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Love Ajj unko fursat nahi...... - 19th April 2007, 02:58 PM

Assalam Dosto,

Main shayri to nahi kar sakta lekin app sabko padhne ke baad mano app sab se ek rishta sa bann gaya ho jo dil se shuru hokar dil par hi khatm hota hai, app sab mujhe mere apno se lagte ho aur apno se dil ki baat chupai nahi jati, isliye kuch likhraha hoon, jo kuch bhi likha hai samajh lijiye apne dil ke halat likhraha hoon yeh meri pehli koshish hai, app jaisa acha to hahi likh sakta, fir bhi ummid karta hoon app sabko pasand ayengi………

Hamare aane ka tha har lamha intezar,
Ajj unko humse milne ki fursat nahi,

Hume rakhte the apni nigaho main tasweer banakar,
Ajj unko hume dekhne ki fursat nahi,

Humare jikrra se hoti thi shamo-saher,
Ajj unko hume pukarne ki fursat nahi,

Hume pane ki arzoo me karte the sajda ratbhar,
Ajj unko humare haq me dua karne ki fursat nahi,

Apne hatho ko sajaya karte the mera naam lekar,
Ajj unko mehndi lagane ki fursat nahi,

Hum jarahe hai jinki yaad me dunya chorkar,
Ajj unko humare akhri didar ki fursat nahi,


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19th April 2007, 03:20 PM

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par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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bhut khub - 19th April 2007, 03:41 PM

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Assalam Dosto,

Main shayri to nahi kar sakta lekin app sabko padhne ke baad mano app sab se ek rishta sa bann gaya ho jo dil se shuru hokar dil par hi khatm hota hai, app sab mujhe mere apno se lagte ho aur apno se dil ki baat chupai nahi jati, isliye kuch likhraha hoon, jo kuch bhi likha hai samajh lijiye apne dil ke halat likhraha hoon yeh meri pehli koshish hai, app jaisa acha to hahi likh sakta, fir bhi ummid karta hoon app sabko pasand ayengi………

Hamare aane ka tha har lamha intezar,
Ajj unko humse milne ki fursat nahi,

Hume rakhte the apni nigaho main tasweer banakar,
Ajj unko hume dekhne ki fursat nahi,

Humare jikrra se hoti thi shamo-saher,
Ajj unko hume pukarne ki fursat nahi,

Hume pane ki arzoo me karte the sajda ratbhar,
Ajj unko humare haq me dua karne ki fursat nahi,

Apne hatho ko sajaya karte the mera naam lekar,
Ajj unko mehndi lagane ki fursat nahi,

Hum jarahe hai jinki yaad me dunya chorkar,
Ajj unko humare akhri didar ki fursat nahi,
eliyas bhai ko raj ka salaam.....janaab aapne to gazab likha hai bhut dil se likha hai yakeen maniye jo bhi cheez dil se likhi jaye wo kabhi buri hoti hii nahi....aapke dil se nikle jajbaat hamare dil pe dastak de gaye......yun hi likhte rahiyega.....aapki agli koshish ka intzaar rahega........raj........


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Assalam Dosto,

Main shayri to nahi kar sakta lekin app sabko padhne ke baad mano app sab se ek rishta sa bann gaya ho jo dil se shuru hokar dil par hi khatm hota hai, app sab mujhe mere apno se lagte ho aur apno se dil ki baat chupai nahi jati, isliye kuch likhraha hoon, jo kuch bhi likha hai samajh lijiye apne dil ke halat likhraha hoon yeh meri pehli koshish hai, app jaisa acha to hahi likh sakta, fir bhi ummid karta hoon app sabko pasand ayengi………

Wale-kum-Assalam Eliyas Bhai

Sabse pehle to humari aur humare sabhi doston ki taraf se aapka is khoobsoorat parivaar mein swagat hai..

Dost ek baat kahein ki shayad ye sach hai ki aap shayari nahin keh sakte par ye bhi sach hai ki yahan ka koi bhi member shayari nahin kehta. Dost hum sab bas apne apne jazbaton ko alfaaz ki shakal dekar apne sukh dukh doosron ke saath baantte rehte hain. Isse humara dukh kam bhi ho jata hai aur khushiyan badh bhi jati hain..
Aapka Ehsaas hume bahut hi khoobsurat laga aur ye padhkar mujhe wo Amit yaad aa gaya jo kabhi zinda tha aur kisi ke aane ki aarzoo karta tha.
Tab maine ye 2 lines likhi thi jo main is forum ke saath pehle bhi share kar schuka hoon:

Shikayat kis Muh se karoon uske na aane ki
Yahi Ehsaan kya kam hai ki mere dil mein rehti hai..
Dua ki thi jiske deedar ke bina na saanse thehre meri
Taqdeer se meri maiyat bhi usi ki gali se guzri hai...........

Bada khushnaseeb hai "Ehsaas" mera, meri aarzoo kabool hui
Har waqt mere saamne aaj mera dildaar hai
Maanga tha khuda uski nazren hamesha mujhpar hi rahein
Aaj usi ke Aashiyane ke Samne meri Majaar hai


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