koi nahi..

[Dilwale_Sanam]

Koi nahi hai apna abb to, zindgi viran hai
Ansuo mein gujerti meri abb to her sham hai
Pite hai usko her pal jisse thi nafrat kabhi
Dard leker ji rahe hai aur hatho mein jaam hai
Koi nahi hai hall puchne wala tanha ho gaye hai hum
Sirf rona aur yadd kerna unhe, aur nahi kuch kaam hai...

[guriya82]

u write so good so emotional u made me cry when i read this post i felt that this happen same with me and it hurts alot i was trying to be strong but when i read ur post i couldn't control myself i started crying u r too good in writing emotional ones everyone in this world is same result of every love story is the same judai judai judai
keep writing bbye
take care of urself
guriya

[Dilwale_Sanam]

thank you guriya ji

Likhte rahe hum zindgi bhar gar koi padne wala ho
De denge yeh jaan bhi tumko bus ek bar mang lo
Kash hota humare dard ka eshass unhe bhi kuch
Mer ker bhi ji sakta hai sunny ger koi sath dene wala ho

I just write whatever i feel..............thanks once again

[sweet_nashaa]

wah kya baat hain dilwale ji. I liked it so much. Guriya was right...it is really very emotional.

Dil ki daastaanon ko kalam se milaana koi aapse seekhe.

Wah...jitni taareef karu, kam hain.


Likthe rehiyega.

Amrita

[Dilwale_Sanam]

Thanks Amrita ji

Hum to kuch nahi likhna to humrar khwab hai
Yeh humare bol nahi bus dil ki awaaz hai

thanks a lot

[nehakhan]

hi sunny

vow this is really great kisiki judai aue na milne ka dard har lafaz main hai.

ur poems always touch the heart and can make any one very emotional.

i hope u keep on writing
take care
bye

[Dilwale_Sanam]

Thanks Neha ji

I am not a writer or anything its just..........
"kisi ke pyar, phir judai ne likhna sikha diya,
Hume to jine ki tamanna thi unhone merna sikha diya"

Kash hota unhe bhi dard itna hi, to shayad sath hote hum
Har din holi raat diwali hoti kabhi na hota hume koi aur gam

thanks everyone for liking and suporting my writing

I will keep writing untill i have this heart in my body........

love ya all.................SUNNY

[Ek_Deewani]

baqeya hai..... apney bahut khoob likha hai...... magar abb yeh toh wohe janta hai jiskey key leya likha hai........ ki yeh ketna such hai aur ketna .... kheir..... app toh kammaal ki cheez hai jhooth ko be such bana daitey hai... yeh shaiere hai he aise cheez...... app ke toh jetne tareef ki jaye kum hai sunny je..

[Dilwale_Sanam]

"sach nahi jante jhoot hi atta hai unhe
dil humara tod diya jaan di thi jinhe
pyar nahi woh fareb kerte hai sirf
hai abb bus yehi duwa pyar aw jaye unhe"

I am nothing for her, i was never anything for her..........I knew that i am unlucky but i didn't know someone would do this to me and break my heart forever.............

"kyo kiya wiswasghat, kyo ki bewafai
Pyar kerne ki kisiko humne hai yeh saza payi"

[Ek_Deewani]

lol...... tusi fir ......... koi bath nahin sunny je yeh duniya hai he aise.... faraibe..... dokeybazzzz.

kheir........ merey sath be kuch aisa he hai .... jisey main pyar kurte huin woh be mujhey dokebazzz samjhta hai...... woh be mujhsey pyar nahin kurta...... abb toh mujhey be yakeeeeeeeen sa ho geyaaaaa haiiiii...ki main uskey leye nahin huin....

[Dilwale_Sanam]

Kabhi lagta hai woh humpe jaan dete hai,
Kabhi lagta hai woh humari jaan le lenge,
Sach kya hai yeh to Rubb hi jane mager
Hum unki khusi ke liye Jaan bhi de denge.

Love is hard..................but i love you ek deewani or my kamal.....from the bottom of my heart.

"mere rom rom mein ek hi cheez samai hai,
Woh meri jaan, meri sanam harjai hai"

[Ek_Deewani]

tuhanu ki lagda main nai karde....? I love you toooo meri jaan

[Dilwale_Sanam]

Unper wiswas na hota to jane kab ke mar gaye hote,
Unki yaad mein uthker yun hum ratto ko na rote,
Har mann lete aur bhoolker unko mazze se sote,
Lekin ji rahe hai tere pyar ki badolat,
Jante hai judaiyo ke din hai bahoot choote"

I love you sooooo much meri jaan

[Ek_Deewani]

i love u too...