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Thumbs up "MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU....." meri soch tumhare liye........ - 31st August 2006, 11:53 AM

tumare har sawal ka main tumko jawab dena chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

khus raho tum jaha bhi raho tum bas yehi main chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

tumhare liye yuhi hamesha main kuch likhna chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

yuhi main tumhare sath harroz bas baten karna chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

jab tak main jiyu tab tak main muskurana chahta hu...
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

main hu jb tk yaha main tumhe bahot hasana chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

tum dil me basa lo mera har likha hua lfz yehi main chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

tumhare har dard me main tumhare sath rehna chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

zindagi ka kuch waqt tumhare liye baki rakhna chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

tumhari har kwahis puri ho uske liye me prarthna karna chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

bas aur ab main kya kahu kuch ..bas yahi kahunga k...........
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU


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hi - 31st August 2006, 12:37 PM

dhaval appko raj ka bhut bhut pyar.......bhut umda khyaal hai.....lafzon ko acha istemaal kiya hai.....lakin technical prob. hai.....yeh nazam to hai lakin shyri ke andaaz main nahi......lakin jo ehsaas dil se nikle wo hamesha hee ache hote hai....unko techniq ka ilam nahi hota.....koshish karte raho....mehnat zaroor rang layegi.......raj......


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31st August 2006, 12:43 PM

dhaval appko raj ka bhut bhut pyar.......bhut umda khyaal hai.....lafzon ko acha istemaal kiya hai.....lakin technical prob. hai.....yeh nazam to hai lakin shyri ke andaaz main nahi......lakin jo ehsaas dil se nikle wo hamesha hee ache hote hai....unko techniq ka ilam nahi hota.....koshish karte raho....mehnat zaroor rang layegi.......raj......


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teri tarha yeh bhee mujhko aazmate hai......'veer'



hi raj aap meri post pe aaye bahot achha laga mujhe aur aapne apna sujhav bhi diya mujhe pasand aya

koisis yeh karunga ki meri har peshkas achhi ho

aapko mere har lafz pasand aaye aur aapne meri is eshkas ko pasand kiya uske liye aaoka bahot bahot shukrita

shukriya aapka bahot bahot.....


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Re: "MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU....." meri soch tumhare liye........ - 31st August 2006, 01:05 PM

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tumare har sawal ka main tumko jawab dena chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

khus raho tum jaha bhi raho tum bas yehi main chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

tumhare liye yuhi hamesha main kuch likhna chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

yuhi main tumhare sath harroz bas baten karna chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

jab tak main jiyu tab tak main muskurana chahta hu...
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

main hu jb tk yaha main tumhe bahot hasana chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

tum dil me basa lo mera har likha hua lfz yehi main chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

tumhare har dard me main tumhare sath rehna chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

zindagi ka kuch waqt tumhare liye baki rakhna chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

tumhari har kwahis puri ho uske liye me prarthna karna chahta hu
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU

bas aur ab main kya kahu kuch ..bas yahi kahunga k...........
MAIN TUMHARE BARE ME BAHOT KUCH SOCHA KARTA HU


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dear dhaval

phele to mai tumey mubarakbaad dena chahti hu ki tumney appne jazbaato ko bahut acchi tarah se shabdo mai piroya hai. aur ha main 'Rajveer" ji ke saath sahmat hu jo unhoney appko suggest kiya hai bilkul thik kaha hai. auyr mujhe yakeen hai ki tum es baat ka khayal rakhogey.

ek baar phir se bahut bahut mubarak ho. yu hi accha likhney ki koshish kartey rahogey, saflata jaroor mileygi.

tumhari didi


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31st August 2006, 01:24 PM

dear dhaval

phele to mai tumey mubarakbaad dena chahti hu ki tumney appne jazbaato ko bahut acchi tarah se shabdo mai piroya hai. aur ha main 'Rajveer" ji ke saath sahmat hu jo unhoney appko suggest kiya hai bilkul thik kaha hai. auyr mujhe yakeen hai ki tum es baat ka khayal rakhogey.

ek baar phir se bahut bahut mubarak ho. yu hi accha likhney ki koshish kartey rahogey, saflata jaroor mileygi.

tumhari didi


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aur pehle main aapko bahot bahot shukriya kehna chahta hu k aap meri post par aayi sister

aur ha aapki bat aur raj ki bat main samajh gaya aur agese kosis karunga k achhi se achhi peshkas ho shukrya aapka sisiter
aur aapko mera likha hua pasand aaya khusi hui mujhe

aap is chhhote bhai ka bahot khayal rakhti hai.....thanx sister


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hi - 31st August 2006, 01:36 PM

dhaval ji thanku. ye mujhe bahot pasand aai. aap itna sab sochte hai thanku. kal to adhi adhuro baat batai thhi, aaj sab khol diya. sach me bahot pyara likha hai aapne.

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31st August 2006, 01:41 PM

dhaval ji thanku. ye mujhe bahot pasand aai. aap itna sab sochte hai thanku. kal to adhi adhuro baat batai thhi, aaj sab khol diya. sach me bahot pyara likha hai aapne.

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Tere aane ki khabar to nahi, phir bhi tera intazaar hai....


achha laga ye janke k ye tumhepasand aaya he, ha kal maine adhuri bat ki thi tumseaur shayd adhura jawab hai yeh par kosis jarur ki haiise pura banane ki fir bhi kuch bat reh jaye towo fir kabhi.......
ummid hai mere har lafz ko tum apne dil me basa k rakhogi


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