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Waqt Tanha Phir Guzar Bhi Jayega... ! - 8th October 2014, 07:40 PM
एक पुरानी काविश मैं फिर से नए रंग भरने की कोशिश की है.. उम्मीद है आपको पसंद आएगी.. अपनी आरा से ज़रूर नवज़ियेगा ..

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टूट जायेगा बिखर भी जायेगा...
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बारी बारी जल उठेंगी बस्तियां..
गाँव जायेगा शहर भी जायेगा..

खोखले चेहरे पे काज़िब सी हंसी ...
अब तो मुझसे ये हुनर भी जाएगा.

अश्क उनके तो लहू होगा मेरा..
कुछ उधर तो कुछ इधर भी जायेगा...

दिल मे शिकवा क्यूँ रखूं मेरे खुदा..
याद जाएगी असर भी जायेगा...

वो गले मुझको लगा ले आज बस..
वक़्त तनहा फिर गुज़र भी जाएगा...

जिस्म देखा राख होता ही गया..
अब तड़पता ये जिगर भी जाएगा.

और... !

था 'सिफर' तेरी हतेली की हिना ...
जो लकीरों से उतर भी जायेगा,...
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8th October 2014, 09:13 PM
Wah!!!!kunaal ji namaskaar kyaa baat hai bhut hi purkashish gazal kahi hai aapne...kasam se dil chhuu liya aapke aashaaro ne...Raj...

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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8th October 2014, 10:59 PM
Kunal

Bahut dinon baad tumhari rachna padhi.Bahut acha likha hay.
waqt guzar jayega par kuch kadmon ke nishaan chod jayega.
waqt guzar jayega par ankhon mein sapne chod jayega.
Keep on giving wings to your poetry so that that it touches sky.keep up the good work.
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sabse pehle to main yeh kahunga kee bahut khushi hui aap sab ko yahan dekhkar......aur kunaal jee kya kanmaal ke jasbaat nikle hain aapki kalam se....its really wonderful......aise hee mehfil kee raunak badate rahiye... .


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9th October 2014, 10:32 AM
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एक पुरानी काविश मैं फिर से नए रंग भरने की कोशिश की है.. उम्मीद है आपको पसंद आएगी.. अपनी आरा से ज़रूर नवज़ियेगा ..

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बारी बारी जल उठेंगी बस्तियां..
गाँव जायेगा शहर भी जायेगा..

खोखले चेहरे पे काज़िब सी हंसी ...
अब तो मुझसे ये हुनर भी जाएगा.

अश्क उनके तो लहू होगा मेरा..
कुछ उधर तो कुछ इधर भी जायेगा...

दिल मे शिकवा क्यूँ रखूं मेरे खुदा..
याद जाएगी असर भी जायेगा...

वो गले मुझको लगा ले आज बस..
वक़्त तनहा फिर गुज़र भी जाएगा...

जिस्म देखा राख होता ही गया..
अब तड़पता ये जिगर भी जाएगा.

और... !

था 'सिफर' तेरी हतेली की हिना ...
जो लकीरों से उतर भी जायेगा,...
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एक पुरानी काविश मैं फिर से नए रंग भरने की कोशिश की है.. उम्मीद है आपको पसंद आएगी.. अपनी आरा से ज़रूर नवज़ियेगा ..

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बारी बारी जल उठेंगी बस्तियां..
गाँव जायेगा शहर भी जायेगा..

खोखले चेहरे पे काज़िब सी हंसी ...
अब तो मुझसे ये हुनर भी जाएगा.

अश्क उनके तो लहू होगा मेरा..
कुछ उधर तो कुछ इधर भी जायेगा...

दिल मे शिकवा क्यूँ रखूं मेरे खुदा..
याद जाएगी असर भी जायेगा...

वो गले मुझको लगा ले आज बस..
वक़्त तनहा फिर गुज़र भी जाएगा...

जिस्म देखा राख होता ही गया..
अब तड़पता ये जिगर भी जाएगा.

और... !

था 'सिफर' तेरी हतेली की हिना ...
जो लकीरों से उतर भी जायेगा,...
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9th October 2014, 08:43 PM
Kunal Bhai ,

Kafi arse baad aapko para aaj.... bahut achi lagi aapki rachna ..Yun hi aate rahiye aur mehfil mein shamma jalate rahiye..
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एक पुरानी काविश मैं फिर से नए रंग भरने की कोशिश की है.. उम्मीद है आपको पसंद आएगी.. अपनी आरा से ज़रूर नवज़ियेगा ..

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टूट जायेगा बिखर भी जायेगा...
ख्वाब-ऐ-दिल तू अब जिधर भी जायेगा...

बारी बारी जल उठेंगी बस्तियां..
गाँव जायेगा शहर भी जायेगा..

खोखले चेहरे पे काज़िब सी हंसी ...
अब तो मुझसे ये हुनर भी जाएगा.

अश्क उनके तो लहू होगा मेरा..
कुछ उधर तो कुछ इधर भी जायेगा...

दिल मे शिकवा क्यूँ रखूं मेरे खुदा..
याद जाएगी असर भी जायेगा...

वो गले मुझको लगा ले आज बस..
वक़्त तनहा फिर गुज़र भी जाएगा...

जिस्म देखा राख होता ही गया..
अब तड़पता ये जिगर भी जाएगा.

और... !

था 'सिफर' तेरी हतेली की हिना ...
जो लकीरों से उतर भी जायेगा,...
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Wah Kunaal salaam karta hoon us soch ko jis se yeh nayaab khayaal niklaa hai keh nahi paaunga ki kaunsa sher aacha laga kyunki meri taleem shayad itni gehrii nahi hai...behad khoob

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एक पुरानी काविश मैं फिर से नए रंग भरने की कोशिश की है.. उम्मीद है आपको पसंद आएगी.. अपनी आरा से ज़रूर नवज़ियेगा ..

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बारी बारी जल उठेंगी बस्तियां..
गाँव जायेगा शहर भी जायेगा..

खोखले चेहरे पे काज़िब सी हंसी ...
अब तो मुझसे ये हुनर भी जाएगा.

अश्क उनके तो लहू होगा मेरा..
कुछ उधर तो कुछ इधर भी जायेगा...

दिल मे शिकवा क्यूँ रखूं मेरे खुदा..
याद जाएगी असर भी जायेगा...

वो गले मुझको लगा ले आज बस..
वक़्त तनहा फिर गुज़र भी जाएगा...

जिस्म देखा राख होता ही गया..
अब तड़पता ये जिगर भी जाएगा.

और... !

था 'सिफर' तेरी हतेली की हिना ...
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Wah!!!!kunaal ji namaskaar kyaa baat hai bhut hi purkashish gazal kahi hai aapne...kasam se dil chhuu liya aapke aashaaro ne...Raj...
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SaaloN baad aapse rabta hua hai.. bohat accha laga aap aaye ..

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Kunal

Bahut dinon baad tumhari rachna padhi.Bahut acha likha hay.
waqt guzar jayega par kuch kadmon ke nishaan chod jayega.
waqt guzar jayega par ankhon mein sapne chod jayega.
Keep on giving wings to your poetry so that that it touches sky.keep up the good work.
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Mujhe shikayat hai aapse .. aap apne waade nahi nibha paayi..

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sabse pehle to main yeh kahunga kee bahut khushi hui aap sab ko yahan dekhkar......aur kunaal jee kya kanmaal ke jasbaat nikle hain aapki kalam se....its really wonderful......aise hee mehfil kee raunak badate rahiye... .
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...........Bahut khoob kunal ji........
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waahhh kyaa baaat hai Kunaal saahab..... aapki fankaari ke sahar se kaun waaqif nahii hai.... aapne is baar bhii wahi karishmaa dikhaaya hai..... mujhe behad pasand aaye aapke khayaal aur andaaz... aate rahen likhte rahiye.....

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Kehte hai na khoobsoorati cheez main nahi aankh main hoti hai.. bas wahi baat hai.. khaak bane ki koi aukaat hi nahi hai.. aapne itna pyaar diya .. shukriya

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Kunal Bhai ,

Kafi arse baad aapko para aaj.... bahut achi lagi aapki rachna ..Yun hi aate rahiye aur mehfil mein shamma jalate rahiye..
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13th October 2014, 01:15 AM
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Wah Kunaal salaam karta hoon us soch ko jis se yeh nayaab khayaal niklaa hai keh nahi paaunga ki kaunsa sher aacha laga kyunki meri taleem shayad itni gehrii nahi hai...behad khoob

थक गया हूँ तुझे ढूंढा किये
सोचता हूँ दिल ठहर भी जाएगा

नासमझी पे यारों मेरी हँसना नहीं
तिनके से दिल भिखर भी जाएगा

Tumhara apnaa
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Shayri ki raah maine aapki ungli pakad ke chalna shuru kiya tha.. tab mujhe kuch nahi maloom tha .. aaj jo kuch bhi likh paata hun.. kehte hue dukh nahi hoga .. ki aapse seekha hun.. haan bas ab main takneek mai likhta huN.. ye waqt ne sikha diya mujhe.. mast pyaar yaad hai ya nahi..

Aapne wahi purane andaaz main reply kar .. yaadeN taaza kar dee hai sabhi.. shukriya..

Aapse ek darkhuwast karunga main agar maane to.. kyunki main jaanta hun aapki likhaai ka ki saani nahi hai.. aap ab beh'r bhi seekh leN main aur aati hai to usme ek ghazal mujhe zaroor likh ke deN .. meri tamanna hai aapko takneeki taur pe padhne ki .. agr aap mere liye ye kar paayen to..

Aapka apna

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13th October 2014, 07:27 PM
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Kunall ji.....bahut accha lga aapko aapki khoobsurat gazal ke saath dekh kar...bahut umda likhte hai aap, aap jaise shayroN ke ham shuru se hi fan. rhe hai.

aate rha kijiye, accha lagta hai aap sabko padna
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Ye aapka naZar e karam hai .. isse jyada kya kahun main .. baaki khaaksaar ki koi hasti hi ahi hai ..

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13th October 2014, 07:46 PM
bahut khoob mere bhai... tumhaara likha jab bhi parhta hooN to soch me pad jaata hooN...kya wakai ...!

yooNhi likhte raho...

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Kaise ho kunaal?

Hope mujhe pehchante ho?

...Tumhare ghazal waqai kabile --tareef hain...aise hi nahin keh rahin hoon...bahut waqt baad yaha pe reply kar rahin hoon......kaafi arse baad tumhe padha..pehle jaise hi kamaal ka laga...

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bahut khoob mere bhai... tumhaara likha jab bhi parhta hooN to soch me pad jaata hooN...kya wakai ...!

yooNhi likhte raho...
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Aap sath rahiye yun hi..

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14th October 2014, 09:33 PM
bahut khoob rang bhare hain bahut pasand aye ashaar

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15th October 2014, 01:46 AM
Shukria anil dost..

Umeed hai ab aapko meri umra se shikayat nahi rahegi.. hahhaa

Aapke aane ka shukriya

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Kunal bhai, aadaab-o-namaste

miyaaN ek muddat baad aapse mukhaatib ho raha hooN

kya Ghazal kahi hai, sadke jaauN

daad "Tikaa" lijiye mubarakbaad ke saath aur aate raha kijiye



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