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Chehre par Chehra - 1st June 2010, 09:18 AM
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Aap sab doston se guzarish hai doston ki jo mai likhun usme please "unhe" na doondhe.

Chehre par Chehra pehnte hai log
afsos, kitna khofnak hoga yeh rog
Chehre par Chehra pehnte hai log

Chipate rah woh humse apne sitam
aaj kehar ban toot pare, lo ho gaye hum khatam
Heran na ho doston, woh thai hamare sanam

Chehre par Chehra pehnte hai log
afsos, kitna khofnak hoga yeh rog
Chehre par Chehra pehnte hai log

Aaj hamari tarz-e-zindagi ki kamyabi,
qaabil-e-qabool nahi jinhe
Sharm aati hai humein dekh kar
manzar unke har nakab ke niche

Chehre par Chehra pehnte hai log
afsos, kitna khofnak hoga yeh rog
Chehre par Chehra pehnte hai log

Khubsoorat khwab paros kar hai humse jinhone cheeNE
Shayad pehla jurm yeh nahi unka
Teen aurtein ab seekh gayiN apne zakhm Seene

Chehre par Chehra pehnte hai log
afsos, kitna khofnak hoga yeh rog
Chehre par Chehra pehnte hai log

Koi bhi bedaag nahi is mehfil mai
Hai koi na idhar, sirf Ek
Jinhone ghayal kara hamari ankhon main
Asoon dekh

Chehre par Chehra pehnte hai log
afsos, kitna khofnak hoga yeh rog
Chehre par Chehra pehnte hai log

(This is my very first try with urdu words, pls correct me if i wrote anything wrong)
   
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1st June 2010, 10:23 AM
qaabil-e-qabool nahi jinhe ..........

this one is nice


Koi bhi bedaag nahi is mehfil mai
Hai koi na idhar, sirf Ek
Jinhone ghayal kara hamari ankhon main
Asoon dekh

ye bhi acha hai , painful hai ........ lekin
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Smile Very Nice - 1st June 2010, 10:34 AM
Hello Ji, aapka naam nahi pata so really dont know ki aapko kya kaheke bulaaye is ke liye maafi chaahte hai....

Aapka likha huaa hume bahot pasand aaya .. bahot gaheraai hai in shabdo mai jo dil se nikal kar dil ko chhu liya..

Aapki rachana ne ek dard ek tadap ka ehsaas karwaaya jo ... aapke kuchh shabdo ne bayaan kiya hai .. jo bhi dard jo bhi pareshaani hai... hum duaa karenge ki Bhagwaan ji aapko har mushkil se aur badalte waqt se ladane ki himmat aur sabar de ...badalte halaat mai aapko sahi raah dikhaaye ... Aur dhair saari khushiyon se bhari manzil tak aapko pahonchaaye.

Rahi baat Urdu wordings ki ... so Hume to urdu aati hi nahi ...par yahaan bahot se log hai jinhe urdu ki achchhi khaasi knowledge hai ... hume pura yakeen hai ke agar koi baat hui to sab aapko zaroor sahi shabd bataake aapki help karenge.

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,

Aapki Dost:- Gudia

Jay Ambe.

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1st June 2010, 01:03 PM
I simply agree with what Gudia Jee have said...........lafz to aate aate aa hi jayege. Khoobsurti to aapke khayaal me hai aapke dard me hai.....Keep writing, agar likhayee ke aitbaar se aapko jo bhi madad ya salah ki zarurat ho aap mujhe ya apne pasandida kisi bhi shayer ko jab chahe PM kar sakti hai guidance ke liye.

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1st June 2010, 09:22 PM
Thanks JanumanuJI, kush hain apko pasand aya.
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1st June 2010, 09:25 PM
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Hello Ji, aapka naam nahi pata so really dont know ki aapko kya kaheke bulaaye is ke liye maafi chaahte hai....

Aapka likha huaa hume bahot pasand aaya .. bahot gaheraai hai in shabdo mai jo dil se nikal kar dil ko chhu liya..

Aapki rachana ne ek dard ek tadap ka ehsaas karwaaya jo ... aapke kuchh shabdo ne bayaan kiya hai .. jo bhi dard jo bhi pareshaani hai... hum duaa karenge ki Bhagwaan ji aapko har mushkil se aur badalte waqt se ladane ki himmat aur sabar de ...badalte halaat mai aapko sahi raah dikhaaye ... Aur dhair saari khushiyon se bhari manzil tak aapko pahonchaaye.

Rahi baat Urdu wordings ki ... so Hume to urdu aati hi nahi ...par yahaan bahot se log hai jinhe urdu ki achchhi khaasi knowledge hai ... hume pura yakeen hai ke agar koi baat hui to sab aapko zaroor sahi shabd bataake aapki help karenge.

Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe,

Aapki Dost:- Gudia

Jay Ambe.
GudiaJI namaste
Hamara nam "Sharm" hai.
Acha laga jan kar ki humein ek dost mila is forum par.
Apne views likhte rahein, thanks v.much for encourgaing.
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1st June 2010, 09:28 PM
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I simply agree with what Gudia Jee have said...........lafz to aate aate aa hi jayege. Khoobsurti to aapke khayaal me hai aapke dard me hai.....Keep writing, agar likhayee ke aitbaar se aapko jo bhi madad ya salah ki zarurat ho aap mujhe ya apne pasandida kisi bhi shayer ko jab chahe PM kar sakti hai guidance ke liye.
SajidJI, bahut thanks apki sach feedback ke liye..
main zaroor apse poochongi hazaar questions urdu main problem ayi to
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1st June 2010, 11:35 PM
Aaj hamari tarz-e-zindagi ki kamyabi,
qaabil-e-qabool nahi jinhe
Sharm aati hai humein dekh kar
manzar unke har nakab ke niche

Koi bhi bedaag nahi is mehfil mai
Hai koi na idhar, sirf Ek
Jinhone ghayal kara hamari ankhon main
Asoon dekh

Ganguli JI...... Aadaab ! Haqiikat ka Aasmaa chhute ...... aapke yeh ehsaas ...... qaabile taarif rahen.... ! khush rahen...

apna aur apno ka theek se khayal rakhen....
duaaon ke saath....



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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3rd June 2010, 01:10 AM
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Aaj hamari tarz-e-zindagi ki kamyabi,
qaabil-e-qabool nahi jinhe
Sharm aati hai humein dekh kar
manzar unke har nakab ke niche

Koi bhi bedaag nahi is mehfil mai
Hai koi na idhar, sirf Ek
Jinhone ghayal kara hamari ankhon main
Asoon dekh

Ganguli JI...... Aadaab ! Haqiikat ka Aasmaa chhute ...... aapke yeh ehsaas ...... qaabile taarif rahen.... ! khush rahen...

apna aur apno ka theek se khayal rakhen....
duaaon ke saath....
Bahut dhanyavad NareshJI
thanks for encouraging.
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