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Allah Allah - 25th July 2004, 11:46 AM

Busss yuun hi kuch likha hai...

sadaa dil sadaa nigaheN mijaaz bhi sadaa,
yeh saadgi se qatl ka hunar Allah Allah

woh nazaakat se sahi par kare hai chaak jigar,
Mera miTne ko amaada jigar Allah Allah

Bosa dene ki hai betaabi unhe bhi aye dil,
taDpaane ki woh aadat magar Allah Allah.

chalaa hoon subha se jaana hai raat tak mujhko,
bosa paeiN to shuroo ho safar Allah Allah.

jabeeN pur-aab ho uThti hai mahjabeenoN ki,
daalta hoon mein kuch aise nazar Allah Allah.

"Talib" lihaaz-e-umr kuch karo abb to,
jhuk gayee dekho tumhaari kamar Allah Allah.


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25th July 2004, 12:19 PM

Janaab Talib!


Salaam aur aadaab!


Chhoti baatein, matlab gehra ..
Dil pe asar, Allah Allah!


LOL.. Kis par bijli giraane ka iraada hai janaab?? Is kalaam me aapka andaaz kuchh alag sa hai.. khayaal bhi kuchh juda juda se.. lekin khubsoorti wahiN ki wahiN hai.. aur ye taazgi use chaar chaand laga rahi hai.. ab aapka ye 'Bas Yunhi' likhna kitna asardaar hai, ye to dostoN ke jawaab bata hi denge..!

Chand ashaar par ghaur karna chaahenge..

sadaa dil sadaa nigaheN mijaaz bhi sadaa,
yeh saadgi se qatl ka hunar Allah Allah

-Hmm.. ye baat to aapne bilkul sahi kahi.. ye saadgi bhi ghazab hoti hai..

woh nazaakat se sahi par kare hai chaak jigar,
Mera miTne ko amaada jigar Allah Allah

Bosa dene ki hai betaabi unhe bhi aye dil,
taDpaane ki woh aadat magar Allah Allah.

-Uff! ye rasm e ulfat! TaDpa taDpa kar aakhir nazar se katl ho jaana.. aur isi baat ki talab...


jabeeN pur-aab ho uThti hai mahjabeenoN ki,
daalta hoon mein kuch aise nazar Allah Allah

-Khushfehmi??.. ya aks e seerat?

Bohat khoob janaab.. bohat khoob.

Yunhi likhte rahiye aur muskuraate rahiye..

Allah Hafiz!


Tum chale jaaoge to sochenge... Humne kya khoya, humne kya paaya...

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26th July 2004, 09:50 AM

talib sir ji,

kya karu........???
kuchh bhi javaab likhungi to lagega ke banno se copi ki hai.......
muje to n aaya kabhi javaab dena
aap hi sikh le maun javaab padhhna.

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26th July 2004, 12:45 PM

sadaa dil sadaa nigaheN mijaaz bhi sadaa,
yeh saadgi se qatl ka hunar Allah Allah

woh nazaakat se sahi par kare hai chaak jigar,
Mera miTne ko amaada jigar Allah Allah

Bosa dene ki hai betaabi unhe bhi aye dil,
taDpaane ki woh aadat magar Allah Allah.

chalaa hoon subha se jaana hai raat tak mujhko,
bosa paeiN to shuroo ho safar Allah Allah.

jabeeN pur-aab ho uThti hai mahjabeenoN ki,
daalta hoon mein kuch aise nazar Allah Allah.

"Talib" lihaaz-e-umr kuch karo abb to,
jhuk gayee dekho tumhaari kamar Allah Allah.




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27th July 2004, 12:50 PM

Talib Sir,

Ek Haseen Kavish! Youn lagta hai jaise bekhudi ke alam mein aap ne iss kalaam ko likha...

woh nazaakat se sahi par kare hai chaak jigar,
Mera miTne ko amaada jigar Allah Allah

unke saada husn pe to padhne wala bhi qurban ho jaye...kuch aisa asar hua hai apke iss saada se andaaz-e-bayan ka...khuda unka husn aur apka ishq aabad rakhe...

akhiri sher bhi dil lazeez rahe

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Behtreen - 27th July 2004, 01:35 PM

Janaab Talib saahab ek or...behtreen...khoobsoorat alfaazoN se saji...aapki ye rachna...

Sachh bahut pasand aai ye bhi.

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hello - 27th July 2004, 03:30 PM

hello talib ji
apki ye ek aur behatreen kalaam parhney ko mila,,,iskey liye aap dil se daad kabool kijiye,,,yun o sarey hi ashrar behat khoobsoorat hain,,per jo bahut acchey lagey,,wo...ye hain..


sadaa dil sadaa nigaheN mijaaz bhi sadaa,
yeh saadgi se qatl ka hunar Allah Allah

woh nazaakat se sahi par kare hai chaak jigar,
Mera miTne ko amaada jigar Allah Alla


jabeeN pur-aab ho uThti hai mahjabeenoN ki,
daalta hoon mein kuch aise nazar Allah Allah.

"Talib" lihaaz-e-umr kuch karo abb to,
jhuk gayee dekho tumhaari kamar Allah Allah.
...dil se daad kabool kijiye,,,

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Cool Der se aane ke liye mafhi miljaayegi yea? - 27th July 2004, 04:29 PM

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Busss yuun hi kuch likha hai...

sadaa dil sadaa nigaheN mijaaz bhi sadaa,
yeh saadgi se qatl ka hunar Allah Allah

woh nazaakat se sahi par kare hai chaak jigar,
Mera miTne ko amaada jigar Allah Allah

Bosa dene ki hai betaabi unhe bhi aye dil,
taDpaane ki woh aadat magar Allah Allah.

chalaa hoon subha se jaana hai raat tak mujhko,
bosa paeiN to shuroo ho safar Allah Allah.

jabeeN pur-aab ho uThti hai mahjabeenoN ki,
daalta hoon mein kuch aise nazar Allah Allah.

"Talib" lihaaz-e-umr kuch karo abb to,
jhuk gayee dekho tumhaari kamar Allah Allah.
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Re: Allah Allah - 29th July 2004, 09:53 AM

sadaa dil sadaa nigaheN mijaaz bhi sadaa,
yeh saadgi se qatl ka hunar Allah Allah

Wallah! Wallah!

woh nazaakat se sahi par kare hai chaak jigar,
Mera miTne ko amaada jigar Allah Allah

ummm....tau yeh baat hai..."Mera mitne ko amaada jigar" yeh ashaar behad pasand aaye

jabeeN pur-aab ho uThti hai mahjabeenoN ki,
daalta hoon mein kuch aise nazar Allah Allah.

Ohh aisaa kya? How very modest you are! LOL...

"Talib" lihaaz-e-umr kuch karo abb to,
jhuk gayee dekho tumhaari kamar Allah Allah.

Jee haan, umr ka lihaaz kijieygaa...magar yeh jo bad khuu--nahin nahin, mera matlab aisee achhi khuu jise padh jaaye...jaldi jaati nahin....i can well imagine...haan...Bujurg Talib Sahib...with a walking cane...halke hote huye balon pe topi...aur daal rahe hain "kuch aisee nazar Mahjabeenon pe"...LoL...

waise aapke arz-e-hunar mein badlaav aa raha hai...achha hai...yoonhi muskurate rahieye...

paras

aapki nazar yeh sher jaate jaate...

vo saamane hai magar tishnagii nahii.n jaatii
ye kyaa sitam hai ke dariyaa saraab jaisaa hai

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Re: Allah Allah - 29th July 2004, 02:48 PM

jabeeN pur-aab ho uThti hai mahjabeenoN ki,
daalta hoon mein kuch aise nazar Allah Allah.

"Talib" lihaaz-e-umr kuch karo abb to,
jhuk gayee dekho tumhaari kamar Allah Allah.

wahhh Talib bhai saheb
bahoooooot khooob !!! aapke apne andaaz se jara hat kar likha hai ....jismein sanjidgi ki jageh shararat aur alhadpan hai...behad acha laga padh kar.... wo haseenayein beshaq khushkismat hongi jinke rukhsaar par aapki nazar ki dhoop padti hogi....halaaki antim sher kuch sanjida kar gaya,,,,dua hai aap sada yun hi jawandil rahe...dil se bhi aur badan se bhi....hamari daad kubool kijiye
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29th July 2004, 03:14 PM

Talib Sahab,

Bahut hi khoobsurati se yeh adaayen pesh ki hain aapne.... I really loved it....

sadaa dil sadaa nigaheN mijaaz bhi sadaa,
yeh saadgi se qatl ka hunar Allah Allah


Kyaa baat kahi hai... Daad kubool kijiyega.. Humesha ki tarah is baar bhi umda kalaam....

"Talib" lihaaz-e-umr kuch karo abb to,
jhuk gayee dekho tumhaari kamar Allah Allah.


Itni bhi umra nahin huyi aapki janaab ke aapko lihaj karna pade... Bas Issi tarah likhte rahein...Kahyal Rakhiyega


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18th September 2004, 01:43 PM

Aap Sabhi dostoN ka bahot bahot Shukriya iss kalaam ko pasand farmaane ka ...aur aap sabhi ka shukriya adaa karne mein itna waqt lag gaya iss baat ki maufi chahta hoon...dar-asal mein ek mahine ke liye vacation pe tha, to poora waqt apne gharwaoN ke naam kar diya tha, iss liye net pe aana kafi kam kam raha...

hasb-e-haisiyat koshis karoonga yahan haazir hone ki.. filhaal izaazat dijiye..


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