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Angry sapna yeh tha mera - 13th August 2003, 05:43 PM

palko mein dum thorte yeh ansuu ..
siskti aahen mere zehan ki
aaah sunau to kis ko sunau ..
apne siwaa aur kis ke ghar jaau ..

sapna yeh tha mera ..
garam khaana kisi ko khilau
apni haatho ka anachal de kar
raat bhar us ko sulaau ..

kuch baatein .. unkahi hi reh gayi ..
nasamjhi mein kushiya beh gayi .
kuch meri zidd thi ..
kuch us ka abhimaan ..
in dono ke beech mein mohabaat mar gayi .

dehleez mere ghar ki ..
aaj bhi khuli hai ..mere dil ki tarah ..
mausam bahar ka aaye ..
umeed kuch bandhi hai is tarah ..!!!!!


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13th August 2003, 05:52 PM

palko mein dum thorte yeh ansuu ..
siskti aahen mere zehan ki
aaah sunau to kis ko sunau ..
apne siwaa aur kis ke ghar jaau ..

-Wah!.. sach kaha.. akhir kar, apne ghar me hi sukun paa sakte hain hum... woh ghar, jis me humara pyaar ho.

sapna yeh tha mera ..
garam khaana kisi ko khilau
apni haatho ka anachal de kar
raat bhar us ko sulaau ..

-Apke is sapne ki saadgi ka kya kehna.. bohat hi khubsoorat khwaab hai ye.. jo shayad har chahne waala dekhta hai.. apne kitni aasaani se ise bayaan kar diya..!

kuch baatein .. unkahi hi reh gayi ..
nasamjhi mein kushiya beh gayi .
kuch meri zidd thi ..
kuch us ka abhimaan ..
in dono ke beech mein mohabaat mar gayi .

-Lajawaab!!.. Apke is sher me itni gehrayi hai.. itna asar hai.. is sher ka andaaz e bayaan to behtareen hai, magar isme shaamil jazbaat aur khayaalaat, beshkeemti aur anmol hain.

dehleez mere ghar ki ..
aaj bhi khuli hai ..mere dil ki tarah ..
mausam bahar ka aaye ..
umeed kuch bandhi hai is tarah ..!!!!!

[Kalaam ka ye hissa hume bohat pasand aaya, kyonki isme umeed hai. aur umeed par hi to duniya kaayam hai..


Behad pasand aaya aapka ye kalaam.. bas, yunhi likhte rahiyega..


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yah kya? - 13th August 2003, 06:27 PM

meri pyari nanuuuuuuuuu,
kitne din ho gaye ..... tumhare hathh k baigan nahi khaaye... rajma chawal nahi khayae.....
yaha tak ki coffee tak nahi banati ......
nanuuuuuu ........ muje bahot khushi hui k tumne likha aaj....
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Re: sapna yeh tha mera - 13th August 2003, 06:44 PM

talkingeyes ji

aap ko pehli baar is site par padh raha hoon...aur yakeen janiye bahot acha likha hai aapne. ek nari ke zazbaat aur vedna ko bakhubi apne kalaam mein utara hai aapne.

na milta gam to barbaadi ke afsaane kahan jate
agar dunia chaman hoti to veerane kahan jate.

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khuli aankhein... - 19th August 2003, 03:54 AM

us roz sey tahalta hoon kabhi un reyt key teelo par
kabhi un shant si jheelo par ....
aey waqt tu thahra hey kabhi jo
us manjar sey mila fir mujhey abhi kyo..
yaad ab teri kab aur kiswaqt karoon..
is tarah sey kab tak aas karoo..
aiy ummeed to kabhi chupkey sey meri gali..
fir bhaley to raat ko mil us sharab key theykey pey...
din ya raat ka pata ab kya rakhoon...aey tasveer tu mil fir mujhey....
   
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