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Post Marrammat - 26th May 2006, 01:09 PM

Doston,
Hindi ke rachnakaar maan-niya Shri K N Singh ji ek rachna aapke saath baant raha hoon. Inki rachnaon se main kuch seekhney ki koshish mein laga rehta hoon. Sahi maayne mein kaha jaaye tow yeh prerna-shrot hain mere liye.

Marramaat shirshak rachna aapke saamne hai:


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26th May 2006, 02:56 PM

sahi hai bilkul...thankx for sharing something like this!


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27th May 2006, 01:11 PM

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Bahut hi umda rachna hai ye..... Kafi gehrai hai isme aur sahi bhi likha hai.

Aisi aur bhi rachnao ke ummeed me......

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27th May 2006, 09:58 PM

Red_ruchika Ji aur Rahat ji

aapka dhanyavaad karta hoon jo aapne 'Gupt' ji ki is rachna ko parha aur mehsoos kiya.

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hi - 28th May 2006, 01:22 AM

vipin ji bahut bahut shukriya ise share karne ke liye aisi rachnaaye yaha kam hi padhne ko milti hai, kuchh had tak ye shahar ki artificila life ko bayaan karti hai.
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Re: hi - 28th May 2006, 03:16 PM

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Originally posted by acharya_mj
vipin ji bahut bahut shukriya ise share karne ke liye aisi rachnaaye yaha kam hi padhne ko milti hai, kuchh had tak ye shahar ki artificila life ko bayaan karti hai.
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