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hume to adat - 20th October 2008, 10:19 PM

Hume to adat hai muskrane ki
Yunhi kabhi muskrat lete hain

Jab udasi hume gher leti hai
Apne ashk hum chupa lete hain

Ek lamha jo khawab ki tarah aaya
Koi pooche to fasana bata dete hain

Dil gum ho jata hai tanha syah raton main
Jo pooche to tanhaiyon ka pata dete hain.
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20th October 2008, 11:53 PM

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Hume to adat hai muskrane ki
Yunhi kabhi muskrat lete hain

Jab udasi hume gher leti hai
Apne ashk hum chupa lete hain

Ek lamha jo khawab ki tarah aaya
Koi pooche to fasana bata dete hain

Dil gum ho jata hai tanha syah raton main
Jo pooche to tanhaiyon ka pata dete hain.
.................................................. .....................vaishali

Vaishali ji

bahut achhi lagi aapki Gazal

khus rahiye younhi likhte rahiye ......

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Hume to adat hai muskrane ki
Yunhi kabhi muskrat lete hain

Jab udasi hume gher leti hai
Apne ashk hum chupa lete hain

Ek lamha jo khawab ki tarah aaya
Koi pooche to fasana bata dete hain

Dil gum ho jata hai tanha syah raton main
Jo pooche to tanhaiyon ka pata dete hain.
.................................................. .....................vaishali
bahut chcha likha hai vaishali ji,bahut khuub,share karte rahen...


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Hume to adat hai muskrane ki
Yunhi kabhi muskrat lete hain

Jab udasi hume gher leti hai
Apne ashk hum chupa lete hain

Ek lamha jo khawab ki tarah aaya
Koi pooche to fasana bata dete hain

Dil gum ho jata hai tanha syah raton main
Jo pooche to tanhaiyon ka pata dete hain.
.................................................. .....................vaishali
bahut khoob vaishali ji,
pehli baar padha hai aapko...
acha likha hai aapne....
keep writing...
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