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17th January 2008, 09:10 PM
Ek vari kisi di likhi poem pari si isse topic te... Tanisha (Vadi Beti) de school vich poem da compitition si... Asal vich mein pehla sirf Article te Stories hi likhda si... Tanisha de kehan te uss nu school lai hi kujh poems likh ke ditian san... Eh poem tazi tazi padhi si ke fir school compitition lai poem likhni pe gai... Bilkul choti poem hai par Tanisha vi aje nanhi jahi gudia hai (2nd class). So ussde standred muabak Edhro-Udhro lafaz ikathe "Betia.n" likhi... Aaj Sunita Ji di poem "Pyari Betia.n" padh ke eh poem aap ji naal sanjhi karan da mann kita...
Pyari Pyari hoti hein betian... Foolon jaisi Niari hoti hain betian... Zara sa danto to roti hein betian... Heera agar beta to Moti hein betian... Aoron ke raste par chalti rahe.n gi... Khushio.n se daman bhigoti hein betian... Pyari Pyari hoti hein betian... Foolon jaisi Niari hoti hain betian... * Love u Tanisha & Garima * Rishi Aasha ka Deep Jalaye Baitha HooN
Mann mein tujhe Basae Baitha HooN Aana hai to jaldi aa E DosT, Zindgi apni to kiyA, Udhaar ki bhi Khaye Baitha HooN. |
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18th January 2008, 02:16 PM
Rishi ji bahut man khush hoyeyaa. Bachiaan laee kujh likhnaa zyaadaa aukhaa hundaa hai. Tusi bahut pyaari koshish keeti. Main koshish karaangaa ke eh poem apniaaN sisters diaaN betiaaN nu sikhaawaaN. BachiaaN agar kujh hor vi likho te bahgut vadhiyaa hovegaa.
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18th January 2008, 02:17 PM
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tuhadi chotti jehi poem v dil nu chu gaye....te tusi meri poem "Payri Betiya.n" padke apne eh ahsaas aithe sab naal share kite...bahut vadiya lagiya....eh dil de taar aida hi ek - dooje naal jude rahan...ehi dua hai....te mere vallo.n betiya.n nu pyar te ashirwaad kahna kush raho te kushiya.n maande raho  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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18th January 2008, 04:29 PM
Shukria Tilak Ji te Sunita Ji... Aap ji ne bahot hosla afzai kiti hai... Mein ek kahani Ghoo.n Ghoo.n liki si. Jini der ohh kahani likh riha si... Meinu iss tareh lag riha si jis tarah koi mere dil nu masal riha hove... Kahani puri karke mein ek lamba saah liya, jive koi nanhi jahi Chiri kise Baaj de panje vicho azad ho gai hove... Eh kahani Aaj di sabh to vaddi te Kulheni samasiya "Bharoon Hatiya" te si... aap ji nu link bhej riha haan... Apne vichar dena...
http://www.likhari.org/Kahania%20All/rishi%20gulati_ghun%20ghun%202%20september%202006. htm Regards, Rishi Aasha ka Deep Jalaye Baitha HooN
Mann mein tujhe Basae Baitha HooN Aana hai to jaldi aa E DosT, Zindgi apni to kiyA, Udhaar ki bhi Khaye Baitha HooN. |
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18th January 2008, 07:44 PM
Rishi ji sub to pehlan satshri akal,mainu tuhadi ih kawita bahut pasand aayi,apne papa di yaad aa gayi oh na ne wi mainu ik kawita likh ke diti si jado main school ch pad di si.par oh comedy si.par jo bi hai,mainu inj lagda hai betiyan sub to jada apne papa de karib hi hundeya ne.ih duniya da sub to wda such hai.shayad betaiya mom de naal rehndiya ne mom naal har gal kardeya ne,mom nu jaan to jada pyar kardeya ne,te dad naal jada khul ke gaal nahi kardeya but dad nu shayad jaan kehndeya ne.so,tusi wi jaan hi ho.te ik gaal hoor,tusi jihda link dita hai oh paad nahi ho reha.i don't know why.par jekar tusi dobara dewon ta shayad assi tuhadi nawi rachna paad sakiye.tusi wi iss nu open kar ke dekhna.ih sahi nahi khul rahi.i hope tusi jaldi hi jwab dewo ge te sanu apne rachna padan da mooka dewo ge.take care.fir milde aa................
ik sajda tainu milane da. ik khwaish tainu poon di, (Rohini Sharma) |
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18th January 2008, 09:07 PM
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Thanx aap ji ne poem pasand kiti... Meri Khushnasibi hai ke aap ji nu iss poem naal tuhade loving dad nal guzare bachpan de pal yaad aye... Mere kol do betian han... Tanisha 2nd vich pardhi hai te Garima aje 2 years di nahi hoe... They are loving... Aap ji ne shayad font download nahi kita jis karke aap Kahani nahi padh sake... asal vich galti meri hi hai... Mainu pehla hi font download karn bare das dena chahida si... Muafi chonda haan... Font Download karn da link hai... http://www.likhari.org/MukhLink/punjabi.htm Article te Stories da link hai... http://www.likhari.org/Likhari%20dey%20Lekhak/rishi%20gulati_main%2022%20December%202007.htm Regards, Rishi Aasha ka Deep Jalaye Baitha HooN
Mann mein tujhe Basae Baitha HooN Aana hai to jaldi aa E DosT, Zindgi apni to kiyA, Udhaar ki bhi Khaye Baitha HooN. |
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