahan bhi, kya baat hai ji, Shoib sahab bhut kehar macha rahe hai aap. bhut umda peshkash apki, yahan apko main point de sakta hu Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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19th March 2011, 07:44 PM
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Anil bhai hahahhaha............. aapne jis andaaz se meri aur mere is chote se hunar ki jo tareef kari hai use padh ke pahle to chehre pe muskaan utar aai, baad me aapka shukrguzaar ho gaya... bhai ye aap nahi aapki muhabbat bol rahi hai... aur main khush-naseeb hoon jo mere aap jaise dost hain... shukriya tashreef laane ke liye aur kalaam ko pasand karne ke liye... yoonhi aate raha kijiye..shukriyaaa (points dene ke liye alag se thanks...   ) apna khayaal rakhiyegaa..shaad... |
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