peedaa de sirnave

[sunita thakur]

Originally Posted by D33P

safed kagzaa te meri peed de sirnave pye reh jaange.
bukal vich sjna kde aauna nai,khaali glaave reh jaange
na usne kde padna "deep" nu,na kise gauna kde,
dhup nai milni vsllaa di,mere gille geet shaave pye reh jaange....

Deep jii, tuhade eh ahsaas dil de bahuttttttttt kareeb rhe, bahut vadiya likhde ho tusi....par aj-kal nazar nahi aa rahe tusi SDC te, tuhadi kalam tuhanu kuj likhan nu majboor nahi kardi

umeed hai jaldi hi tuhadi navi poetry padan nu milegi.

rabb raakha