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Agli baar "Chachi" mujhe le jaana - Meri nanhi si Gudiya!! -
26th February 2007, 08:32 PM
Aaj kaafi dino baad maine apni niece se baat ki... uski woh pyari si aawaz sunke mann khush ho gaya... uski chotti si farmaaishe... jise poora jab tak na karun to chain na aaye... phone rakhte rakhte... matki boli... "agli baar 'Chachi' mujhe bhi saath le jaana... mann nahi lagta aapke bina..."
Bas usike liye kuch likha hai...  Meri nanhi si Gudiya.. ChoTTe se haaThon.. ki choTTi si ungliyan.. ChoTTi si Nosei... woh choTTi si akhiyan.. ChoTTe se dimple... woh laal-laal gallliyan*.. Khushiyon bhari meri pyari si duniya.. *cheeks ChoTTe se honTon se woh "Chachi" pukaarna.. Dekh mujhe To uska muskuraana.. JhaT se lipaTna aur godi me chadna.. Chad ke phir, woh pyar bikhairna.. Masoom si baaTein, woh uska saTaana.. SaTa ke mujhe.. phir khud rooTh jaana.. Woh Thedi si aankhon se uska dekhna.. ShaiTaani bhari phir muskaan dena.. Kahin nahi milTa aisa pyara sa gehna... O meri Gudiya Tu sada khush rehna.. Uski yaadon me woh chhup ke aansoo bahaana.. PhoTo dekhna... aur khud se rooTh jaana.. Phone pe phir uski aawaaz sunna.. SunTe hi "Chachi" woh mera khilkhilaana.. Woh pyari si aawaaz... wahi hai shaiTaani.. PaTa nahi.. kya ho gayi woh sayaani.. KehTi hai mujhse... Tum jaldi se aana.. AaTe hue... dheron saamaan laana... Gudde bhi laana... Gudiya bhi laana.. SaaTh me dher si Toffiyaan bhi laana... Meri nanhi si Gudiya ne fir farmaaya... Agli baar "Chachi" mujhe saaTh le jaana... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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26th February 2007, 10:36 PM
namksaar priya di ,
sach me aaj paRHte paRHte kuch khayaaloN meiN kab doob sa gaya pata hi nahiN chala..aapki likhawat meiN itni masoomiyaT hai..paRHne waloN ke dil meiN bas jaayeN aur baat bhi guDiyaa ki hai jee di yeH nanhi si jaan aisi hi hoti hai har pal shaitaani  farmaaisheN..ruthna , muskurana ..hame tang karna aur wo choclates k liye aur gudde guddi dilane ke liye zid karna bahot hi masoom si khwahisheN hoti hai unki ki..aapne apne dil ke jazbaatoN ko itni saralta se keh sabdoN meiN bayaaN kar diya bahot hi kabil-e-taarif hai ..hmmm aur maiN to aapki neice ko yehi kehta huN ki beta khub tang karna apni chachi ko.. yeH to tumhara hak hai haha..chhhote bacche itne pyaare hote hai ki unki masoom baateN hamare dil ko baRii asaani se chhu jati hai priya didi dua karta huN guDiyaa hamesa khus raheN..aur guDiyaa ki chachi bhi use ziNdagii ki sari khushiyaaN bhagvaan deN ...di bahot hi achha laga aapki is pyaar bhari aur masoom se khayaalaT se saji hui rachna ko paRH ke aur shaitaan huN maiN bhi to mujhe bhi shaitaan wale sher bahot acheh lage... Woh Thedi si aankhon se uska dekhna.. ShaiTaani bhari phir muskaan dena.. Woh pyari si aawaaz... wahi hai shaiTaani.. PaTa nahi.. kya ho gayi woh sayaani.. aise hi likhte rahiyenGaa di ..apna khaYaal rakheN aur aise hi muskuraati raheN .. duaoN ke sath ijaazaT aapke chhotey bhaiya dhaval |
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26th February 2007, 11:39 PM
Hi Priya ji,
bahut hi sundar likkha hai aapne, mujhe bhi meri nieces and nephews ki yaad aa gayi. Thanks for taking the time to share this wonderful thought. inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
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27th February 2007, 02:17 PM
hi,
priya ji hamasa ki tarah fir bahut pyarra likha hai aapna. Uski yaadon me woh chhup ke aansoo bahaana.. PhoTo dekhna... aur khud se rooTh jaana.. ya line to best hai.........itni khubsurti sa kasa likh lati hai aap.asa hi likhta rahiya aapki dost~saloni  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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27th February 2007, 04:43 PM
Hi priya,
Waah!Aapne mujhe apni niece ki yaad dilaadi.Ab toh ghar jaakar sabse pehle use phone karunga.Bahut khub aur usey aapki likhi yeh kavita bhi post karunga. Bahut Khoob!!! With Love, Saifee Aansoo nikal pade hai kharidaar dekhkar... |
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14th March 2007, 06:17 AM
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Tumne itna pyaar bhara jawaab diya.... bahut acha laga.... humesha khush raho mere bhai... Haan Gudiya aisi hi hai... Ab jab main India se vapis aaungi.. koshish karungi uski pic's yahan post karne ke liye.. taaki tum bhi dekh sako meri matki ko... kitni chulbulli ho gayi hai... itna bolti hai.. hai ram.. phone pakadti hai to chodti hi nahi... chaahe phir usse ghanton baat karlo.. aadhi baatein samjh me aati hai aur aadhi ka kuch pata hi nahi chalta... phir bhi baat karte karte pata nahi samay kahan chala jaata hai... Chalo ab chalti hun... tum bhi apna khayal rakho.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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14th March 2007, 11:52 AM
hi priya ji
kese ho aap? are kyaa baat hai priya ji, kya khub likha hai aapne apni is rachna mein, aapki rachna padhte padhte mujhe bhi mera ek ateet yaad aaya, aapki is jilmil bhari rachna ko padhte hi dil khushi se jum utha hai aapne jis khubsurati se apni bhatiji ke liye pyaar bayan kiya hai wo daad ko bhi daad dene ke kabil hai, aapki rachna se jo aapki gudiya ke liye pyaar jalakta hai usko mein bayan nahi kar sakta, ChoTTe se haaThon.. ki choTTi si ungliyan.. ChoTTi si Nosei... woh choTTi si akhiyan.. ChoTTe se dimple... woh laal-laal gallliyan*.. Khushiyon bhari meri pyari si duniya.. JhaT se lipaTna aur godi me chadna.. Chad ke phir, woh pyar bikhairna Meri nanhi si Gudiya ne fir farmaaya... Agli baar "Chachi" mujhe saaTh le jaana... priya ji khas karke ye lines hamein behad pasand aayi hai, priya ji aapki rachna bahut bahut achchi hai, jis masumiyat se aapne ise sajaya hai bas puchhiye hi mat, priya ji jo aapne kaha hai ki wo dhire se godi mein chadna aur chad ke pyaar barsana wo lines ko padhte ek ehsaas jag gaya dil mein jo ek chhoti si masum si jaan ke liye hum apni sari khushi kurbaan karte hai aur apna dard bhulkar uski khushi mein samil ho jate hai , priya ji aapka bahut bahut sukhriya ki aapne itni achchhe khayalat hamare samne rakhe ese hi likhte rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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11th April 2007, 12:22 AM
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Aapne meri is kavita ko pasand kiya jaan ke bahut khushi hui... haan yeh nanhe farishte aise hi hote hain... Bahut bahut shukriya reply karne ke liye aur meri hounsla afzaai ke liye bhi.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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11th April 2007, 12:24 AM
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Sabse pehle to aapka shukriya ada karna chaahungi jo aapne is nacheez ke liye bhi samay nikaala... Aur yeh kya.. arre khoobsoorat to ehsaas hote hain.. soch hoti hain.. shabd to bas khud hi ban jate hain... Aapki hounsla afzaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya... Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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14th April 2007, 12:54 AM
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Shukriya Saifee ji.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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14th April 2007, 01:46 AM
Dearest Priya,
This one is chooooooooo chweeet... sach me bacche jaan se pyaare hote hain... loved the way you expressed ur feelings for ur niece... chhote chhote haath, chhotti chhoti ungliyaan... chhote chhote galliyan... mazaa aa gaya... nazar naa lage pyaari gudiya ko... may both bhateeji and chaachi be always happy and together... main samajh sakta hoon yeh pyaar as i also have a niece.. meri bhaanji... main use kehta hoon... mera chhota sha gunda bacche paas hote hain to unki maasoomiyat me hum sab dard bhool jaate hain....meri khooob saari daad is pyaari si post ke liye.... tumhaari gudiya ke liye dher saara pyaar aur haan...just noticed u've become a mod... congratulations Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th April 2007, 06:07 AM
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Bahut bahut shukriya aapka... haan in nanhe farishton se aisa pyar ho hi jaata hai... inhe dekhte hi sab kuch bhool jaata hai... Aapko mere ehsaas pasand aaye bahut khushi hui...Aapke dil ko ek khushi de paayi meri ye rachna.. bahut acha laga jaan ke... Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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18th April 2007, 06:11 AM
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Aapki itni pyari baaton ke baad apni hi post ek baar phir se padi.. aur bas aansoo hain ki tham hi nahi rahe... meri gudiya india me jo hai.. aur main yahan.. itni door usse...  Maine kal hi gudiya se baat ki.. to uska bas ek hi massom sa sawaal tha.. "chachi mujhe chod ke kyun chale gaye? kab aaoge? mujhe le ke jaao.." khamoshi ke ilaawa mere paas uske sawalon ka koi jawab hi nahi tha..Chaliye koi baat nahi... bhagwaan ne chaaha to agli baar use saath hi laa paaungi hope for the best!Bahut bahut shukriya aapka.. aapki saari pyar bhari wishes ke liye.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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18th April 2007, 10:40 PM
hi priya di
bahut hi aach liha hai aapni....bahut hi aachi rachna hai......aap ke ye rachna pdha kar kuch yaad agaye....aise hi likhte rahina....daad hazir hai kubul kijiye.. take care sandhya |
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27th April 2007, 06:17 PM
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Tumhe mere yeh kuch ehsaas pasand aaye.. bahut khushi hui jaan ke.. usse bhi jyada khushi tumhe yahan dekh ke hui.. Tum bhi humesha khush raho meri gudiya raani.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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