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zakhm - 2nd July 2010, 11:21 AM
aadab dosto hum is parivaar main naye hai or aap ko padh padh ke hume bhi dil ke armaan lafzo main byaan karne ka dil hua h, to pesh-e-khidmat hai pawan ke kuch aashar:==============
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hujum laga tha dillasa dene walo ka kareeb mere,
ek ishara hua uska or sab tir-bittar ho gye,

khushk aankho se barsi jo do bund aansuo ki,
hum jism se leke ruh tak tarr ho gye,

waqt ne li kharvat or kya hal ho gya,
jo kbhi mere the aaj raqeebo ke ghar ho gye,

ab ye bta is samander se kese nikal payega "pawan"
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pawan sahab is pariwar me pka swagat hai...

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aadab dosto hum is parivaar main naye hai or aap ko padh padh ke hume bhi dil ke armaan lafzo main byaan karne ka dil hua h, to pesh-e-khidmat hai pawan ke kuch aashar:==============
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aapke comments ka intjaar rahega
sabar sab b-e-sabar ho gye,
jitne bhi aaine the sab pathar ho gye,

vo tha sath to dard-e-rah pe chal bhi raha tha,
uske jane se to hal bad se battar ho gye,

hujum laga tha dillasa dene walo ka kareeb mere,
ek ishara hua uska or sab tir-bittar ho gye,

khushk aankho se barsi jo do bund aansuo ki,
hum jism se leke ruh tak tarr ho gye,

waqt ne li kharvat or kya hal ho gya,
jo kbhi mere the aaj raqeebo ke ghar ho gye,

ab ye bta is samander se kese nikal payega "pawan"
yha ke sab kinare to leher ho gye
pawan bhai
radhe radhe

ahsaas achhe hain yun hi likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath

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Pawan Bhai aadaaB!

Bazm meiN aapka swagat hai.......
Khayaal achche hai aur ahsaas bhi bayani bhi achchi rahi per thodi kamzor si rahi.......
Likhate rahiye Khush rahiye.......

Apna khyaal rakiye .....
Bazm mein aate rahiye......
Khush rahiye .......
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