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Yeh bhool jaaw ki mein tumhe yaad karoonga
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Sad Yeh bhool jaaw ki mein tumhe yaad karoonga - 28th March 2004, 11:57 PM

Mmein tum se bichad kar nahin faryaad karoonga
Yeh bhool jaaw ki mein tumhe yaad karoonga

Is shehr-e-bewafa mein wafa ki qadr kahan
Ab jaa ke mein sehraoon ko abaad karoonga

Gar dil ke taaluq se hai inkaar woh karta
Mein rooh ke rishte se bhi azaad karoonga

Shayad khushi sukoon mein raahat na mili ho
Gham de ke apne dil ko mein ab shaad karoonga

Dil bhi udaas rah ke ab ukta sa gia hai
Ab to naya hi shughl mein ijaad karoonga

Hai mera zarf teri wafa se kahiin badh kar
Aey bewafa tujhe mein kyun barbaad karoonga

Tu bhi bichar gia hayye dil bhi udas hai
Kis se bayaan apni mein roodad karoonga


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29th March 2004, 08:27 PM

Keisein ho? Waise baat keya hein? Post toh bohot hi khubsurat kiya hein tumnein. Chalon baad mein baatein hogi, ish liyein abhi kuch nehi kehti. Yunhi khubsurat post kartein rehna. Khush rahon yeh Duwa hamesha rahegi. Aapna khayal rakhna. God bless you. Allah Hafiz.

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30th March 2004, 12:51 PM

Hello....
mein bilkul theek hoon.... & how r u... I hope u r fine too...
Thanks 4 ur reply...
take careee... & bye...


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30th March 2004, 01:44 PM

very nice.....very touching really..i liked it..tx sharing with us...
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Smile Thanks... - 31st March 2004, 03:55 AM

Hello 'roopali'
thanks alot 4 ur appreciation...
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31st March 2004, 11:24 AM

wah bhai... ek baat hai jo aap ke mere bich main ek jaisi hai...

ki aap ki bhi haalat mere hi jaisi hai ...

mere dil ke zakham abhi bhare hi nahi hai ...

par lagta hai aapke zakham to nasoor ho gaye hai..

achchha hoga bhul jaaye woh sab jo dhokha mila aapko..

aur koshish karo ki aisa dhokha phir na mile aadam jaat ko..


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31st March 2004, 01:43 PM

Hi ek_aashique...
hMmmm.... khair... bin mushkilaat ke koi bhi cheez nahin milti..
bahut se cheezon ka saamna karne ka baad hi koi khushi milti hai...

'Hai mera zarf teri wafa se kahiin badh kar
Aey bewafa tujhe mein kyun barbaad karoonga'

Bhulaana hi to sab se mushkil kaam hota hai... Agar jitni aasani se kisi ko apne dil me basa lete hai utni hi aasani se nikaal sakte to kisi ko pyaar mein dukh hi kab milta...

'Tu ne bhoolega Kaise Bhulaawoon Mein'

Ranj dene wala bhi apne khataawon ko nahin bhoolega to jis ne saha hai woh bhala kaise bhool sakta hai...
'Socha to tha chod doon us ki gali
Lekin kahin qarar na paawon to kya karoon?'
Anyways thanks alot for your reply...
Yunhi posts karte rahe..
Bye & take care


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2nd April 2004, 01:09 PM

Hello,

Bahut hi khubsurat yah ghazal likhii hai aap ne. Such kahooN tou koi lafz nahi hai jo ki aap ke ghazal ki puri taareef kar sake. Bahut hi achhaa likhaa hai la~jawaab. Har sher behtar hai. Dil ke kareeb. Likhte rahiyegaa.

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Smile 3rd April 2004, 02:12 AM

Hi Anjaja Rahi...
Aapke yeh pasand aayi,,, bahut hi khushi hooowi... & thanks alot 4 ur appreciation...


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