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Nazar pherein bhi to hum kaise..??? -
14th August 2015, 09:02 AM
Nazar pherein bhi to hum kaise... nazara jannaton ka hai... Sunega dil na kisiki ab... ishaara dhadkano ka hai.. Ye kehte hai ye paagal hai... wo kehte hain hai aawaara... Ajee chodo bhi taano ko.. deewaana muddaton ka hai... Kaatib e waqt se kahe koi... in lamho ko zara le rok.. Mera dildaar rubaru hai... sila ye mannaton ka hai... Ke dekhu bas use ya chu lu?? Ya aagosh mein bhar lu aaj??? Bade pechide hai jazbaat.. ke maamla hasrato ka hai... Use chahne ki khata bhi bewajah... use paane ki duaa bhi bewajah.. Nahi shamil wo lakeeron mein , ye haadsa kismato ka hai...Nazar pherein bhi to hum kaise... nazara jannaton ka hai... Sunega dil na kisiki ab... ishaara dhadkano ka hai.. par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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14th August 2015, 10:30 AM
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waaahh waaahhhh waahhhhh NIshaa jii sabse pahle to dher saarii daad aur mubarakbaad is behad hi haseen nazraane ke liye...... baad uske kuch rawaaytee taur pe Reps +++++++ bhi aapki shaan me shumaar kiye hain to kuboool kijiyegaa..... aur ye kahna chahungaa ke ye faqat ek kalaam nahii, balki ek poorii daastaan hai, ek mojezaa hai, ek nageenaa hai........... kya se kyaa sher hue hain... ksii ek ki nishaandehi kar ke baaki sher ke saath main gustaakhi nahi kar saktaa... kyun har sher bahut muqarrar aur mukammal huaa hai..... tahe dil se daad ek baar fir......... aatii rahiyegaa....... apna kahyaal rakhiyegaa.... shaad..... |
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14th August 2015, 10:44 AM
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Mujhe khushi hai aapne ise hamare sath share kiya.... Aage bhi aapke kalaam padhne ko milte rahenge...isi ummeed me.... Dher sari daad aur mubarakbaad aapke naam..... Khush rahiye... Likhti rahiye.... Aati rahiye..... Madhu अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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14th August 2015, 10:52 AM
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Dear Nisha  tum aa gye ho noor aa gya hai dil ko hamare sakoon aa gya hai bahuttttt accha lga tumhe aik baar yahan apne saath dekh kar NIsha...tumhari gazal padi...bahut kuch mehsoos kiya tumhari gazal meiN, dard par daad to kya doon...haan acche se dil ki baatoN ko bayaaN kiya hai tumne. duaa hai tum khush rho...khoobsurat gazal ke liye reps+++ add kar rhi hu bazm meiN aati rho pyar aur duaoN ke saath dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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14th August 2015, 10:56 AM
Nishaa jee
Namaste Aik achchhi koshish...qaafi waqt baad aap bazm mein nazar aayiiN...likhte rahiye aage bhee...dil se daad Aapka Dhaval |
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14th August 2015, 11:00 AM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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14th August 2015, 02:08 PM
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shaad ji.. bohot waqt ke baad kuch likha hai.. shayad saalo baad... sach aapka reply dekh ke bohottttt bohotttt bohottt zyada khush hu... hausla afzaaii aur tareef ke liye tahe dil se shukriya... aapki nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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14th August 2015, 02:13 PM
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aapka pyaar... aapki dua... aapka saath... kaafi hai khush rehne ke liye... baaki mere khayaal mere jazbaat, aap tak pohonch pae... isi mein meri nazm ka maan reh gaya... thank u sooo much diii... dher saare pyaar k saath aapki nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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14th August 2015, 02:36 PM
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NAMASTE Madhu Ji... taareefon aur hausla afzaii ke liye tahe dil se shukriya.. koshish karungi ki aapse aage bhi daad milti rahe.. aapki nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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14th August 2015, 02:38 PM
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salaam!!! meri koshish aapko pasand aai, ye meri khushkismati hai.... waqt nikaal kar, mujhe padne ke liye shukriya... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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14th August 2015, 02:41 PM
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nazm ko pasand karne ke liye aur hausla afzai karne ke liye dil se aapki shukraguzaar hu.N.... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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14th August 2015, 10:15 PM
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likhti rahen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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19th August 2015, 11:47 PM
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Bahut khoobsurat likha hay aapne. A touching poetry. Regards |
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22nd August 2015, 06:27 PM
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namaste ishq jee... nazm ko pasand karne ke liye aur hausla afzai karne ke liye dil se aapki shukraguzaar hu.N.... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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22nd August 2015, 06:29 PM
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salaam!!! meri koshish aapko pasand aai, ye meri khushkismati hai.... waqt nikaal kar, mujhe padne ke liye shukriya... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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22nd August 2015, 08:38 PM
Bohot bohot khoob Nisha ji..
Behad asardar likha hai aapne..daad kubul farmaiyega. Duao k sath Bhushan joshi Bhushan Joshi |
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25th August 2015, 07:14 PM
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bhushan ji.. salaam!!! meri koshish aapko pasand aai, ye meri khushkismati hai.... waqt nikaal kar, mujhe padne ke liye shukriya... duaon ke saath... aapki dost nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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