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I Miss You!!! -
7th May 2006, 12:29 PM
My heart beats for one more time…
Agony inside me has emanated the rest As I once again rediscover the joy of being obsessed… Truth amidst the illusions, has once again been suppressed Suppressed forever…like my dreams…which left me depressed… Frustration seeks to escape in the flow of words Words are not just words…but jeweled with the drops of tears… Heart of mine refuses to go on in your demise If only your love could be a reprise… As my heart beats for one last time I still can hear it say… I love you…and…I miss you… Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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7th May 2006, 05:15 PM
as alwaz a wonderful creation karthik....
keep posting ur beautiful poems.. take care Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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8th May 2006, 03:38 PM
Karthik,
You always express your feelings beautifully... I love them... Keep your pains limited till here only yaar... I dont like when u write beyond this... neways... take care n keep writing... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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8th May 2006, 10:24 PM
hey farhana...long time yaar...
nice to c u here... keep comin ok take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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15th May 2006, 05:03 AM
My heart beats for one more time…
Agony inside me has emanated the rest As I once again rediscover the joy of being obsessed… hmmm, really? there is a joy in being obsessed or a joy of loving? Truth amidst the illusions, has once again been suppressed Suppressed forever…like my dreams…which left me depressed… dreams can onli leave you depressed if you let them, plus, if it left you depressed, then you know u were running after the wrong thing....and truth always finds its way out, we juss are too blind of the world to figure out wht is a lie and whts the truth.... Frustration seeks to escape in the flow of words Words are not just words…but jeweled with the drops of tears… its a good thing its onli tears, not something bad like blood  ...and if the tears help, then let them out, they help ease the "burden"Heart of mine refuses to go on in your demise If only your love could be a reprise… hmmmm, nice... As my heart beats for one last time I still can hear it say… I love you…and…I miss you… hmmm, and if she still hasnt figured it out, then her loss.... hi karthik, dont kno how i missed this...but very very nice. very creative, and stylish.... but as always, i will say, cheer up, and look, the sun is shining down upon u...embrace the light.... take care »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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