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woh phhuul khuch aur the !! - 21st March 2004, 08:16 AM

woh phuul kuch aur the , jin per bhaware mandarate the
hum to woh sukhe phuul hai ..jo mitthi mein mil jayenge”

kyun maange logo se hum ek pal ki nazar
jis ne dekha hame .. ek sawal banaya hame

har shaam suraj ki kirno ne jab mujhe jalaya hai
mere badalte rango mein tujhko jeevan samajh mein aaya hai
har us tanhaai mein ..tera saath nibhaya hai
tere galo ko chu kar ... ansuu ko girne se bachaya hai

aaj wahi haatho ne ...thor kar dali se
mujhe mithi mein milaya hai
bahut kaante hai satth tumhare ...
yeh ilzzam lagaya hai ..

mithi mein mil kar bhi ..
tere charno mein reh jaungi ...
jahan jahan tum jaoge ..
khushbu waahan barsaaungi .. !!!!


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21st March 2004, 10:26 AM

Shaloooo...Achha tau ye saB likha jaa raha hai...thik hai thik hai.....sochte hai hum bhii kuch ap ki baat samjh kar...kuch bura sa reply kar de...

woh phuul kuch aur the , jin per bhaware mandarate the
hum to woh sukhe phuul hai ..jo mitthi mein mil jayenge” ....hey sunno bhaware hai naa woh tau bewafa hote hai...aaj yaha kal wahan....tau kyaa bura jo tanha rahe...binna baat ka dard kyun khaRiden...naa

kyun maange logo se hum ek pal ki nazar
jis ne dekha hame .. ek sawal banaya hame...logo ka kya woh tau kuch bhii kehate hai....sawal ko sawal hi rahne do koyii jawab na banno.....

har shaam suraj ki kirno ne jab mujhe jalaya hai
mere badalte rango mein tujhko jeevan samajh mein aaya hai
har us tanhaai mein ..tera saath nibhaya hai
tere galo ko chu kar ... ansuu ko girne se bachaya hai.....yaha ek baat kahen...neki kar aur dariya mai daL...baki sab upaR wale kai upar chhod do....

aaj wahi haatho ne ...thor kar dali se
mujhe mithi mein milaya hai
bahut kaante hai satth tumhare ...
yeh ilzzam lagaya hai .. .....shaloooooo....yahan hume apne bezubaa kar diyaa...bass iss dard ki taseeR ko mehsus kar sakte hai....

mithi mein mil kar bhi ..
tere charno mein reh jaungi ...
jahan jahan tum jaoge ..
khushbu waahan barsaaungi .. !!!!waaaah shaloo waah...iise kehate hai.....DIL ki khubsurTi.....chahe joo bhii ho hum tau duaa hii dete rahenge......

Shaloo.....sach mai behadh achha likha hai aur DIL ki mauzuD ka aehsas har lafz mai nazar aata hai......Shukriyaa itnna achha kalaam ko sab kai saath baatne ka...bhagwaan ap ko humesha khush rakhe...ap ka mitR..Sanju!


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21st March 2004, 01:47 PM

meriiiiiiiiiiii nanuuuuuu,

jinki nazre kaanto par rook gayi,
woh kya jaane, phoolo ki makhmali..

mithi mein mil kar bhi ..
tere charno mein reh jaungi ...
jahan jahan tum jaoge ..
khushbu waahan barsaaungi

waah...... tumhara aaj ka yah kalaam..... waaqai maie bahot hi bahetareen khushbu laaya hai...
ek ek labz yaha sathh chala hai, dhadkan ban kar
dil, khushbu se mahek ootha hai, aaj teri ruh pa kar.

tumhari didiiiiiiiiiiiiii
   
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hi - 21st March 2004, 01:56 PM

hi t e ji
how r u?
aap ka likha hwa hamehsa hi ahca lagta hay
aap ka nadaz alag sa hay..kuch likhne ka..jo bhi baat manmain aye..likh jati hain...or yehi acha hay...

jis ne bhi dkeha hmain aik swaal bana diya..
wah bohat hi umda misra likha hay...is ko agar beth kar socha jaye..to shayad fursat k tmam pal isi per beet jayain..or yeh aik
shayar ki khobi hoti hay..
acha likha hay


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21st March 2004, 02:01 PM

Shalini ji..

chand lafzon me aapne jo jeevan bhar ka kissa suna diya! Aur wo bhi kitne khubsoorat andaaz se.. waqai.. behtareen tareeke se bayaan ki hai aapne ye daastan..

Umeed hai ki aap yunhi likhti rahengi..


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21st March 2004, 11:21 PM

A-re Shalu ji...

Mujhe nahin maloom tha itni asardaar shayara ho tum..

Sach bahut achha likha tumne..Aur dard ko khoob anjaam diya in lafzon mein..

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Cool Samjho.. - 22nd March 2004, 11:50 AM

woh phuul kuch aur the , jin per bhaware mandarate the
hum to woh sukhe phuul hai ..jo mitthi mein mil jayenge”

Har wo phool sookh jaaega ek din...
Jo aaj apne aap par ethlaata hai...(ye sachh hai!)
'PAAGAL' tu kin bhaNwroN ki baat karta hai..
Jo har roj ek naye phool se dil lagata hai...


Sajho ey dil ..or muskurate chale jaao...
Tum ho to jindgi muskuraati hai...
mat sajho unhe ...jiNye ye baat samajh na aati hai..

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Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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dear shalini......bohut aachha likha.....saach. tum sab ko kiun rulati ho bolo to ? hume thora hasao naa. aach lagegaa....................hasne ki intezar mein hun.
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bahot achha hay yaar !!!
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bahot achha hay yaar !!! - 23rd March 2004, 03:16 PM

Hi dost ,

Bahot khubsurat hay...lekin dard bhara hay . Tumharey andar dard to bahot hay yaar . Malum nahi kiu !

Jo bhi ho humesha ki tarah ye bhi bahot khub likha hay tumne .

Likhte rahna dost .

Khush rahna...sukhi rahna .

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23rd March 2004, 08:26 PM

Shaalinii jii,

Abb hum aap ki kyaa taareef kareiN. Puri ghazal,har assar behtariin lagaa. Ek dost ke nazariye se padhooN tou gussa aataa hai tum par aur agar ek aam insaan ke nazaiye se padhoon tou taareef karne ko dil chahtaa hai. Waise meiN jo kahnaa chahtaa thaa wo tou mere mitr chaand aur sanju ne tumse kah hi diyaa hai woh bhi ek behtariin andaz mai.

Aap ki shayri ki yah line

mithi mein mil kar bhi ..
tere charno mein reh jaungi ...
jahan jahan tum jaoge ..
khushbu waahan barsaaungi

Bachpan meiN padhii huii ek kavitaa yaad aa gayi. Buraa na maniyegaa likh rahaa hooN.. Shayed aap ne bhi padhaa hogaa. Methlii Sharan Gupt ji kaa likhaa huaa tha kuch aise . YaadeiN ek baar fir se taaza ho gayii.

Mujhe tod lenaa banwaari
Uss path pr tum denaa fek
Matrubhumii par sish chadhane
Jis path jaye veer anek.

Itnaa achaa likhne ke liye humaarii daad Kabul kijiyegaa.

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