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' I Will Give You My Dreams...! ' -
18th August 2006, 07:32 PM
Tukde hein mere dil ke, eh yaar tere ansoo
Dekha nahin jaata hai, eh yaar tere ansoo...! You have gone away But your eyes are still there… Penetrating as a river in flood eternally in motion. as the perturbations of the mind, as a crinkled impetuous sea… They relive the wicked pain among the branches of the trees where flows the rain... The tears fall lightly clinging themselves to the emotion as they go down along the rivulets of the eyes and they take rest on the lips that hardly whisper a word… Don't cry my love, don't cry… I will give you my dreams enclosed in the silence…! Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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18th August 2006, 09:08 PM
I will give you my dreams enclosed in the silence…! Bhiaya, What a beautiful expression... Came staraight from ur heart and touched mine... loved this one really....it was toooooo goood  Its good to see you regualr here... Aisa mehsoos hota hai ke kitna tadap rahe the aap apni poetries ko post naa kar paake.... I can understand.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th August 2006, 09:26 PM
The tears fall lightly
clinging themselves to the emotion as they go down along the rivulets of the eyes and they take rest on the lips that hardly whisper a word… Namaskar Danny Ji How beautifully u have given a meaning to the tears of the eyes....it's one of the touching poetry of urs....Tears sometimes don't whisper a word...sometimes says alot....the last line I will give you my dreams ....enclosed in the silence…!....is the best one....keep writing Regards |
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20th August 2006, 10:10 AM
hello dear friend,
Hope everything is fine at your end. So nice to see you here after a long time. just miss your writting, this poem is so beautiful of yours, hope to read more from you now. the feeling is well expressed, it's an outstanding work. keep writting like this. Do take good care of yoursef dear, and try to be happy. have a nice day..! |
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Sorry for the late reply...! :) -
6th September 2006, 05:46 PM
Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
I will give you my dreams enclosed in the silence…! Bhiaya, What a beautiful expression... Came staraight from ur heart and touched mine... loved this one really....it was toooooo goood Its good to see you regualr here... Aisa mehsoos hota hai ke kitna tadap rahe the aap apni poetries ko post naa kar paake.... I can understand.... Chote Bhaiya...! You have appreciated this one too and I am grateful to you...! Do keep encouraging..., ok ? With blessings Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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6th September 2006, 05:51 PM
Originally posted by sukanya
The tears fall lightly clinging themselves to the emotion as they go down along the rivulets of the eyes and they take rest on the lips that hardly whisper a word… Namaskar Danny Ji How beautifully u have given a meaning to the tears of the eyes....it's one of the touching poetry of urs....Tears sometimes don't whisper a word...sometimes says alot....the last line I will give you my dreams ....enclosed in the silence…!....is the best one....keep writing Regards Namaskar Sukanya Ji...! Aap ne thik kaha...! Tears have their own language which most time are misunderstood...! Thanks so much for reading and liking this poem too...! Take very good care of yourself... ok ? Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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6th September 2006, 05:55 PM
Originally posted by Parul
hello dear friend, Hope everything is fine at your end. So nice to see you here after a long time. just miss your writting, this poem is so beautiful of yours, hope to read more from you now. the feeling is well expressed, it's an outstanding work. keep writting like this. Do take good care of yoursef dear, and try to be happy. have a nice day..! Thanks for being always here for me, Dear Parul...! I am always happy...  Keep smiling..., Ok ? Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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14th September 2006, 04:59 PM
hello danny bhai...long time...
the poem was awsme...typical danny style...full of emotions tht touched my heart... thanks for a wonderful poem take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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20th September 2006, 11:18 PM
Originally posted by karthik
hello danny bhai...long time... the poem was awsme...typical danny style...full of emotions tht touched my heart... thanks for a wonderful poem take care Karthik Bhai...! Nice to see you after such a long time and thanks for appreciating this poem...! Nowadays I am in Mauritius and I will return back on the 5th of october...!I will then reply...ok ? Take good care of yourselves...! Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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