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Dil ne mauka diya hi nahi...jaane kya kya na thi tamannayaain hamari....???????????.. |
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Dil ne mauka diya hi nahi...jaane kya kya na thi tamannayaain hamari....???????????.. -
15th August 2002, 06:00 AM
dosto trying to write soemting thats over ma mind for now..lets sees it make any sense or not....
dil ne mauka diya hi nahi jaane kya kya thi tamaanyeain hamari??? tanha huye ruswa huya jaane kya kya thi ruswayian hamari??? dil ka haal bata na sake unhe kaisi thi vo aahaain hamari??? khud hi roye khud hi chup kiye hum to kaisi thi vo bebasi hamari??? Parchayion ne bhi to dekho saath na diya kaisi thi vo PARCHAYAII'AAN hamari??????? huye hallat khud si hi majjor us kader kaise thi vo ghariyaan hamari????? samajh na sake haal apna kuch aisi phir kya tho vo inayataiiin hamari??? izhaar e dil hua hi nahi KAISI THI VO MOHOBBATTAIN HAMARI..... Luv Priya>> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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luvpriya -
15th August 2002, 11:05 AM
Batein to Bohat Hain...
Bataein Kya... Dard Ki Jaln Hai... Chupayen Kya... Mausum Ki Bekudhi Hai Yeh... Es Roothe Huye Mann Ko Manayein Kya... Savan Ki Pawan Baharon Mein Jee Rahe Hain Hum... Dard-e-Dil Kisi Ko Sunayein Kya... Jina-Marna Marna-Jina Reet Hai Duniya Ki... Kauf Khuda Ka Es Jagg Ko Bataein Kya... Jina Sirf Prem Walon Ka Jina Hai... Es Pagal Zamaane Ko Hum Batlaein Kya... Jina Woh Jo Dusron Ke Liye Jiye... Kudhgaraz Log Jee Ke Bi Payein Kya... |
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aks -
15th August 2002, 11:07 AM
Batein to Bohat Hain...
Bataein Kya... Dard Ki Jaln Hai... Chupayen Kya... Mausum Ki Bekudhi Hai Yeh... Es Roothe Huye Mann Ko Manayein Kya... Savan Ki Pawan Baharon Mein Jee Rahe Hain Hum... Dard-e-Dil Kisi Ko Sunayein Kya... Jina-Marna Marna-Jina Reet Hai Duniya Ki... Kauf Khuda Ka Es Jagg Ko Bataein Kya... Jina Sirf Prem Walon Ka Jina Hai... Es Pagal Zamaane Ko Hum Batlaein Kya... Jina Woh Jo Dusron Ke Liye Jiye... Kudhgaraz Log Jee Ke Bi Payein Kya... |
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16th August 2002, 02:12 AM
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=================================== DOST, Shabd nahin mil pa rahein hai tareef ke liye Varna bahut kuch likh daaltey aapki shayri ke liye. ...........Vipin =================================== =================================== 
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good -
18th August 2002, 01:58 AM
Priya
aapne bahoot acha lika hai shasheen |
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dear aks ji |
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dear aks ji -
20th August 2002, 03:09 AM
thanks a lot for likin ma sher and adding ur comments there is a line u said jeena to jeenne walo ka hota hai i think ki....
pyar me insaan so baras jee leta hai khushi deta hai gum le leta hai pyar ka jaadu bhi kya maza hai lagta hai ab to har baat ik saza hai Luv Priya>> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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dear vipinji |
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dear vipinji -
20th August 2002, 03:13 AM
dear vipin ji
thanks a lot for liking my postiing aapne kaha ki shabd nahi mil rahe tareef ke liye......  shukriya.....aapse sikh rahi hu....lots of thanks luv priya>> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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shaheenji shukriya |
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shaheenji shukriya -
20th August 2002, 03:18 AM
shaheen ji pehle to apka naam bahut acha hai
thanks a lot for liking my post in syari.com...bas dil se nikle kuch araam haain...aap samajh gayi shayad..is karke aapko pasand aaye...aapka bahut bahut shukriya aage bhi houslda badhana..... luv Priya>> ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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