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Un ka dil maang kar dekha hai meine !!!
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Love Un ka dil maang kar dekha hai meine !!! - 2nd May 2003, 12:19 PM

Har baar apni zid ko roka hai meine
aapni har aadat ko badla hai meine
phir bhi woh waise hi apne dil ko dabaye bethe hai
bahut baar ...un ke dil ko un se maang ke dekha hai meine

ansoo baha kar dekhe hai meine
apni har khawaish ko daba kar dekha hai meine
aa kar mere passs bhi woh dooor hi rehte hai
un ko apne gale se bhi laga kar dekha hai meine ...

haatho ki lakheero ko miitaa kar dekha hai meine
kaanch ki chuddiyon ko kankha ke dekha hai meine
woh kabhi bhi sunte nahi mere jazbaato ko
apni aankho se dil ki baat samjha kar dekha hai meine

har aahat se bacha kar dekha hai meine
un ki har baat ko seene se laga kar dekha hai meine
woh kabhi mere nahi hue ....
is baaat ko ... khudha ko bata kar dekha hai meine

lamha lamha un ki yaad mein guzara meine
apna wajoood ko un mein basaya meine
woh mujh se judaa ho kar chala gaya door
har pal us ko khawaabo mein bulaya meine ... !!!!!


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kya kahu? - 2nd May 2003, 06:35 PM

meri nanu,
kya kahu, alfaaz nahi mere paas
tumhare ahesaas dil ko .....
yunh chhutae hai mere
jaise sahaj se aakar hawa.

ansoo baha kar dekhe hai meine
apni har khawaish ko daba kar dekha hai meine
aa kar mere passs bhi woh dooor hi rehte hai
un ko apne gale se bhi laga kar dekha hai meine ...

tere ahesaas bahot hi gahraai se baahar aaye hai.

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3rd May 2003, 07:40 AM

maaf ki jiye, thoDi dehr baad reply kar raha huuN; pehle aapki post paDii thi, magar reply karna bhool gaya!

bahot hi behtareen lafzoN ke zariye aapne dil ki haalat ko ek kalaam banaa kar pesh kiya hai.
paD kar bahot achcha lagga!

aapse ummeed hai ki isi taraH mehfil sajaate raheN ge..

aman



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3rd May 2003, 10:23 AM

namaste... talkineyesji

maaf kijyega.. mujhe apka naam nai pata.... anywaz.... sach mein apne..bahut hi accha likha hai ... dil ko chuu gai apki yeah likhavat...

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har aahat se bacha kar dekha hai meine
un ki har baat ko seene se laga kar dekha hai meine
woh kabhi mere nahi hue ....
is baaat ko ... khudha ko bata kar dekha hai meine

lamha lamha un ki yaad mein guzara meine
apna wajoood ko un mein basaya meine
woh mujh se judaa ho kar chala gaya door
har pal us ko khawaabo mein bulaya meine ... !!!!!


bye take care


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Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
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Exclamation Bahut achhe - 3rd May 2003, 11:49 AM

Hello talkingeyes,

Or ek baar phir aapne bahut hi behtreen tareeke se khoobsoorat se khayaalatoN ko bade hi seedhe se alfaazoN me keh diya, bahut khoob!!!

Hamare khayaalat bhi kuchh eise hi haiN bas andaaz kuchh alag hai.

Ik samandar ki chaahat ke chalte
Koi uske gehre me nikal gaya,
Samandar or mohobbat ka hunar ? 'Afsos'
Wo apne aashiq ko hi nigal gaya.

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4th May 2003, 01:06 PM

Bahut khoob !!

Achha likha hai aapne..khaas kar ke yeh kuchh lines

haatho ki lakheero ko miitaa kar dekha hai meine
kaanch ki chuddiyon ko kankha ke dekha hai meine
woh kabhi bhi sunte nahi mere jazbaato ko
apni aankho se dil ki baat samjha kar dekha hai meine

Apni bebasi ko bahut hi haseen tareelke se bayaan kiya hai aapne..

Likhte rahiye
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nothing - 7th May 2003, 05:41 AM

this is my second reply to u..keep writing ...
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lamha lamha un ki yaad mein guzara meine
apna wajoood ko un mein basaya meine
woh mujh se judaa ho kar chala gaya door
har pal us ko khawaabo mein bulaya meine ... !!!!!


waah Talkingeyes ji...
bohat khubsurat rachna pesh ki hai aapne...
her lafz meiN kashish hi kashish hai...

muaafi chahooNga derr se reply karne ke liye...

likhti rahiye aur muskuraati rahiye...


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