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Post chale jaate woh kaash........ - 17th November 2001, 11:44 AM

chale jaate woh kaash...
mere dil se bhi nikal ke
jo gaye hain chorr haath
do kadam saath chal ke

kabhi dosti ke naam par
kabhi hamdard ban kar
qaatil mile hain mujhko
chehre badal-badal ke

kijiye kabool aap bhi
rote hain meri yaad mein
chaand se mukde pe daag
nazar aate hain halke-halke

aaj bhi hai unki aarzoo
mere daaman se liptii huii
jawaa.n ho rahe hain khwaab
umeedon ke saath pal ke

in zindagi ki raahon mein
har shaks hai matlab-parast
hum jaise nahin hain sab yahan
tum chalna zara sambhal ke


maikasH


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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bahut khoob....
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Thumbs up bahut khoob.... - 17th November 2001, 11:55 PM

maikasH ji...bahut hi accha aapne likha hai ye sheyr bhi hamesha ki tarah!!

ye 2 sheyrs to hume bahut acche lage...

kabhi dosti ke naam par
kabhi hamdard ban kar
qaatil mile hain mujhko
chehre badal-badal ke

in zindagi ki raahon mein
har shaks hai matlab-parast
hum jaise nahin hain sab yahan
tum chalna zara sambhal ke


Adaab,
shumaila


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kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!!
   
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bahot shukriya......!!


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hi - 18th November 2001, 08:46 AM

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bahot shukriya......!!
i must say that was nicely done. keep it up looking forward to many more from u.
chota sa dil

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Thumbs up 19th November 2001, 10:27 AM

ji shukriya.....

zindagi ka aik aur imtehaan saamne khada hai.....agar yahan haaziri na lagva paaya to maafi chahunga....!!

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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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