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mera pyar - 14th March 2006, 01:11 PM

aaj kal har ek pal se dar lagta hai,
aaj kal har ek lahmese dar lagta hai,
aap rehte ho hamri dhakn mein kaise batyae aapko,
aajkal dhakon k rukne ka dar lagta hai
   
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15th March 2006, 02:04 PM

bohot khoob khayal hai.....
3rd line ko thora aur simple kar dain to aur bhi acha ho jahey gaa
take care


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