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Intezaar - 2nd April 2007, 12:52 PM

Namaskar dosto, Haazir hun ek baar phir kuch naye jazbaaton ke saath. umeed karta hun ki aapko pasand aayenge.


Intezaar mein uske hamne zindagi gava di,
Woh na ayi kabhi phir bhi dil ne use dua di

Khayi thi kabhi kasme saath nibhane ki hamne,
Par usne to har kasam mitti mein mila di

Jaane kyon dekhti hai aankhein aaj bhi uska raasta,
Jab usne yeh aankhein bhi ashko se saja di

Bewafai usne nahi hamare dil ne ki hai,
Jo jaante hue bhi ke bewafa hai woh usko wafa di

Khade hain ham to abhi bhi usi mod pe,
Jis mod pe usne mohabbat ki chita jala di

Hamne sifarish ki us khuda se aur,
Apni saansein bhi uske naam likhva di



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no words to describe d feeling of divinity except dat d sinful thing of forgeting is wat im passing through......Khade hain ham to abhi bhi usi mod pe,
Jis mod pe usne mohabbat ki chita jala di
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3rd April 2007, 11:49 AM

bahut khub jasdeep ji
aapko hamra sadar pranaam

aapne bahut hi khubsurati se apne dard bhare ehsaaso ko yaha bayan kiya hai aur use ek paigam bhi diya hai jo mile pyaar ki kadar nahi karte,

meri bhi sabhi dosto se ek guzarish hai ki mile jo pyaar to kadar karna uski, kyuki zindagi mein pyaar ki sahi pehchhan sirf ek bar hoti hai jo aapne wo mauka gawa diya to zindagi bhar aapko gum ke aansu rona padta hai,

badi pyaari dil ko chhune wali koshish rahi hai aapki jasdeep je
ese hi likhte rehna
aapka dost
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Namaskar dosto, Haazir hun ek baar phir kuch naye jazbaaton ke saath. umeed karta hun ki aapko pasand aayenge.


Intezaar mein uske hamne zindagi gava di,
Woh na ayi kabhi phir bhi dil ne use dua di

Khayi thi kabhi kasme saath nibhane ki hamne,
Par usne to har kasam mitti mein mila di

Jaane kyon dekhti hai aankhein aaj bhi uska raasta,
Jab usne yeh aankhein bhi ashko se saja di

Bewafai usne nahi hamare dil ne ki hai,
Jo jaante hue bhi ke bewafa hai woh usko wafa di

Khade hain ham to abhi bhi usi mod pe,
Jis mod pe usne mohabbat ki chita jala di

Hamne sifarish ki us khuda se aur,
Apni saansein bhi uske naam likhva di



Thanx & Regards
Jasdeep Singh


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Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.


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10th April 2007, 08:27 AM

namsakar merul ji

apki housla afzai ki ham kadar karte hai. khushi hai ki apko hamari yeh chhoti c koshish pasand ayi umeed karta hu ki aage bhi kuch aisa likhuga jo apko pasand ayega.

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10th April 2007, 08:28 AM

hello samrak

Its pleasure to have a praise from yours. haapy to see that u like that. n will try to write some more good one for you..

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10th April 2007, 10:11 AM

jasdeep ji aapko phele baar padha hai...bahut accha lagga aapke ahsasso ko padna.


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10th April 2007, 10:40 AM

hello sunita ji

Taarif ke liye shukriya.. lekin kaabil e taarif to aap log hai jinhone is mehfil ko arso se saja rakha hai. hamne to abhi is mehfil mein apna kadam hi rakha hai. apki post to 1140 hai aur meri abhi 27 hai koshish karuga ki mere agle ehsaas bhi aapko achhe lage.

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