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tum bin - 23rd September 2004, 03:46 PM

Chand ghante bitane mushkil hai tum bin..
puri zindgi ko kaise bitaye...

lamha-lamha sisakta hai tum bin..
is dil ko kaise behlaaye..

tumare saanche me dhal kar sawar jaye ye badan..
aisi baho.n ka sparsh kaise paaye..

tum dil me ho..magar doori hai tum bin..
tumare vazood ko asliyat kaise banaaye..

kalpnao ki diwaro se sir peetTe hai tum bin..
sacchai ka jama kaise pehnaaye..

ru-b-ru ho jao ab u rehna mushkil hai tum bin..
varna udas ko dharkna kaisi sikhaye..


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23rd September 2004, 04:59 PM

udas ji khoob

nahi aas ab aur jeene ki...
aankhon se roj tera rasta dekhta hu...
aayega tu ye mera dil kehta hai....
naseeb ki lakeero main tera chehra dekhta hun...
ki bichad na jaye sanse meri mere shareer se..
har sans main tadapti aah dekhta hun...
tu itna na guman kar ki main hi hun deewana tera..
tere pyar main bhi main apna naam dekhta hun...

udas ji hinta na karo jaldi hi aapka intzar khatam hoga.... dua karenge .... apna khayal rakhiyega


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Re: tum bin - 23rd September 2004, 05:05 PM

MOHTARMA UDAAS JI
aapki shayri ke khazane se nikla ek aur beshkeemti gauhar...bahoot khoob!!!yeh sher behad pasand aaya...


tumare saanche me dhal kar sawar jaye ye badan..
aisi baho.n ka sparsh kaise paaye..

kalpnao ki diwaro se sir peetTe hai tum bin..
sacchai ka jama kaise pehnaaye..

meri daad kubool kijiye,,muaafi chahta hoon aaj masroofiyat ke chalte bahoot deir se aa saka aapke page par,..(muafi mangne ka bura na maaniyega plzz)
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Re: tum bin - 24th September 2004, 01:25 AM

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Chand ghante bitane mushkil hai tum bin..
puri zindgi ko kaise bitaye...

lamha-lamha sisakta hai tum bin..
is dil ko kaise behlaaye..

tumare saanche me dhal kar sawar jaye ye badan..
aisi baho.n ka sparsh kaise paaye..

tum dil me ho..magar doori hai tum bin..
tumare vazood ko asliyat kaise banaaye..

kalpnao ki diwaro se sir peetTe hai tum bin..
sacchai ka jama kaise pehnaaye..

ru-b-ru ho jao ab u rehna mushkil hai tum bin..
varna udas ko dharkna kaisi sikhaye..

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Bahut khoob Di.. bahut acha likha hai aapne...

sach hai unke bina kahan dil chain paata hai... unhe paake hi yeh khilkhilaata hai.. woh door jaayein to murjha jaata hai.. aur paas aayein to khushi se chehak jaata hai..

Bahut khoob... aise hi likhte raho..

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24th September 2004, 01:56 PM

Hi Udas Ji (urf S....... s..... s....a)

Hmmmm, Ab kya kahen. Lafz hi nahi miltey ab taareef karney kay liye. Bohot hi pyaara likha hai. Bas u hi likhtey rahiye.


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24th September 2004, 02:11 PM

is baar main late ho gayi......
bahut accha likha hain sunitajee......................

tum dil me ho..magar doori hai tum bin..
tumare vazood ko asliyat kaise banaaye..

kalpnao ki diwaro se sir peetTe hai tum bin..
sacchai ka jama kaise pehnaaye

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25th September 2004, 01:11 PM

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LAGTA HAI SAB MEENU DI KI TAREH GOONGE HOTE JAA RAHE HAI..

SORRY MUJHE KUCHH ACCHA NAHI LAGA TUMARA U JAWAAB..


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25th September 2004, 01:16 PM

[QUOTE]Originally posted by sacccha_pyar
[B]udas ji khoob

nahi aas ab aur jeene ki...
aankhon se roj tera rasta dekhta hu...
aayega tu ye mera dil kehta hai....
naseeb ki lakeero main tera chehra dekhta hun...
ki bichad na jaye sanse meri mere shareer se..
har sans main tadapti aah dekhta hun...
tu itna na guman kar ki main hi hun deewana tera..
tere pyar main bhi main apna naam dekhta hun...

Kunal ji hamesha ki tareh yaha aapne fir se ek umda jawaab diya hai..

dil khush ho jata hai aapki jawabi shayri par k...aur intzaar rehta hai isiliye aapki replies ka...bahut gehrai se paker lete ho meri her gazal ko...acchha lagta hai...thanx...u hi hausla barate rehna...

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Re: Re: tum bin - 25th September 2004, 01:20 PM

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MOHTARMA UDAAS JI
aapki shayri ke khazane se nikla ek aur beshkeemti gauhar...bahoot khoob!!!yeh sher behad pasand aaya...


tumare saanche me dhal kar sawar jaye ye badan..
aisi baho.n ka sparsh kaise paaye..

kalpnao ki diwaro se sir peetTe hai tum bin..
sacchai ka jama kaise pehnaaye..
-MANOJ
Manoj ji aap hamare kisi sher ki tareef karain aur ham itraai na aisa nahi ho sakta...ha.n sach hi to hai...jab ham aap jaise diggajo ki tareef sunta hai to sir fakr se utth jata hai...main apni barai nahi kar rahi...ha.n itna batane ki koshish kar rahi hu ki kitna acchha lagta hai, kitni khushi, kitna sakoon milta hai aapki tareef pa ker....ek safal koshish si mehsoos hoti hai...ab ye baat alag hai ki aap kitni gehrai se tareef karte hai...(bura mat manNa pls.) kul mila kar bahut acchha lagta hai...thanx u hi hausla barate rahiye..

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Bahut khoob Di.. bahut acha likha hai aapne...

sach hai unke bina kahan dil chain paata hai... unhe paake hi yeh khilkhilaata hai.. woh door jaayein to murjha jaata hai.. aur paas aayein to khushi se chehak jaata hai..

Bahut khoob... aise hi likhte raho..

~Priya
ha.n priya yahi to pyar hai....jisme ....jeena bhi mushkil...marna bhi mushkil....

ab tak ham khuda se apne paas bulane ki dua karte the..
aaj do pal unke saath bitane ki dua karte hai...

kya ajeeb dastaan hai na pyar ki....
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25th September 2004, 01:24 PM

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Hi Udas Ji (urf S....... s..... s....a)

Hmmmm, Ab kya kahen. Lafz hi nahi miltey ab taareef karney kay liye. Bohot hi pyaara likha hai. Bas u hi likhtey rahiye.
bas salim ji...

roop aur meenu di ki tareh aap ko bhi goonga pan acchha lagne laga...
kya baat hai. bhai sab k dilo per meenu di raaj kiye jaati hai...door door reh kar bhi apni fitrat diye jaati hai....anyways...thanx for coming here...

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25th September 2004, 01:26 PM

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is baar main late ho gayi......
bahut accha likha hain sunitajee......................

tum dil me ho..magar doori hai tum bin..
tumare vazood ko asliyat kaise banaaye..

kalpnao ki diwaro se sir peetTe hai tum bin..
sacchai ka jama kaise pehnaaye

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Mausam ji......MERI PYARI ANKHO WALI MAUSAM...Kaisi ho..

acchha laga aapko ye sher pasand aaye....late aaye to kya..aaye to mere liye yahi kaafi hai...

sach mausam ji...yahi to pyar hai....aur intzaar k lamhe....
ki....

tumare pyar ki baate...mujhe jeene nahi deti.....

theek kaha na...

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26th September 2004, 12:37 AM

helooo..........main acchi hoon..............apka aur mera logo ek sa nahin lagta????1eyes and 2eyes......

waise itna accha likha hain..reply to dena hi tha.......

smile always....
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26th September 2004, 12:52 AM

Chand ghante bitane mushkil hai tum bin..
puri zindgi ko kaise bitaye...

lamha-lamha sisakta hai tum bin..
is dil ko kaise behlaaye..

tumare saanche me dhal kar sawar jaye ye badan..
aisi baho.n ka sparsh kaise paaye..

tum dil me ho..magar doori hai tum bin..
tumare vazood ko asliyat kaise banaaye..

kalpnao ki diwaro se sir peetTe hai tum bin..
sacchai ka jama kaise pehnaaye..

ru-b-ru ho jao ab u rehna mushkil hai tum bin..
varna udas ko dharkna kaisi sikhaye.....hmmmm sach.....par kyaa karu mai tao saat samndar par kar k itnaa duur chlaa aaya warna kyaa baat hai....itni muskil baat bhii nahi thi...

merii achii udas....kya tum ko nahi lagtaa kii tum jhutii mutii kii udas ho.......yaar tum naa pyaar par achii achii baate likhaa karoo yu udas hotii ho naa tao sach mai mujhe kuch kuch hota hai........
bhai mazaak nahi kar raha hu.....achaa achaa mat manoo..mai jaata hu...par jate jate ache kalaam likhne par meri taraf se thodii sii daad tao kabul kar hii lo......tumhara hii.....udas saa ek sanju..


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muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame..

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27th September 2004, 09:43 AM

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helooo..........main acchi hoon..............apka aur mera logo ek sa nahin lagta????1eyes and 2eyes......

waise itna accha likha hain..reply to dena hi tha.......

smile always....
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ha.n behen ye baat sahi hai...eyes hi dono ka awtaar hai...jab saari baat aankhe karne me kaamyaab hai to kya jaroorat hai chehra dikhane ki...karti hai na aapki aur meri aankhe saari baate.n........????????

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27th September 2004, 12:50 PM

I am sorry…aapko acah nahin laga…lekin di..jab kuch kaha na jaye toh usse kaise kaha jaye??…anyways m sorry once again.

Abb tabhi reply doongi aapki post par jab mere paas shabd honge..philhaal chalti hoon…m sorry

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Abb na aana ho payaega phir shayad

Chalti hoon..take care


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I am sorry…aapko acah nahin laga…lekin di..jab kuch kaha na jaye toh usse kaise kaha jaye??…anyways m sorry once again.

Abb tabhi reply doongi aapki post par jab mere paas shabd honge..philhaal chalti hoon…m sorry

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Majak ban gaye hum shayad
Ja rahe hain teri mehfil se
Abb na aana ho payaega phir shayad

Chalti hoon..take care
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27th September 2004, 01:23 PM

di....m not ok..aapko toh pata hai...m really not ok..pls mujhe maaf kar dena pls...


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