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Love ~*Bin Tere.... - 22nd November 2007, 05:53 PM


khuwab ki chadar aurdh ke main ne raat guzari bin tere

kanch ka anchaL tham ke main ne zeast ha kati bin tere

zakham zakham sa chehra or diL toth ke reza reza hai

marne Lagi hon aoo na sajan sans ruke ab bin tere.....


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khuwab ki chadar aurdh ke main ne raat guzari bin tere

kanch ka anchaL tham ke main ne zeast ha kati bin tere

zakham zakham sa chehra or diL toth ke reza reza hai

marne Lagi hon aoo na sajan sans ruke ab bin tere.....
Assalam-O-Alaykum Neha ji...........wah bahut khoob ehsaas pesh kiye hain aapne ese hi likhte rahiye likh payengi bas ek baat kehna chahoonga font thoda chota use kijiye daad hazir hai..................


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Smile Thanks... - 24th November 2007, 01:32 AM

thanks kashif...

thank u very much 4 ur suggestion.
i will be carefull 4 the next time.
thanks again .

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salam neha! - 24th November 2007, 03:59 AM

acha likha hai aap ne mujhe aap ki poetry achi lagi.
   
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26th November 2007, 05:54 PM

waah mazaa aagaya aapki shayri padkhkar
lagta hai aapko shayri ki baarikiyon ka achi tarhaan se knowledge hai


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wah neha ji,, bahut khub likha hai aapne,, bas aise hi likhte rahiye,,
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28th November 2007, 07:02 PM

jat_indori ji aapne galti se yeah naayab words mujhe likh bheje hain plz inhein neha ko forward kar dijye kyunki she is the one who deserve such words.


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29th November 2007, 09:39 PM

Jab pyaar ki baat adhoori ho..

jab beech me thori doori ho..

jab milna bohut zaroori ho…

per milne mein majboori ho..

tum dil me yaad jaga lena..

kuch pyaar ke deep jala lena..

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Love jab pyar - 29th November 2007, 09:42 PM

Jab pyaar ki baat adhoori ho..

jab beech me thori doori ho..

jab milna bohut zaroori ho…

per milne mein majboori ho..

tum dil me yaad jaga lena..

kuch pyaar ke deep jala lena..

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UTRA THA CHAND HUMARE ANGAN ME,

PAR SIRRON KO GAWARA NA THA,

HUM TOH SITRON SE BHE BAGAWAT KAR LATE,

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khuwab ki chadar aurdh ke main ne raat guzari bin tere

kanch ka anchaL tham ke main ne zeast ha kati bin tere

zakham zakham sa chehra or diL toth ke reza reza hai

marne Lagi hon aoo na sajan sans ruke ab bin tere.....











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Love Ankhe taras gai meri .................. !! - 29th November 2007, 11:06 PM

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kis kadar byaan karoon main haalat apni ,
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har koi - 30th November 2007, 11:39 AM

Har koyi har kisi ka yaar nahi hota,

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ye to dil milne ki baat hain,

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Smile ~*~4 GuLL khana... - 1st December 2007, 05:37 PM

hi n wasalam.

thanks k apko meri poetry achi lagi

sorry 4 late reply.papers main busy hon.thats y,late hogae.
thanks again.

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Love Thanks $imi ji "SIMRAN" - 1st December 2007, 05:42 PM

hi n salam...

thanks apne reply kia.1 reply "apki 1 post par" main ne bhi kia ha aur us post par hi apke reply ka wait kar rahi hon....so...

where r u???
always b be happy dear.
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Smile ~*~4 Minchy - 1st December 2007, 05:51 PM

hi...pawan or minchy...

what ever...

i dont know ur name...
plz clear it whats ur name? main kya keh kar apko reply karon?well thanks apko meri poetry achi lagi...apki tarif ka andaz muje buhat acha laga.
thanks.

hamesha khush rahen.
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Smile ~* 4 Jit_indori ji - 1st December 2007, 06:00 PM

thanks 4 ur compliment...

well kya naam ha apka...?
kya kahon apko?

thank u 4 ur reply.
aur kia send kardia ha apne pawan ko "k jo according 2 pawan main deserve karti hon"mje send kardijiyee.

waiting...
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Love ...4 Lamha... - 1st December 2007, 06:08 PM

hi ....

thanks.
apki dad tu main ne qabool karli ab app mera shukriya qabool kar lijiyee

wese jo shairana andaz apne tarif karne k liye use kia muje wo buhat pasand ha isliye main ne bhi apko usi andaz main thanks kaha.

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Love hi.... - 1st December 2007, 06:15 PM

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wese apne mere ly kuch likha tu nahin phir bhi u have read it so thanks.
muje tu laga ap dono appas main hi 1 dosre se bat kar rahe hain.

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1st December 2007, 09:57 PM

Dard ka ehsas janna hai to pyar kar ke dekho

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2nd December 2007, 01:28 PM

hum kisi se baat nahi kar rahe hai but humne sab padha to hume bhi laga ke hum bhi reply kare aur kuch dil ke armaan hum bheje.
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3rd December 2007, 11:00 PM

Pyaar ki aanch se to patthar bhi pighal jata hai,


sache dil se sath de to naseeb bhi badal jata hai,


Pyaar ki rahon par mil jaye sacha hamsafar,


To kitna bhi gira hua insaan bhi sambhal jata hai.


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Kyun pyaar karne ki hadein hoti hein,

Kyun dil dene ki waje hoti hein,

Kyun jazbaaton ko dabana padta hai,

Kyun iss dil ko samjana padta hai,

Kyun har dil ko ye mehsoos nahin hota,

Kyun sabko ye manzoor nahin hota,

Kyun dil se dil nahin milta,

Kyun pyaar ka phool nahin khilta,

Kyun dil ke naghme dil nahin gaata,

Dil mein kya hai ye keh nahin pata,

Kya dil dene ki yahi saza hai,

Kya pyaar karne mein yahi mazaa hai?


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HELLO NEHA JI
KALAM UTHATA HOON KALLAM LIKHTA HOON
LIKHNE SE PEHLE TUMHE SALAAM KARTA HOON

KYA KHOOB DARD VRI DASTAN LIKHA HAI AAP NE

ZINDAGI NAHI MUJHE DOSTI SE PYARI
DOSTI PE HAZIR HAI JAAN HAMARI
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Smile 4 "MD sharfe ALAM" - 10th December 2007, 02:35 PM

asalamualekum n hi

thanks a lot....
tareef karne k liye shukriya....shyd reply karne main late hogae.


sorry...actually i m busy in my papers....so


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Bahut khub - 5th February 2008, 11:47 AM

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zakham zakham sa chehra or diL toth ke reza reza hai

marne Lagi hon aoo na sajan sans ruke ab bin tere.....


its getting intresting bhaut achi hai aap ki gazal

Dil se roye magar hoto se muskura baithe, yun hi hum kisi se wafa nibha baithe
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its getting intresting bhaut achi hai aap ki gazal

Dil se roye magar hoto se muskura baithe, yun hi hum kisi se wafa nibha baithe
Wo hame ek lamha na de paye, Jinke liye hum apni zindagi gawa baithe ..... kaisi lagi hamari koshish


thanks really thanksmeri itni purani post apne dhond li main tu khod bhi bhool gai thi.
apne jo kaha tha wo kar ke dikha diya.
apke sare pm bhi main ne parh liyee hain thanks.
u r so nice

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Dil se roye magar hoto se muskura baithe, yun hi hum kisi se wafa nibha baithe
Wo hame ek lamha na de paye, Jinke liye hum apni zindagi gawa baithe ..... kaisi lagi hamari koshish


wao buhat buhat khubsorat likha hai apne.
touching my heart.
feeling nice.
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thanks really thanksmeri itni purani post apne dhond li main tu khod bhi bhool gai thi.
apne jo kaha tha wo kar ke dikha diya.
apke sare pm bhi main ne parh liyee hain thanks.
u r so nice

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Aapne PM padhi to par reply nahi kiya any problem i was expecting your reply



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Khaatin hai rah-guzr, thori dooR sath chalo
bohut karra hai safr thori dooR sath chalo
tamaam umr kahaan koi sath dai-ta hai
yeh jan ta hooN magar thori dooR sath chalo
Nashe mein choor hooN mai bhi tumhein bhi hosh nahin
baRRa maza ho agar thori dooR sath chalo
yeh aik shub ki mulaqaat bhi ghaNimat hai
kise hai kal ki khabr thori dooR sath chalo
abhi to jaag rahae hein chiragh rahooN ke
abhi hai dooR sahr thori dooR sath chalo
tawaf-e-manzil- janah hamein bhi karna hai
Azim tum bhi agar thori dooR sath chalo
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Khaatin hai rah-guzr, thori dooR sath chalo

bohut karra hai safr thori dooR sath chalo
tamaam umr kahaan koi sath dai-ta hai
yeh jan ta hooN magar thori dooR sath chalo
Nashe mein choor hooN mai bhi tumhein bhi hosh nahin
baRRa maza ho agar thori dooR sath chalo
yeh aik shub ki mulaqaat bhi ghaNimat hai
kise hai kal ki khabr thori dooR sath chalo
abhi to jaag rahae hein chiragh rahooN ke
abhi hai dooR sahr thori dooR sath chalo
tawaf-e-manzil- janah hamein bhi karna hai
Azim tum bhi agar thori dooR sath chalo



very nice
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hi,really aapki shayri padhke aisa lagta hai jaise,aapke dil main bahut dard hai....bhagwan se prarthna kerta hu ki jaisa main sochta hu waisa no ho.....
aapke shabdh dil ke jhakhmo ko hara ker dete hai.........
aise hi hamare sath apne dil ka dard bantate rehna....
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aasma ke tare puchte haihamse,
"kya tumhe aaj bhi intezar hai uske laut aane ka...
or ye dil muskurake kehta hai
"muje to ab tak yakin hi nahi usake chale jane ka"
   
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Assalam alaikum
Hey neha

Who is this in photo is it you reply soon will give u comment on photo

Allah hafiz


Har Saans pe hai maut ka pehra laga hua,
Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath

Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko
Hume To Hogaya Dushwar Ek Insaan ka Milna

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Gairon se kuch gila nahi
apno se kuch mila nahi
hum wo gam ki kitaab hai aye dost
jo tumne abhi tak padha nahi

zindagi itni dard bhari kyun hai
Dard aapko hai to tkaleef hame kyun hai
mere pal pal ke khbar rakhne wale dost
Tu aaj mujhse bekhabar kyun hai


Har Saans pe hai maut ka pehra laga hua,
Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath

Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko
Hume To Hogaya Dushwar Ek Insaan ka Milna

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hi,really aapki shayri padhke aisa lagta hai jaise,aapke dil main bahut dard hai....bhagwan se prarthna kerta hu ki jaisa main sochta hu waisa no ho.....
aapke shabdh dil ke jhakhmo ko hara ker dete hai.........
aise hi hamare sath apne dil ka dard bantate rehna....
from....yash

hi yash

beautiFuL name....even i dont know the meaning of ur name but it sounds nice

hmm dukh tu sab ko hi hote hain zindagi main muje b hain aur shayad isi ly lafzoon main mehsos b ho jate hain.

but now i m okz...i dont care any more....kia karna pareshan ho kar b sub kuch tu "UPAR" se likha ata hai....BY GOD!

so its ok.
apne itna ahsas kia sach buhat acha laga park kar
apna khayal rakhiyee ga...bye


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aasma ke tare puchte haihamse,
"kya tumhe aaj bhi intezar hai uske laut aane ka...
or ye dil muskurake kehta hai
"muje to ab tak yakin hi nahi usake chale jane ka"
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Assalam alaikum
Hey neha

Who is this in photo is it you reply soon will give u comment on photo

Allah hafiz
wa salam
kese hain?
plz no comment on it!...its my favourite
this is not me...main asi nahin hoon
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