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~~...mErI jAaN...~~ - 28th October 2005, 12:56 AM
Hi Doston!!!
Hey aaj bhi aayi hu ek naye koshish ke saath ........ this one is very special to me ... na jaane kyu!!!
aapnii raye zarror batana....

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aaj pheli baar aapNi mohabaat ka iizhar kiya hai
haaN meri jaaN meiNe pyaar sirf tumhii se kiya hai

tumhe aapNii aaNkhooN ki tasveer baNaya hai
jiska tasavoor karti hai meri Nazre har ghadii

meri saaNsoN per hai tera hi ek Naam
dil ki har dhadhkhaN sirf tere liye hai

hum doNo ka saath jaNmo ka rishta ho jaise
har pal tera saath yehi ehsaas jaatata hai

hum us khuda se tumhe paaNe ki dua karte hai
tum mujhe kabhie Nahi chhodogeNe yehi vishwas rakhte hai

ey saNam hum us waqt ka iNtezaar karte hai
jab hum tum ho jaayeNge ek

hum tumhe kehte raheNge hamesha hamesha
haaN meri jaaN meiNe pyaar sirf tumhii se kiya hai

Luv Ya alotz
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28th October 2005, 01:08 AM
Very Very nice....

Mandeep di,

Tussi great ho... sada jawab nahi... lol... ghabrao nahi galat punjabi nahi boli... hehehe... mein apne aap ko hi shabashi de raha tha.....heheheh... aakhir behan kiski ho... isliye hi de raha tha.... lol...

But i must say brilliantly written....

keep going....

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28th October 2005, 01:39 AM
bahaut khoobb mandeep...accha likkha hai.yuhin likhti rehna.

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28th October 2005, 08:55 AM
Mandeep Ji.....

hum doNo ka saath jaNmo ka rishta ho jaise
har pal tera saath yehi ehsaas jaatata hai


chand zindaanon ko hi ye massarat haasil hai....jo aapne apne kalaam mein zaahir ki hai......

rabb thuvanu khush rakhe....

thuvada apna.....


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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
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28th October 2005, 11:55 AM
aaj pheli baar aapNi mohabaat ka iizhar kiya hai
haaN meri jaaN meiNe pyaar sirf tumhii se kiya hai

tumhe aapNii aaNkhooN ki tasveer baNaya hai
jiska tasavoor karti hai meri Nazre har ghadii

Kyaa baat haii...!


meri saaNsoN per hai tera hi ek Naam
dil ki har dhadhkhaN sirf tere liye hai

hum doNo ka saath jaNmo ka rishta ho jaise
har pal tera saath yehi ehsaas jaatata hai

Beautifulll.... !


hum us khuda se tumhe paaNe ki dua karte hai
tum mujhe kabhie Nahi chhodogeNe yehi vishwas rakhte hai

ey saNam hum us waqt ka iNtezaar karte hai
jab hum tum ho jaayeNge ek

Nicely expressed...!


hum tumhe kehte raheNge hamesha hamesha
haaN meri jaaN meiNe pyaar sirf tumhii se kiya hai

Kya baat hai...!

Dearest Mandy...

Tusi te vadde vadde shayran di tarah likhne lage ho... kya likh diya hai... Evry word was beautifull... Just loved it...! Meri daad to tumhaare saath hai.... Apna khayal rakho acche se.... Love ya...!

Rohin.. yeh tumhaari bhi didi ho gayi... Main yeh to nahi keh raha hoon ke kucch din pehle somebody was praying ke aisa ho jaaye... naa hi main yeh kaeh raha hoon ke woh bahut khush hogi... hehe....

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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28th October 2005, 12:11 PM
dearest rohin

hehehe ... aapko pasand aaya .. hume khushi hue ...
ese hi humara saath dete raho ... aapki di aur bhi likhegi ... yep
n take a very gud care of urself ...
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28th October 2005, 12:12 PM
dear farhana!!!
hey thanx for expressing ur feelings n enougraging me ... ese saath dete raho
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28th October 2005, 12:25 PM
Aman ji
sat siri akal ji ....
te hon twada ki haal hai?te menu bahut khushi hoe twanu aapni post te reply dende dekhiya ....
rab twanu bahut khushiyan bakshan te tantarusti vii
n keep reading ... n take a gud care vv
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28th October 2005, 12:30 PM
mere dearest pulkit~~~

twanu pasand aaya ... sanu bahut bahut bahut bahut khushi hoe ... asi jo v bas twade saath naal .... so tsu saath dende raho te asi v likhde ravage ....
u take a very gud care of urself!!!
hey rohin ...pulkit kya keh raha hai ... wht is he talking abt??? do i knw or i dont .... ... if i dont knw then i want to knw ... no more suspense....lol

love ya alot
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28th October 2005, 03:00 PM
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Rohin.. yeh tumhaari bhi didi ho gayi... Main yeh to nahi keh raha hoon ke kucch din pehle somebody was praying ke aisa ho jaaye... naa hi main yeh kaeh raha hoon ke woh bahut khush hogi... hehe....
Yaar Pulkit,

Uska bass chale to woh to humari pledge ko bhi change kara degi jo hum school mein liya karte the... wahi wali "All Indians wali"... yaar mein to lot pot ho raha hoon... hassi rukvao re... baap re...

Ruk jao saans lene do phir aata hoon... lol gol gol gol

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28th October 2005, 04:53 PM
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28th October 2005, 05:00 PM
Rohin,

I hope that if u dont wanna make more sisters.. u'll rest ur art of prophecy for some time...Jinte predictions karne hain usi ke kar... auron ke karega to kanhaiya se bhaiya

Mandy.. tusi tension naa lo.. Rohin samajh jaayega what i wanna suggest Tusi bas apna khayal rakho acche se

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28th October 2005, 05:07 PM
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I hope that if u dont wanna make more sisters.. u'll rest ur art of prophecy for some time...Jinte predictions karne hain usi ke kar... auron ke karega to kanhaiya se bhaiya

Mandy.. tusi tension naa lo.. Rohin samajh jaayega what i wanna suggest Tusi bas apna khayal rakho acche se
Yaar Prophecy to chhod doon... magar jo hona hai hoga hi... lol
Kanhaiya se bhaiya hona better hai vaise... Kanhaiya to tumne banaya tha....

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28th October 2005, 08:41 PM
dear didi
thanx didi ...
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28th October 2005, 08:43 PM
dear pulkit ...n ...rohin
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u both r tooooooooooooooo gud
love u both
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thanx ... khushi hui jaan kar aapko pasand aaya ... bas aap saath dete rahe aur hum likhte rahnege!!!
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