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17th May 2005, 12:55 PM
hi friends....for the first i've written some thing on my own....
these r not just words...... plzz tell me ur opinion ...whether it is gud or bad THE NIGHT AND THE RAIN I'm waiting for the night to arrive, Coz' it is only in the night that, I can see her in my dreams. She was once here, Those days, those times, those memories of her, I wish I could relive them once again. I wish I could live with her forever, But I know it is not to be. Now that shez gone, Here I lie waiting for the rain instead. For it can hide my tears if not my pain. |
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17th May 2005, 01:06 PM
I'm waiting for the night to arrive,
Coz' it is only in the night that, I can see her in my dreams. Wow.. beautiful thot!! She was once here, Those days, those times, those memories of her, I wish I could relive them once again. Beautifull.... I wish I could live with her forever, But I know it is not to be. Now that shez gone, Here I lie waiting for the rain instead. For it can hide my tears if not my pain. Very touchy... Classy!! Hi Karthik! I loved ur first effort... this one is really very beautifull.. hope to read more n more of u.. aise hi likhte rehna...TC.. Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th May 2005, 01:08 PM
Cool Karthik,
Me and the Rain go hand in hand.... So where there is Rain i am there....  Really very nice.... But I wish there is no pain.... Wonderful buddy.... I wish I could relive them once again. I wish I could live with her forever, Really very good... Rohin |
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Re: Night And The Rain -
17th May 2005, 01:32 PM
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na naseeb hui zameen hamein na mila aasman." |
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17th May 2005, 01:38 PM
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mera rohin ji ka aur rain ka bahut purana connection hai so jab bhi baarish hoti hai ham pahuch jate hai bahut khoob likha hai do read my signature line it is exactly in relation to u r posts last line arz hai aaapke barsaat me aisi shararat hui mere ghar ko chod kar saare sheher me barsaat hui I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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17th May 2005, 02:40 PM
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its really awesome. each word seems to be complete in itself n the best is that its beautifully expressed. thx buddy for sharing ur thoughts with us. take care n may god bless u with his finest glitters.  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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17th May 2005, 07:59 PM
hello pulkit ji,
thanks a lot for readin it....i am delighted tht some one like u has replied to my post thanks a lot i'm goin to post another one tomorro or day after hope to c u again on tht post bye take care |
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17th May 2005, 08:00 PM
hello rohin bhaiyya.....i am really happy tht u liked it
thanks a lot for encouraging me.....i'm goin to post another one soon.....hope u'll like tht one also thanks again bye take care |
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17th May 2005, 08:02 PM
hello jubin bhaiayya.....thanks a lot for ur reply....yaa the last line is similar to ur signature line.....but don no some how i cudnt find a better line than tht
ne way thanks a lot bye hope u'll read my next post also.... bye take care |
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17th May 2005, 08:05 PM
hello ruhani ji.....main bahut khush hun ki aapko yeh post achchi lagi
thanks for replyin do read my next post bye take care |
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17th May 2005, 08:06 PM
hello nidhi_friend.....sorry yaar....dont no ur name
thanks a lot replyin n readin do read my next post thanks a lot....feelin really nice tht all u ppl replied bye take care |
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17th May 2005, 10:02 PM
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It was really very Nice Keep It up Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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18th May 2005, 01:50 AM
hi karthik!
very nice...and sweet dear keep writing take care bye »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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18th May 2005, 02:00 PM
hello nidhi....thanks a lot for replyin..
hope to c u again bye take care |
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18th May 2005, 02:02 PM
hello mukhra.....i am really glad tht u liked it.
i am gonna post another one...tell me how u feel abt it thanks a lot bye take care |
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30th May 2005, 06:03 PM
karthik
bahut khoob likha hai aapne likhte rahiye aap sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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30th May 2005, 07:33 PM
wah karthik bhai ahcha likha hai aapne so pls do keep writing.
aapka LUCKY  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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30th May 2005, 07:45 PM
hello sonal ji,
i''m feelin nice tht u liked my post thanks for ur reply take care bye karthik |
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30th May 2005, 07:51 PM
hello lucky ji,
thanks for ur reply....i am glad tht u liked it take care bye karthik |
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