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Thumbs up meri hasti mita dena..... - 3rd February 2006, 03:22 PM
aadab doston aaj ek baar fir aapka dost aapke liye ek kalaam laya hai jo ki maine us sakhs ke liye likha tha jisne mujhe apna bana kar ek pal me begana kar diya..




ek baar to nazren mila kar dekho,
fir bhale hi palken jhuka dena.
ek pal ko hi rakh lo aankhon me apni,
fir bhale hi bana ke aansu baha dena.

de kar deedar mutmaeen* karo ek baar,
fir bhale hi mujhe mitti me mila dena.
ek baar to roshan karo dil ke andheron ko,
fir bhale hi sari shamme bujha dena.

ek baar to ro lo mera naam le kar,
fir bhale hi mujhe hanss ke bhula dena.
ek baar to nazron se pila do mujhe,
fir bhale hi haanthon se jaam gira dena.

ek baar to karo mujhse izhare muhabbat
fir bhale hi bewafai ka ilzaam laga dena.
ek baar to raho dil me sanam bankar,
fir bhale hi ye aashiyana jala dena.

ek baar hi choom lo kitaab ke phoolon ko,
fir bhale hi apne sehre me laga dena.
ek baar to vaada nibha lo 'farha'
fir bhale hi sari kasmen bhula dena.

ya rab ek baar to hon mujhpe nazre-karam
fir bhale hi meri hasti mita dena..................


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bahut khoob - 3rd February 2006, 03:43 PM
achha laga parh ke ye nahee kahoonag ke likhte raho. kyon ke itana achha likhne wale se kahnee kee zroorat nahee hotee us ka dil sue mazboor karata rahata hai likhne ke liye
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3rd February 2006, 03:49 PM
janab anil sahab kalam pasand karne ke liye shukriya.ji aapne to hamara dil tod diya tha ye kah kar ki likhne ko nahi kahunga par aage padha to rahat mili.just joking.ummeed hai aap fir is nacheez ki mahfil me zaroor tashreef laayenge.main aapko aane ke liye nahgi kahoonga mujhe pata hai ki agar maine acha likha to aap bina bulaae hi aaenge.kyonki doston ko kabhi bulane ki zarurat nahi hoti.u r most welcome.
   
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khush kiya - 3rd February 2006, 03:52 PM
khush kiya tum ne kahan se ho? main delhi se hoon
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4th February 2006, 10:08 AM
shoaib sach man bahut acha laga padhke.........padhte padhte kab khatam hua pat ahi nahi chala ........kuch jayda hi doob gai thi tumhari kalaam main sayad.......likhte raho yunhi....

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4th February 2006, 11:07 AM
anil sahab ye hamari khush naseebi hai jo hum aapko khush kar paaye,warna banda to aajkal khud tak ko khush nahi kar pata.waise main bhopal se hoon,aapse mil kar khushi hui.
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4th February 2006, 11:11 AM
hiii sandhya ji hope u r fine.aaj bahut dino ke baad aapko apni mahfil me paaya to bahot khushi hui,aapke bina kuch kami si lag rahi thi jo poori ho gai.shayri pasand karne ka shukriya.waise aap ki ek baat par to hum bhi qaayal hain aur wo hai aapka jawab dena ka tareeka ,shayri ka jawab shayri me, bahut khushi hoti hai padh kar.aapse ye meri guzarish hai ki aap yoon hi aaya karen.by d way zarra nawazi ke liye shukriya.
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Re: meri hasti mita dena..... - 4th February 2006, 07:22 PM
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aadab doston aaj ek baar fir aapka dost aapke liye ek kalaam laya hai jo ki maine us sakhs ke liye likha tha jisne mujhe apna bana kar ek pal me begana kar diya..




ek baar to nazren mila kar dekho,
fir bhale hi palken jhuka dena.
ek pal ko hi rakh lo aankhon me apni,
fir bhale hi bana ke aansu baha dena.

de kar deedar mutmaeen* karo ek baar,
fir bhale hi mujhe mitti me mila dena.
ek baar to roshan karo dil ke andheron ko,
fir bhale hi sari shamme bujha dena.

ek baar to ro lo mera naam le kar,
fir bhale hi mujhe hanss ke bhula dena.
ek baar to nazron se pila do mujhe,
fir bhale hi haanthon se jaam gira dena.

ek baar to karo mujhse izhare muhabbat
fir bhale hi bewafai ka ilzaam laga dena.
ek baar to raho dil me sanam bankar,
fir bhale hi ye aashiyana jala dena.

ek baar hi choom lo kitaab ke phoolon ko,
fir bhale hi apne sehre me laga dena.
ek baar to vaada nibha lo 'farha'
fir bhale hi sari kasmen bhula dena.

ya rab ek baar to hon mujhpe nazre-karam
fir bhale hi meri hasti mita dena..................


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whww shoaib gr8 job with words ,khwahishe itni hai hain ki thodi der k liye hi sahi unhe meri yaad aaye
bahut achha laga mujhe tumhe padhkar kahi kuch mere ehsas bhi muskara diye
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5th February 2006, 01:48 PM
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Aapko parha, aapke lafzon ko parha......dard ko paaya hai aapke darmiyaan.
Khush rahiyega Sohaib ji

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6th February 2006, 05:49 PM
hi sharddha ji ummeed hai aap khush hongi. bhai ye to aapka badappan hai jo aap ne is nacheez ko is layaq samjha.tareef ke liye shukriya.yoon hi aaya karen bande ka housla badhane ke liye hi sahi.ok tc aapka dost shoaib.
   
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6th February 2006, 05:53 PM
aadab vipin sahab .hamari khushnaseebi jo aap hamari mahfil me aaye.zarra nawazi ke liye shukriya.ummeed hai aap yoon hi kabhi kabhar hamari mahfil me tashreef laya karenge.kalam pasand karne ke liye shukriya.
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