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miltee nahiN he daad-e-sukhan,hum rakhte heN per taab-e-sukhan - 1st November 2004, 10:51 PM

aadab arz he
apnee ek naee ghazal ke saath haazir huN-ajee kanjoosy choRie,manaa ke aap mujh se ache shayyer heN-likhye battaye ke kaisee lagee-yaad rakhiye"artist shouldn't b miser"

kaisa aashiq he tu a shah ke jahaaN meN khuvaar nahiN
us galee se guzra he or graibaaN taar taar nahiN

sahl he tujh ko paana magar us ke liye dushvaar nahiN
shikast kha kr jo baarha maanta kabhee haar nahiN

miltee nahin he daad-e-sukhan,hum rakhte heN pr taab-e-sukhan
dil meN jo sher uter jaaye , daad ka talabgaar nahiN

motee khayaalon ke heN pinhaaN in alfaaz ki seepiyoN meN
shairee ye tukbandee nahiN laffazee ye ashaar nahiN
   
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Re: miltee nahiN he daad-e-sukhan,hum rakhte heN per taab-e-sukhan - 2nd November 2004, 11:37 AM

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Originally posted by yasir rashdi
aadab arz he
apnee ek naee ghazal ke saath haazir huN-ajee kanjoosy choRie,manaa ke aap mujh se ache shayyer heN-likhye battaye ke kaisee lagee-yaad rakhiye"artist shouldn't b miser"

kaisa aashiq he tu a shah ke jahaaN meN khuvaar nahiN
us galee se guzra he or graibaaN taar taar nahiN

sahl he tujh ko paana magar us ke liye dushvaar nahiN
shikast kha kr jo baarha maanta kabhee haar nahiN

miltee nahin he daad-e-sukhan,hum rakhte heN pr taab-e-sukhan
dil meN jo sher uter jaaye , daad ka talabgaar nahiN

motee khayaalon ke heN pinhaaN in alfaaz ki seepiyoN meN
shairee ye tukbandee nahiN laffazee ye ashaar nahiN
bohat khoob...

wakai main aapne bohat accha likha hai .... par ye kya aap to taliyan bajwa rahe hai jabardasti ...lolllzzzzzz ... aap wakai mainn acche shayar hai ... kabhi aaiyega khaksar ko padne shayri-e-dard main ... hum bhi kuch khak alfaz likh jate hai kabhi kabhi


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