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Ek Koshish...... - 19th July 2014, 02:56 PM
Galtiyon ke liye maaf kariyega dosto.n.....


Jo meri kafiyat hai use baya.n karoo.n kaise,
Dil ko mazboor magar itna karoo.n kaise,

Koshish laakh karke dekhi tujhse door rehne ki,
Tu meri ho jaye woh lafz likhoo.n kaise,

Waqt ki lehro.n se waqif to hoon magar,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhse ab kahoo.n kaise,

Rula kar bhi khud ko tujhse door rakhna chaha,
Tujhse se door bhi rahoo.n to rahoo.n kaise,

Bahot samjha chuke is dil ko Ae Itlaaf,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhe samjhaoon kaise,

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20th July 2014, 01:42 AM
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Galtiyon ke liye maaf kariyega dosto.n.....


Jo meri kafiyat hai use baya.n karoo.n kaise,
Dil ko mazboor magar itna karoo.n kaise,

Koshish laakh karke dekhi tujhse door rehne ki,
Tu meri ho jaye woh lafz likhoo.n kaise,

Waqt ki lehro.n se waqif to hoon magar,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhse ab kahoo.n kaise,

Rula kar bhi khud ko tujhse door rakhna chaha,
Tujhse se door bhi rahoo.n to rahoo.n kaise,

Bahot samjha chuke is dil ko Ae Itlaaf,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhe samjhaoon kaise,

bohat khoob shan sahab

good to see you back in shayri mood....

keep writing



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Galtiyon ke liye maaf kariyega dosto.n.....


Jo meri kafiyat hai use baya.n karoo.n kaise,
Dil ko mazboor magar itna karoo.n kaise,

Koshish laakh karke dekhi tujhse door rehne ki,
Tu meri ho jaye woh lafz likhoo.n kaise,

Waqt ki lehro.n se waqif to hoon magar,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhse ab kahoo.n kaise,

Rula kar bhi khud ko tujhse door rakhna chaha,
Tujhse se door bhi rahoo.n to rahoo.n kaise,

Bahot samjha chuke is dil ko Ae Itlaaf,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhe samjhaoon kaise,
bahot khub! ek ek sher bahot hi khubsurat. keep it up dost

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20th July 2014, 10:22 PM
Rula kar bhi khud ko tujhse door rakhna chaha,
Tujhse se door bhi rahoo.n to rahoo.n kaise,

wahh.. Shan saheb,

Aap ke kalam ko pehli dafa pha'd raha hooN,,
mujhe aap ki ghazal boht achi lagi,,
khaas taur per above quoted verse dil chuu giya,,

Younhi mehfil roshan karte rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,,

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bahot khub! ek ek sher bahot hi khubsurat. keep it up dost
Shukriya Hassan bhai....waise to mujhe likhna hi nahi aata....pata nahin khud ba khud lafz kagaz pe bukhar gaye....


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Rula kar bhi khud ko tujhse door rakhna chaha,
Tujhse se door bhi rahoo.n to rahoo.n kaise,

wahh.. Shan saheb,

Aap ke kalam ko pehli dafa pha'd raha hooN,,
mujhe aap ki ghazal boht achi lagi,,
khaas taur per above quoted verse dil chuu giya,,

Younhi mehfil roshan karte rahiye ga,,

DuaooN k saath,,

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22nd July 2014, 10:54 AM
bahut badhiya.. likhte rahiye..

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22nd July 2014, 11:00 AM
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Galtiyon ke liye maaf kariyega dosto.n.....


Jo meri kafiyat hai use baya.n karoo.n kaise,
Dil ko mazboor magar itna karoo.n kaise,

Koshish laakh karke dekhi tujhse door rehne ki,
Tu meri ho jaye woh lafz likhoo.n kaise,

Waqt ki lehro.n se waqif to hoon magar,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhse ab kahoo.n kaise,

Rula kar bhi khud ko tujhse door rakhna chaha,
Tujhse se door bhi rahoo.n to rahoo.n kaise,

Bahot samjha chuke is dil ko Ae Itlaaf,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhe samjhaoon kaise,
nice one... keep writing shaan bro.. take care

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shukriya bhai...........................
Great lines....keep it up bro.....




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27th July 2014, 08:28 PM
waah ..... bahaut khoob .... daad aap ko Fathomless ji ...

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Galtiyon ke liye maaf kariyega dosto.n.....


Jo meri kafiyat hai use baya.n karoo.n kaise,
Dil ko mazboor magar itna karoo.n kaise,

Koshish laakh karke dekhi tujhse door rehne ki,
Tu meri ho jaye woh lafz likhoo.n kaise,

Waqt ki lehro.n se waqif to hoon magar,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhse ab kahoo.n kaise,

Rula kar bhi khud ko tujhse door rakhna chaha,
Tujhse se door bhi rahoo.n to rahoo.n kaise,

Bahot samjha chuke is dil ko Ae Itlaaf,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhe samjhaoon kaise,


Dear Shaan bhai......bahut umda likha hai aapne, accha lga padna.


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Galtiyon ke liye maaf kariyega dosto.n.....


Jo meri kafiyat hai use baya.n karoo.n kaise,
Dil ko mazboor magar itna karoo.n kaise,

Koshish laakh karke dekhi tujhse door rehne ki,
Tu meri ho jaye woh lafz likhoo.n kaise,

Waqt ki lehro.n se waqif to hoon magar,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhse ab kahoo.n kaise,

Rula kar bhi khud ko tujhse door rakhna chaha,
Tujhse se door bhi rahoo.n to rahoo.n kaise,

Bahot samjha chuke is dil ko Ae Itlaaf,
Haal-e-dil apna tujhe samjhaoon kaise,

@Nazneen

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wahhhh bahut khoob Shaan bhai

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