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17th March 2006, 03:35 PM
pyar mohabat ka khel ajjeb kyu hai.........?
kabhi yeh hai dil ki khushi, aur kabhi majbur kyu hai...? milta hai tere, mere khayalo ka silsila....... fir bhi tere pass rehne se dil majbur kyu hai? kehna sunana ham dono ko hi hai bahut kuch...... fir bhi hothoo par khaomoshi ka pehra sa kyu hai? ajjeb hai ham dono ke dil ki uljhan bhi...... bhara hua hai ham dono ke dil ka pamaana fir bhi ......... yeh payasa sa kyu hai................? |
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17th March 2006, 05:20 PM
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wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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sundar hai -
17th March 2006, 05:44 PM
kehna sunana ham dono ko hi hai bahut kuch......
fir bhi hothoo par khaomoshi ka pehra sa kyu hai? ye panktiyan bahut achee hain par aap kee pahalee rachnayen zayda pasand ayeen mujhe ANil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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17th March 2006, 05:49 PM
bhut acha likha
aaya hu yaaro, dil apna de ke. aankho me chehra kisi ka le ke. wo dil ka katil, dil ber hamara jiske liye main, hua aawara milte he jisne, chuma tha muzko pher na palat ke dekha dobara..... such hai..yahe hota hai shayad, dil dene ke baad. iss leye to kahta hu dosto...... chod de saari duniya kisi ke leye, ye munasib nahi aadmi ke leye. pyar se bhe zaroori kai kaam hai. pyar sab kuch nahi aadmi ke leye. |
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17th March 2006, 07:36 PM
hi ranju
very nice likhte rahna bye |
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18th March 2006, 10:26 AM
thanks.......
surbhi bas tum mujhe yun hi padte rehna......... shukriya ranju |
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18th March 2006, 10:29 AM
hi karan.......
thanks dear.......accha lagi meri poem uske liye.........last amin jo tumne jo gan eki lines likhi woh mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai....... chod de saari duniya kisi ke leye, ye munasib nahi aadmi ke leye. pyar se bhe zaroori kai kaam hai. pyar sab kuch nahi aadmi ke leye. ranju |
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18th March 2006, 10:32 AM
helo ANIL JI,
chaliye aapko kuch lines hi pasand aayi mere liye itna hi bahut hai.........kabhi kabhi kuch change bhi aana chaiye......hai ki nahi......waise aapki her ray mere liye bahut value rakhati hai.... thanks ranju |
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18th March 2006, 10:46 AM
thanks prince......
tum itne dhayan se meri her poem padte ho thanks........ ranju |
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18th March 2006, 12:19 PM
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Ranju ji bohat hi pyara likha hai aapne sach mein... yuhi likhti rahiye...take care  Apka Diggaj kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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18th March 2006, 07:24 PM
hi diggaj..........THANKS dear tumehe meri poem pyari lagi.......
isi treah plz apne comments de kar mujhe accha likhne ki prerna dete raho.......... with best wishes ranju |
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19th March 2006, 03:08 PM
bahut khoob ranjana ji,aacha laga aapko pehli baar padkar,aacha likha hai aapne.aapne jo sawal pucche uska uttar shayad humare kiske paas nahi hai.......bas aap yuhi likhti rahiye...............aur in sawalo me kuch sawal aad karne ki ghustaki chahunga.....
Koi ye kaise bataye keh woh tanhaa kyon hai...... Woh jo apna tha wohi aur kisi ka kyon hai...... Yehi duniya hai to phir aisi ye duniya kyon hai...... Yehi hota hai to aakhir yehi hota kyon hain........??? Ek zara hath barhaa de, tou pakarlein daaman Uss ke seenay mein samaa jaye hamarii dharkan Itni qurbat hai tou phir fasala itna kyon hai........???? Dil-e-barbaad se nikla nahi ab tak koi Ek lutte gher pe diya karta hai dastak koi Aas jo tutt gayi phir se bandhata kyon hai.......??? Tum musarrat ka kaho ya isse Ghum ka rishta Kehte hain pyar ka rishta hai janam ka rishta Hai janam ka jo ye rishta tou badalta kyon hai.....??? bye and take care passionate....... pyar kare jo hume sone sa khara jiski ankhon me ho pyar hi pyar bhara me uska "veer" wo meri "zarra" -------------------Brizesh_kol_------------------------------------- 
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20th March 2006, 09:19 AM
hi passionate.......
bahut bahut shukriya........ Tum musarrat ka kaho ya isse Ghum ka rishta Kehte hain pyar ka rishta hai janam ka rishta Hai janam ka jo ye rishta tou badalta kyon hai.....??? zindagee ke kai acche sawalo ka jawab hame malum kyu nahi hota............? thanks ranju |
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hi ranju -
21st March 2006, 12:41 PM
sansar main kyon raha jaye
tere dil main dharakan ban ke jab rahane kee jagah milee bejan see tasweeren ban ke deewar main kyon raha jaye toone kaheen rakh liya hame ab taj mahal bhee kya karana zinda hain to ghar hee achhe mazar main kyon raha jaye toone jo bana diya pyar se sahil ka gharonda achha hai kahstee mazboot sahee un kee par mazdhar main kyon raha jaye woh khab bahut hee ache hain too aur main milate hain jis main ik dooje kee khwahish main rahana sansar main kyon raha jaye arvind |
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27th March 2006, 09:48 PM
hi arvind ji............shukriya aapko meri kavitaa pasand aayi.......
aapne jo comments main likhi woh bahut hi khubsurat hai.......... iski yeh lines dil ko chhoo gayi.... woh khab bahut hee ache hain too aur main milate hain jis main ik dooje kee khwahish main rahana sansar main kyon raha jaye with best wishes....... ranju |
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27th March 2006, 11:56 PM
ranjana ji
sach mein bahut hi khub likha hai aapne ab main jyaada kuch nahi kahunga .... bas ek baar clap jaroor karna chahunga iss dil mein basa hai itna pyaar phir bhi dil hi dil se itna door kyun hai ..... ??? nice one naa ... just added something ... hehe bye TC Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki, Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi, Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm) *(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´)¸.·'´)* .....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»...... *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* ------------------------------------------------ |
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28th March 2006, 11:20 AM
bahut hi acche likhi hai aapne chotti ma..........sach main bahut hi khubsurat hai
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28th March 2006, 09:23 PM
bahut hi khub likha hai,aise hi likhte rahiye
byeeeeeee take care |
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30th March 2006, 09:11 AM
hi raj.........
bahut bahut shukriya............. with love and best wishes ranju |
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30th March 2006, 09:13 AM
hi meet.......
thanks itne pyar se padne ke liye........ with love ranju |
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30th March 2006, 09:15 AM
iss dil mein basa hai itna pyaar phir bhi
dil hi dil se itna door kyun hai ..... ??? ashu ji add kar liya......ya it i svery nice......and thanks for your clapping........ with love and best wishes ranju |
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