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meri jindagi -
29th January 2005, 07:32 PM
jindagi ko jitna samajna chahta hoon mein,
jindagi mujhe utna hi uljha deti hai. jindagi se jitna bhagta hoon mein, jindagi mere utne hi pas aa jati hai. jindagi ko jitna hi bhulana chahta hoon mein, jindagi mujhe utna hi rula jati hai. jindagiko jitna hi jeena chahta hoon mein, jindgi mujhe ute hi berahmi se mar jati hai. har wo cheez jo mein pana chahta hoon, jindagi mujse cheen le jati hai. jindagi mein jab bhi mein buri tarah jeetna chahta hoon chahta hoon, jindagi mujhe utni hi safai se hara jati hai. jab kabhi mein dil khol ke rona chahta hoon, ye kambhakht jindagi aansoo tak bahane nahi deti hai. jindagi mein jitna bhi marna chahta hoon mein, jindagi mujhe utna hi jeena sikha jati hai.  |
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31st January 2005, 06:16 PM
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Zindagi seep me chupa moti hai jo us moti ko pa jaye yeh zindagi usi ki hai Aap ki shayri se yeh hamein pata chala hai zindagi ko aapne bahut karib se jiya hai aansun bahut piye hai aapne sath mein gum bhi jiya hai khushi ke pal kam the shayad isliye apne yeh sher arz kiya hai bas itna kehna chahungi ki zindagi khuda ki di hui inayat hai, jaisi bhi hai uska tohfa hai, aur hum kisi bhi tohfe ko bahut hi khushi ke sath accept karte hain. aur us tohfe ko sambhal ke rakhte hain, shayad apne bahut gum hain zindagi mein par agar aap gum ko bhula kar woh chote chote pal yaad karein jismein aap khush the to aap sare gum bhul jayenge azma ke dekhiyga gum ko na yad kar khushi yad kar khushi ke palon ke age gum ke pal kam lagenge Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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10th February 2005, 09:23 AM
Wah Ghayal shayar ji, Bahut accha likha hai aapne, keep writing...
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22nd February 2005, 07:30 PM
thanks for d compliments parul.
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22nd February 2005, 07:45 PM
aare nidhi ji aapne to mujhe jine ke liye majbur kar diya.thanks for d reply.
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23rd February 2005, 02:44 PM
thanks for replyin.
but don't u believe in this that- wah kal hi kya jo kabhi aaj na ho, aur wah seena hi kya jisme dafan koi raaz na ho. |
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23rd February 2005, 02:59 PM
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24th February 2005, 06:34 PM
thank u r k gupta ji.for ur compliments.
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28th February 2005, 11:59 PM
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To us Khoobsurat wajah ke liye hi sahi Jeeye jao. Vaise itna dard kyon hai.. Dost ko bataon Yeh likhne ki wajah kya hai Thanks rohin |
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1st March 2005, 02:32 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by ghayal_shayar
[B]jindagi ko jitna samajna chahta hoon mein, jindagi mujhe utna hi uljha deti hai. jindagi se jitna bhagta hoon mein, jindagi mere utne hi pas aa jati hai. jindagi ko jitna hi bhulana chahta hoon mein, jindagi mujhe utna hi rula jati hai. jindagiko jitna hi jeena chahta hoon mein, jindgi mujhe ute hi berahmi se mar jati hai. har wo cheez jo mein pana chahta hoon, jindagi mujse cheen le jati hai. jindagi mein jab bhi mein buri tarah jeetna chahta hoon chahta hoon, jindagi mujhe utni hi safai se hara jati hai. jab kabhi mein dil khol ke rona chahta hoon, ye kambhakht jindagi aansoo tak bahane nahi deti hai. jindagi mein jitna bhi marna chahta hoon mein, jindagi mujhe utna hi jeena sikha jati hai. Hi Ghayal Shayar Ji... One of the most beautiful posts I've ever read here... I taste the nectar of the sadness and I hold you company in this night when you feel yourself alone and you enchant with a poetry to frame. Amanush...  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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1st March 2005, 06:29 PM
thank u very much rohin bhaiya,for taking the pain 2 see my posts n giving such nice compliments 2 me.
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1st March 2005, 06:35 PM
amanush ji aapne to mujhe kuch jyada hi sar par chadha diya.par for taking so much pain in visisting my thread and giving so wonderful compliments i m very very thankful 2 u.
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4th April 2005, 06:03 PM
its my humble request to everyone reading this poem dat please reply n please comment on d poem.
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i loved the simple words that u hav used u know mujhe jagjit sahab ne gayi hue gazal ki ek line yaad aayi jag ne cheena mujhse mujhe jo bhi laga pyaara I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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28th April 2005, 03:34 PM
thanks jubin, agar kisi bhi tarah meri ye kavita tumhe achcee lagi then its my pleasure.npls carry on visiting.
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28th April 2005, 05:17 PM
Ghayal ji........
apne zindagi ko jitni barikoyon se dekha..utni hi barikiyon k sath likha bhi jee khol ke...likha zindagi bare mein...k kya hai zindagi apke liye...bas itna kahungi...shabdon ko yun behne dena..behadd achha hota hai...ek sookun pane k liye! toh plz likhte rahiye...yunhi! likedd reading it! tc komal |
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28th April 2005, 05:36 PM
thank u very komal ji aapse tareef sun ke ek naya josh aa gaya.so pls do carry on visiting.
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19th May 2005, 11:54 AM
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aapne wakai bahut hi acha likha hai ab jab zindagi badi mushkil se milti hai aur tab bhi agar zindagi kuch humein sikha naa jaaye to kya fayda likhte rahiye sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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19th May 2005, 12:29 PM
sonal ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya meri panktiyoon ko pasand karne ke liye.aur aap isi tarah hausala afzai karte rahiye to hum aakhiri dum tak likhte rahenge.
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20th May 2005, 07:12 PM
jindagi ko jitna samajna chahta hoon mein,
jindagi mujhe utna hi uljha deti hai. jindagi se jitna bhagta hoon mein, jindagi mere utne hi pas aa jati hai. Hmmmm.... Nice Words...but Zindagi se kahan bhaag saka hai koi!! jindagi ko jitna hi bhulana chahta hoon mein, jindagi mujhe utna hi rula jati hai. jindagiko jitna hi jeena chahta hoon mein, jindgi mujhe ute hi berahmi se mar jati hai. WaaaaH..Bahut asardaar likha hai!! har wo cheez jo mein pana chahta hoon, jindagi mujse cheen le jati hai. jindagi mein jab bhi mein buri tarah jeetna chahta hoon chahta hoon, jindagi mujhe utni hi safai se hara jati hai. Very Well Said!!! jab kabhi mein dil khol ke rona chahta hoon, ye kambhakht jindagi aansoo tak bahane nahi deti hai. jindagi mein jitna bhi marna chahta hoon mein, jindagi mujhe utna hi jeena sikha jati hai. Waaaahh... bahut hi accha likha hai!! Hi Lucky! Bhaut hi saadgi se bahut gehre ehsaas likh hain tumne... Accha laga jis tarah se tumne bayaan kiya hai.... Mujhe bahut pasand aayi tumhari yeh rachana....Aur ehsaas...Zindagi hai mere bhai.... bahut kucch sikha jaati hai.... U dont always get what u aspire for? but have faith... U will someday get the best its has in store for u Yunhi saadgi se bayaan karte raho...meri daad tumhare saath hai...TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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20th May 2005, 07:16 PM
Ghayal_shayar ji,
bahoot kareeb se jindagi ko dekh ke likha hai aapne. isliye itane kareeb se likh paaye hai.. bahut khoob. ise padhkar mujhe apani bahut purani kavita yaad aa gayii.. jaane kab likhi thi maine.. usake kuchh lines hai.. jindagi dard hai to jindagi khushi bhi hai jindagi aansoon hai to jindagi hasi bhi hai gum to rehata hi hai jindagi me has ke jeeyo to phoolo ki mehak bhi hai kaate mil rahe hai bagiya me mujhako un kaato me ghiri ek kali bhi hai garm hawao ki chal rahi hai aandhi abhi jara thaharo sama me thand hawaye bhi hai baaki ki mujhe yaad nahi aa rahi hai kabhi yaad aayi to fir sunaungee... take care Garima |
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20th May 2005, 07:30 PM
pulkit bhaiya aake exclusive way me diye gaye reply se mujhe bahut aatmwiswas mila hai aur aako ye kalam pasand aayi ye jaan ke hausala aur aakpse tareef sun kar to mujhe aur likhne ki prerna mili.main aapse bas itna anurodh karunga ki aap aise hi humari hausala afzai karte rahen.
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20th May 2005, 07:36 PM
wah garima didi bas maza aa gaya kya khoob likha hai aapne
kata mil rahe hain bhagya me mujhko, un katoon me ghiri ek kali bhi hai. wah hum to bhai kayal ho gaye in panktiyoon ke.bas itna hi kahoonga thank u very much for sharing those wonderful lines with me.main iske liye aapka bahut-bahut shukraguzar hoon. aapka LUCKY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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zindgi ki baat kare to kya kare.... oose to bas baanhe faila kar gale lagana hai. di |
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17th June 2005, 07:39 PM
thanks didi for reading it.and i simply liked ur lines that zindagi ko gale laga lena chahiye.aise hi aate rahiye.aur humara hausala badhate rahiye.
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20th June 2005, 11:12 PM
wow kya likha hai dear v good
khuda kare yoon hi likhte raho yours friend meenu |
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21st June 2005, 10:57 AM
thanks for liking it meenu ji.aur agar aapka saath aur hausalaafzai saath rahe to hum aise apni aakhiri saans tak likhte rahenge.
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Instead of posting it all over again, I juz thought to raise it, as i was feeling to share the thought I had since skul days, and as it is the poem which got me some name over this website too...
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18th December 2012, 12:48 PM
shuruaat ke dino ki yaadein....... taish ji,,, bahot khubb kavita hai ye aapki......
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aahna ji shukriya, waise yakeenan ye shuruat ke dinoN ki kavitaa hai, par zindagi ka safar kuch isi qadar chalta rehta hai, aur usme koi bhi khaas parivartan nahiN hota hai.... umeed karta huN aapka saath aage v isi tarah yuNhi bana rahegaa.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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