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Wafa kar ke dekha khafa kar ke dekha 9 29.03%
Baitha hoon kinaare pe, nazreN haiN ufaq ki or 5 16.13%
Intezaar qayaamat ki tarah barsaa hai 8 25.81%
Koi bashar tanha tanha!! 8 25.81%
Na jaane kaysi yeH majboori hai 3 9.68%
Na bhoologe vo meri kahani sun lo 8 25.81%
Barsaat bahot zor hui aaj raat bhar 6 19.35%
Bheed se nikal kar, 9 29.03%
Meri tanhayi! 9 29.03%
Teri Yaad Me Hum Akele Huye Hai 5 16.13%
Tumhari shohrat ko awaazaa na karenge 11 35.48%
Koi bhii bhookhaa na jaanaa chaahiye 9 29.03%
Jin hawaaoN meN main majboor huaa jata hooN 5 16.13%
Mera su'r chhin gia, mera saaz chhin gia 6 19.35%
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Tasveer per Tahreer... July 2014
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Thumbs up Tasveer per Tahreer... July 2014 - 8th July 2014, 09:24 PM

Aadaab arz hai DostoN

Aaj phir meiN aap sab ki Khidmat meiN haazir ho rahi hooN.. Tasveer per Tahreer July'2014 ke liye...

DostoN, is baar hame TPT ke liye kul 14 GhazaleN/NazmeiN mili haiN... maiN sab se pahle un dostoN ki shukr-guzaar huuN jinhone is silsile meN hissa liya, merii taraf se un sab ko mubaarakbaad.

MaiN un dostoN ki bhii shukr-guzaar huuN jo hamesha apne vote se achchhi Ghazal/Nazm chhun kar sab ke saamne laa rahe haiN.. dostoN, sab ki GhazaleiN/NazmeiN..yahaaN pesh hai.. ummeed hai ki sabhi dost apna qeemti vote unhe de kar unki hausila afzaai karenge...

Jaise ki humne pehle bhi mention kiya tha, is baar thode se changes hain TPT me..

1)Is baar se do catagories honge, pehla popular catagory...jiske winner ka decision polling se hoga, aur dusra critics choice..iske winner ka decision lene ke liye 2 judges ka ek panel banaya gaya hai.

2)Judges ka decision ghazal ke techniques per base rahega,aur judges ko yeh pata nahi hoga ke kisne kaunsi ghazal likhi hai...judges polling result se ek din pehle apne points sabhi ghazaloN ko denge. ...polling thread per hi......judges ke results declare karne ke baad hi polling results announce honge.

3)Is baar judges hain Zidd sahab aur Ufaq sahab. .

4) Judges panel me Zidd sahab permanent judge rahenge,... aur critics choice ka winner agli baar zidd sahab ke saath judge rahega.



1)Voting will close on 15TH JULY 2014
2) This is a public poll: other users can see the choice(s) you selected.
3)You can give your vote to more than one ghazal/nazm.



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2)Duplicate ids ko bhi neutralize kiya jayega, aur result in sab votes ko delete karke hi sunaya jayega...

Meri guzarish hai,plzz yeh saari bateiN dhyan me rakhiye..

Participants se request hai ke kisi se apni ghazal/Nazm ka zikr na kareiN,kis member ne kaunsi ghazal likhi hai yeh baat result tak raaz hi rehni chahiye.


P.s: 1)Agar koi member apne ghazal ya nazm ka judges se tabsira karwaana chahtay haiN to hame mention kar deiN,.... result ke baad,..aap chahe to thread per ya pm per bhi karwa sakte haiN..

2)Maine sabki tahreer per thode se spellings change kiye haiN,taaki koi tahreer writing style se na pehchani jaaye..PLS DONT MIND.

GOOD LUCK TO ALL..










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8th July 2014, 09:29 PM

Wafa kar ke dekha khafa kar ke dekha
Na jaane is zindagi ne kya kya kar ke dekha

Kabhi jo seene mein aag bhujne lagi thi
Na jaane kyu usko fir se hawa kar ke dekha

Zakhm bhi diye is zindagi ne mujhko
Aur kinhi lamho mein dawa kar ke dekha

Lagta hai ab kise ke ulfat ke qabil nahi raha
Na jaane zindagi ne kyu aysi kismat ada kar ke dekha

Wafa kar ke dekha khafa kar ke dekha
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8th July 2014, 09:30 PM

Baitha hoon kinaare pe, nazreN haiN ufaq ki or
SochooN kisi manzar ko, uDnaa hai falak ki or

Paayi hai jahaaN maine tumse hi muhabbat, ab
laataa hooN tere dam se, aansooN bhi palak ki or

Ulfat mein teri jaana, milti jo kashaakash thiiN
Saare wo malaal mujhko laaye hain sabaq ki or

Saath umr bitaane ke kiye toh fasaane the
Phir aaj achaanak kyuN chaldi ho chamak ki or

Ummeed kabhi ki thi, marnaa teri baahoN mein
Qaatil bhii badhaate hain ab haath halaq ki or

Sar se tere girtaa hai jab aab-e-jamaali sa
Tishnaa-labi ho kar main chaltaa hooN alak ki or

DekhooN maiN nazaare par, Dartaa hooN kahiN mujhko
Khinche na bahaareN woh ziinat-e-malak ki or
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8th July 2014, 09:30 PM

Intezaar qayaamat ki tarah barsaa hai,
Deewaana aapke deedar ko yuun tarsaa hai.
zameen jaise tarasti hai abr-e-aabi ko,
Harr lamha yunn guzraa maano arsaa hai.

Tha ek waqt ke darya dili tha mera hunar,
Jeena har lamha apni zindagi tha mera hunar,
nibhaana waada farz dosti tha mera hunar,
magar abb haal khasta aur behunar saa hai.

DastaN meri jaane shehar mein kyu aam huee,
mere hunar ke chalte zindagi badnaam huee,
akele chalte chalte zindagi ki shaam huee,
Thake hai zehn-o-badan dil bhi besabar saa hai.

Naa kahe tu mujhe apna tau koi baat nahi,
Tujhe pane ki ya takdeer ya auqaat nahi,
siwa ek khauf ke dil mein koi jazbaat nahi,
Bhuul jaayegi mujhe tu yehi ek darr sa hai.
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8th July 2014, 09:31 PM

KOI BASHAR TANHA TANHA!!

Tanhaai ka manzar bhi khud,aaye hai nazar tanha-tanha,
Tan-haai ki tasveer bana hai, koi bashar tanha-tanha!

Saagar tanha, abar tanha, garhee ufaq pe nazar tanha,
Tan-haai kay saagar mein dooba, koi bashar tanha-tanha!

YaadeiN jo milnay aateeN haiN, tan-haai de kar jaatee haiN,
Tan-haai bhulaane baitha hai, koi bashar tanha-tanha!

Naa jaane dilper kyaa beetee, tan-haai se ye na-waaqif
Tan-haai mein aa baitha hai, koi bashar tanha-tanha!
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Na jaane kaysi yeH majboori hai
Paas ho kar bhi tumse doori hai

Mil kar bhi hum tumse mil na sake
Rab jaane rab ki kya manzoori hai

TukdoN meiN ji rahe haiN hum
Ye zindagi tumse hi poori hai

Koi aur ab hame mile na mile
Bas tumhara milna zaroori hai

Aaj toh chale aao dil ki rah par
Dekho ye shaam sindoori hai

Tum na milo toh mar jayenge
Bin tere zindagi ye adhoori hai
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Na bhoologe vo meri kahani sun lo,
Ek lamhe mein simti meri jawani sun lo

Yun to kabhi mere peeche kaarwaaN na tha,
Par main akela hokar bhi itna tanhaa na tha,

Aaye the ban ke vo roshni meri zindgaani mein,
Ishq kee baarish hui thi bhari jawani mein,

Na din ka tha hosh na raato ka tha pata,
Ghar pe bhi rehta tha yaaron main laapta,

Dheere dheere mulakaaton ka silsika badne laga,
Pyaar hamara fir aur parwaan chadne laga,

Din bane maheene aur fir saal ho gaya,
Pyaar mein dono ka bura haal ho gaya,

Pyaar ke ujale mein fir raat hone lagi,
Ghaq pe unke shaadi kee baat hone lagi,

Dheere dheere vo bhi mujhse najrein churaane lage
Khat mere bina pade hee bahane lage,

Vo kuch is tarah se peecha chudane lage,
Kee yaaron hum dua mein maut maangne lage,

Aur ek din aaya kee vo juda ho gaye,
Umr bhar ke liye vo mere khuda ho gaye,

Milte hain ab vo tasveeron aur khwaabon mein,
Kabhi banke yaad nikakte hain kitaabon mein,

Vo ek nazar hee meri takdeer ho gayi,
Zindagi meri simat ke ek tasveer ho gayi,
JubaaN kahan ab haal e dil kholti hai,
Ek yehi tasveer hai jo kuch bolti hai......
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Barsaat bahot zor hui aaj raat bhar,
Maine bhi dil ki baat kahi aaj raat bhar.

Tu yaad bahot aa rahi thi aaj subha se,
KhwaaboN me baar baar dikhi aaj raat bhar.

Khaamosh rahi tu bhi hamesha ki tarah se,
Tasweer teri baat kari aaj raat bhar.

Jo ho sake to tum hi liye aao ujaalaa,
Shamma ye baar baar bujhi aaj raat bhar.

Shab bhar to roz jaagta hun yooN hi faaltuu,
Tasweer pe tahreer likhi aaj raat bhar
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8th July 2014, 09:32 PM

Bheed se nikal kar,
MahfiloN se bachkar,
Chupne ko teri yaad se,
Bachne ko tere khayaal se,
Aksar tanha waqt bitati hooN maiN,
Is sunsaan jagah aati hooN maiN,
JahaN koi na ho jo tera zikr kare,
Dekhkar aankheiN mere dard ko pahchaan le,
Par sukoon nahi pati hooN maiN.

LahreiN sagar ki shor machati haiN,
Jaise mujhe chidhati haiN.

Badal bhi bankar kali ghata darata hai,
Jane kyoN bin mausam baras jata hai.

Kya karooN ab ki bas tu aye,teri yaad nahi.
Bula sakooN awaz dekar,
Ab ye bhi to ISHQ me haal nahi.

Bheed se nikal kar,
MahfiloN se bachkar,
Chupne ko teri yaad se,
Bachne ko tere khyaal se.

Aksar tanha waqt bitati hooN,
sunsaan si is jagah pe aati hooN
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8th July 2014, 09:32 PM

MERI TANHAAYI

Aaj Phir Thaam Ke Main Yaad Ka Daman Tanha
Aa Gaya Huun Usi Saahil Pe JahaN Par Yaaro
Uski Qurbat Me Guzaaray The Hazaaron Lamhay

Yaad Hai Mujhko abhi Mausam-e-Sarma Ki Wo Dhoop
Jiski Shiddat Se Thi Pighli Kabhi Jazbat Ki Barf
Us Ne Sar Rakh Ke Mere Shanay Pe, Kaha Tha Mujh Se

" Chahay Dunia Ke Suno Laakh Hee Mausam Badlen
Meri Chahat Ka Ye Mausam Nahi Badlay Ga Kabhi
Me Zamanay Ki Tarha Tum Ko Jo Tanha Chorruun..
Meri KhushiyoN ko Bhi Phir Chaat Le Gham Ki Deemak "

Mujh Pe Halaat Ki aandhi Jo Chali Phir Yaksar
Wo Bhi Dunia Ki Tarha Bhoool Ke Waaday Apne….
Raah Me Chhod Gai Thi Mujhay Bilkul Tanha

Sochta Huun Me YahaN Beth Ke Tanha Yaaro
MausamoN Ka To Yunhi Naam Hai Badnaam Yahan
Log Mausam Se Bhi Pehlay Hain Badaltay Tevar….
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Teri Yaad Me Hum Akele Huye Hai
Soch Zara Mera Kuch Hum Ghayal Huye Hai,

Tu Kabhi Aati Hai Kabhi Jaati
Rozz Shubah-o-Shaam Badnam Huye Hai,

Jab Hote Hai Tanhai Tanhaiyon Me
Aasma Me Baadal Bhi Kaale Huye Hai,

Dekh Meri Aankhon Ko Aankhon Se
Jaane Kitne Din Mehmaan Huye Hai,

Aaj Bhi Hu Akela Tere Bin Ae_Sanam
Kabhi To Aa Hum Fanaah Huye Hai...!
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Tumhari shohrat ko awaazaa na karenge
Sitam seh leiN ge, tamashaa na karenge

awaaza: report about reputation.

Bhale talkh lafzon ke nishtar barsaao
ZubaaN per uff magar laayaa na karenge

Wo phool sa khilta hai raQeeboN ke darmiyaaN!
Hum door se dekheN ge, paas jayaa na kareNge

Khoo un ki jo thehri hai boht sard mizaaji
Hum wehshat-e-ishq ke lahaq, takazaa na karenge

khoo: habit
lahaq: used to

Khaar hi khaar kyuN na rakh do hamari raah per
Zakhm khud seencheN ge, dikhayaa na karenge

Apne ashkoN ko samjhaa liya hai aaj saahil per!
Badal jo haiN barasne ko, woh ab barsaa na karenge
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Koi bhii bhookhaa na jaanaa chaahiye
Bas khudaa se ye manaanaa chaahiye ~

Hai samandar shant bhii hai tez bhii
Tab lehar se dar bhi jaanaa chaahiye ~

Bas zaroorat kaa thikaanaa chahiye
Pet ko do baar khaanaa chaahiye ~

ChaaNd taare haiN sabhii is raat se
Raat ko bas raat aanaa chaahiye ~


Mashk se jab manzileiN miltii nahiN
ManziloN ko khud banaanaa chaahiye ~


Hai khudaa jo maan lo, hai wo khudaa
Hai khudaa to sir jhukaanaa chaahiye ~

Haar hai! hai jeet bhii aage magar
Haar ke bhii jeet jaanaa chaahiye ~
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1)TPT ke rules ke mutabiq, jin members ki post count less than 50 hai, woh vote nahi de sakte haiN, agar unhone vote kiya bhi, tou unka vote neutralize ho jayega..( Exception :agar kisi member ne TPT me hissa liya hai lekin unke post count 50 se kam hain to wo vote kar sakte hain)
2)Duplicate ids ko bhi neutralize kiya jayega, aur result in sab votes ko delete karke hi sunaya jayega...




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Pyaare doston...

aap sab se kiye vaade ke anusaar hamne polling thread post kar diyaa hai, ab aaap logon se hamaari iltijaa hai ke bhaari se bhaari maatra me aage aayen aur apna keemtii vote den....

kuch baaten dhyaaan dene yogya...

1) kripya bhedchaal waali condition na bannne deN.. aapka vote hai aapki samajhdaari hai... ye na dekhte hue ke sabne kise vote diya hai use ham bhi use vote karen.. agar aisii maansiktaa hai to badal dene yogya hai...

2) saari ghazalon ya kavitaaa ko pahle shaant man se padh leN fir apnaa keemti vote aapke sabse pasandeeda shayri ko den... bahot se log uupar ki 2, 3 shayri padhkar bhi kabhi kabhii poora na padhte hue jaldi me kisi ek ko vote de dete hain... agar aisaa ho raha hai to wo bhi chintajanak vishay hai... kyonki bahot se acche acche kalaam wahaan chupe hote hain jahaan kisii ki nazar nahii jaa paaatii...

isliye sab ko padhen fir decision len...

3) Apart from mods, dusre members se ham ye guzaarish karte hain ke aap apna votes sirf us kavita ya shaayri ko den jo aapko real me sabse acchii lagii.. multiple votings allowed hai iska katai ye matlab nahi ke mostly har entry ko vote kiyaa jaae , ye niyam ke viruddh hai.... aur har acche shaayar se injustice.

ummeed hai meri kahii baaaton paar aaap sab gaur karenge aur acche shaayar aur shaayrii ki behtarii ke baare me sochenge.....

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correct Shaad bhai, ek bat or kuchh log yun hi karte hain ki poll par ek line hi padhkar akkad bakkad bambe bo or so me laga dhaagaa.. jispe khatam hua uspe tick kiya ..mera anurodh hai ye bhi na kareN .. jo post aapko sabse achhi lage use vote deN bhale hi ek vote deN par man se den.

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Tasleemaat bhaaeeo wa behno.... I have utilised my SDC demlocratic right of voting.... and for the first time I have selected more than one but not all.... reason...... in my personal viewpoint was the relevance to the picture.... however if I had a choice of choosing the most beautifully written piece regardless of the relevance,then my choices would have been surely bit different. Every single one of he entries has its own special charm and allure and a story.... Goodluck to All and Best Wishes too!!


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Sabse pehle toh sabhi pratiyogiyon ko mera All the Best..........

Mujhe Sabhi rachnaaayein bohut achi lagi aur sab hi dil ko chuu gayi, magar kuch tasveer se zyada mel kha rahi thi aur kuch kam bas usi ko dhyaan me rakh kar vote diya hai.

Ek Sujhaav : mere jaise kuch log aur bhi honge jinhe urdu kam samajh aati hai toh agar aap log istemaal kiye urdu lafazon ka arth kavita ke saath hi bhej dein to humara gyaan bhi badega aur faisla karne mein bhi asaani hogi.

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Maine bhi dil ki baat kahi aaj raat bhar.

Tu yaad bahot aa rahi thi aaj subha se,
KhwaaboN me baar baar dikhi aaj raat bhar.

Khaamosh rahi tu bhi hamesha ki tarah se,
Tasweer teri baat kari aaj raat bhar.

Jo ho sake to tum hi liye aao ujaalaa,
Shamma ye baar baar bujhi aaj raat bhar.

Shab bhar to roz jaagta hun yooN hi faaltuu,
Tasweer pe tahreer likhi aaj raat bhar

Just fell in love with this one........ but sadly could not bring myself to vote for it! My reps are reserved for it as soon as the comp ends....

Khamosh rahi tu bhi hamesha ki terha se,
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Sub'hanAllah! Killer shayr haye... wish I could buy it off!!


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Just fell in love with this one........ but sadly could not bring myself to vote for it! My reps are reserved for it as soon as the comp ends....

Khamosh rahi tu bhi hamesha ki terha se,
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Sub'hanAllah! Killer shayr haye... wish I could buy it off!!

Arre!...yeh kya baat huyi bhaijaan. ..kahin per nigahen. .kahin per nishana...

Ab yeh ghazal pasand aayi thi. .to isay vote kyun nahi diya aapne...

kahin jald baazi me to vote nahi de diye aapne.......lolzz




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1)TPT ke rules ke mutabiq, jin members ki post count less than 50 hai, woh vote nahi de sakte haiN, agar unhone vote kiya bhi, tou unka vote neutralize ho jayega..(Exception :agar kisi member ne TPT me hissa liya hai lekin unke post count 50 se kam hain to wo vote kar sakte hain)

2)Duplicate ids ko bhi neutralize kiya jayega, aur result in sab votes ko delete karke hi sunaya jayega...




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As far as voting is concerned you cannot influence voters choice infact it can alienate members from voting.

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lol....akkad bakkad bambe bo (hawa me teer mat maro ) you mentioned 'kuch log' pls be more specific, you are indirectly implying we all members are not fair voters.
With due respect to all the voters. ..we don't have any intention to offend anyone or hurt anyones feelings...

These are just routine reminders...to avoid biased voting. ..

@Naaz you are an old member of this site...you are aware of few bad experiences in the past. ..so pls don't get emotional with these announcements

Please don't get offended friends. ..nothing personal here....these are just routine reminders...




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lol....akkad bakkad bambe bo (hawa me teer mat maro ) you mentioned 'kuch log' pls be more specific, you are indirectly implying we all members are not fair voters.
koi specific mai kaise keh du Naaz ji ...
mai kitna is forum par aata hu ... 2012 se aaj tak 9 post hai meri..
itna active nahi hu mai ki kisi ko bhi specifically nam lu ...
ek general bat bol raha hun....


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Ab yeh ghazal pasand aayi thi. .to isay vote kyun nahi diya aapne...

kahin jald baazi me to vote nahi de diye aapne.......lolzz
AsSalaamAlaikm Sis,
array Sis... yay wo baat haye jo mayn apnay pahlay post mayn oopar kah chuka hoon... i.e. all the entries are simply awesome.... but my vote goes to what 'I' personally view as the one bearing most relevance to the pic.... after all its Tasveer pe tehreer not "whats your favourite tehreer" or which one is most beautiful tehreer comp. Sis! Alhamdulillah nigahayn aur nishana dono sahee spot par hayn... hence the vote......


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Sorry to intervene but i dont think ghazal lovers need this piece of advice.

As far as voting is concerned you cannot influence voters choice infact it can alienate members from voting.

Fair voting is subjective so forcing your view is incorrect

Hello Naaz, sorry for replying late.. just a oneliner for you ...

To create objections and to handle all objections is quite differ...


we were just reminding the things which may be wrong in terms of biased voting and for those who are doing these things intentionally... not for those who are following their responsibility in a right manner.....

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14th July 2014, 12:39 PM

Please vote friends. ..tomorrow is the last day of voting......




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Dear friends

Due to some unavoidable circumstances we will have to disqualify the last ghazal

That is


Mera su'r chhin gia, mera saaz chhin gia.

Please bear with us. ......




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First of all I wish to congratulate each & every participant...regardless who wins..who loses......as they say ..participation is more important than winning.....no more beating about the bush....maximum marks limit is 10 ...marks achieved by members are as under....

Wafaa karke dekha = 4

Baitha hu kinaare par = 7

Intezaar qayaamat ki tarah = 6

Koi bashar tanhaa tanhaa = 5

Na jaane kaise ye doori = 5

Na bhulenge WO meri Kahani = 3

Barsaat bahut zor huyi = 6

Bheed se nikalkar = 5

Aaj phir thaam Ke main = 8

Tumhari shoharat ko = 5

Teri yaad me ham = 4

Koi bhi bhooka na = 7

Jin hawaao me majboor = 9

.................let me add that marking system was based upon prosody &
RhetOric of Urdu poetry..........& I tried my best to keep every possible aspect in mind while judging........

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14th July 2014, 10:26 PM

dosto,
jaise ufaq sahab ne points diye hai usi tarah mai bhi points de raha hu.
mere kuch criterias hain, jispar maine marking ki hai.

ek breif uske baare me yaha chaspa raha hu.

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SCORING SYSTEM, on a scale of 10

~All perfectly metered ghazal awarded 3 default point

~All perfectly metered ghazals with hindi meter will be awarded 2.5 default points.

~very small infraction of meter will be awarded 2.5 points/hindi meter 2 points.

~consistent confusion of 2 similar but different meters in ulaa and sani will get 2 points if individual lines are totally perfect

~unsucessful attempts in meter with major weaknesses will be awarded 1.5 point by default

( i beleive that if the sher is in meter then all tecnical stuff is taken care off, barring minor defects(aibs)...so giving seperate points that is maximum 3 of ten points possible takes care of technicals substantially( except minor aibs or so called aibs)
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after adjusting these 3 points

=all shers will be graded on a scale of seven now , whether it is metered or not

=on the scale of 7 ,the macro criteria will be grammar , thought and adaigi with no emphasis on prosodical tecnic and meter.
unmetered shers will be treated at par now with metered shers on the scale of 7

=at micro level ,the newness of thought, wordplay and figures of speech like metaphors ,personifications will be given premium .

the scale will me maximum 7.

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at the end the first part(prosodical which has maximum 3 points) will be added to the rhetorical part , which carries maximum 7 points.

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the marking is loaded towards rhetoric , that is maximum 7 point out of ten( rhetoric means motifs, thought,and adaigi)

all shers are graded and points given(from 1-7) and the total points is divided by the no of shers(averaged)
this average is added to the prosodical part to give the final result.

the technical part or the prosodical part carries a maximum 3 points

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so members who have not used meters are marked on a scale of 7 . so seee your scores accordingly, in that light. less points does not mean less talent, in fact it may mean more, just if tecnic is applied, you would have won actually.

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i congratulate all members who have taken part and who have voted.






Wafaa karke dekha = 2.1

Baitha hu kinaare par = 5.35

Intezaar qayaamat ki tarah = 6.25

Koi bashar tanhaa tanhaa = 5

Na jaane kaise ye doori = 2.75

Na bhulenge WO meri Kahani = 2.25

Barsaat bahut zor huyi = 6.5

Bheed se nikalkar = 3

Aaj phir thaam Ke main = 7.9

Tumhari shoharat ko = 3

Teri yaad me ham = 1.5

Koi bhi bhooka na = 4.85

Jin hawaao me majboor = 6.9

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ab ufaq sahab aur zidd e points a total karke zainyji result declare karengi.
and he will be the winner

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ek last baat...ye gazal 'barsaat bahut zor hui aaaj raat bhar' me maine liberty li hai 1 special point dene ki meri taraf se, sirf us ghazal ki kaifiyat ke liye...for the sheer enjoyment it provided.otherwise the point was 5.5....ab vo ghazal winner nahi hai isliye ummed hai aisi liberty lene ke liye aap sab mujhe muaaf kar denge.

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14th July 2014, 11:23 PM

Can we comment here? Mods answer please otherwise delete this post by me ......

Zidd bhaee, Ufaq bhaee... Sub'hanAllah kya paarkhi nazr aur ilme shayri ka fahm ka namoona paysh kiya haye aap dono nay apnay fayslaon mayn... aap dono ka bayhad mashkoor hoon jo apna bayshqeemtee waqt laga kar is koshish ko kaamyaab kiya!! Aur saath he... sabsay pahlay every single participant ko personal Thank You and Congratulations kahna chahoonga jo itnee haseen wa jameel tehreeron say hamayn nawazaa aur lutf ataa kiya!!





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Zidd bhai I agree with you 100 percent regarding your opinion about that beautiful tehreer and the entertainment it continues to provide......


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