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Post mera aakhri khat........ - 12th November 2005, 10:19 AM

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kahin aur nahi tumhare paas hoon main
meri khusbu mehsoos karna purwai me.

tere saye ke saath hi rehta hoon hardam
chahe to dekh lo apni parchai me.

duniya me na mil paye to kya,markar to milenge
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ja kar de duniya ke armaan poore kisi gair ki banke
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ye bhi soch, farishta hai wo jo kar de
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12th November 2005, 10:24 AM

shoaibji aapne jis tarah se kavita likhi hai bahut dard mehsoos kar rahe hai aap apni mehbooba ki shaddi k bad phir bhi app use samja rahe hai use ke tumhe bhool jaye aur nayi zindagi shuru karne ki baat kar rahe ho.....................................


meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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12th November 2005, 10:28 AM

shoaib sahab pehle to main aapka is priwar me swagat karta hoon.aur khushi hui jaan kar ki aapko humare kalaa pasand aate hain.aur yakeen maniye aapne dil ko chune wala ek kalaam pesh kiya hai.bahut hi khoobsurat kalaam hai ye.bas kahin kahin flow bigad gaya hai par khayalat bahut khoobsurat hain.aur kuch aasar to seedhe dil me utar jaate hain.umeed hai ki aage bhi aapko padhne ka mauka milega.agar koi baat buri lage to maafi chahunga.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.

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shukriya - 13th November 2005, 09:24 AM

ghayal sahab main aapko shukriya kehna chahunga ki naapko hamara kalam pasand aaya. par aap ne jo kaha hai main us se sahmat hoon ji baat darasal ye hai ki main koi proffesional shayar to hoon nahi halaat ne hame shayar bana diya aur us waqt jo dil se nikli wo shayri ban gai . koshish rahegi ki insha allah agli baar se koi galti nahi hogi
   
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thanx - 13th November 2005, 09:29 AM

mehul ji aapka main shukriya kehna chahunga ki aapko hamara kalam pasand aaya. par aap ka keha sahi hai ki is halaat me main use shadi ko kyon uksa raha tha ji janab us waqt halaat hi kuch ese the aur upar se itni majbooriyan thi meri ki main chah kar bhi kuch nahi kar sakta tha aur bajae iske mere saath uski zindgi bhi tabah ho maine yahi socha meri life expire bhi ho jaye to koi gham nahi kam se kam wo apna ghar basa kar khush rahe . aur pyar bhi to qurbani ka naam hota hai na ki bhale aap khush rahe ya na rahe par aap ki mehbooba khush rahe . mere khayal se ab aapko aapka jawab mil gaya hoga.
   
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