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8th August 2013, 10:59 AM

baal bikhraaye unki kabar Pe jab koi mehrabi roti hai,
Khayaal aata hai mujhe ke mout kitnii hasin hoti hai..
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8th August 2013, 11:39 PM

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baal bikhraaye unki kabar Pe jab koi mehrabi roti hai,
Khayaal aata hai mujhe ke mout kitnii hasin hoti hai..
not mine..
Mere khyaaal se puneet, is sher me mehrabi ki jagah mehjabeeN hona chahiye...
fir se dekh lenaa ek baar......

Shaad.....


Shaad...

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9th August 2013, 12:32 AM

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Mere khyaaal se puneet, is sher me mehrabi ki jagah mehjabeeN hona chahiye...
fir se dekh lenaa ek baar......

Shaad.....
Haa bhaiya mehjabeeN hi hai.. wo sorry muje itni ache. Se urdu ke words nahi aate to.. isi karan mujse gazal Na Ban pati bhaiya.. choti moti maamuli shaayri to ban jaati hai but gazal.. aage se mai words ko or ache se dekh ke likhunga..


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9th August 2013, 12:40 AM

aap sabhi Dosto, bhaiyo or bheno ko meri taraf se EID ki bhoot bhoot mubarakbaad

Aaj ka sher..

Tamannna tere jism ki hoti to duniya se cheen leta mai,
Ishq teri rooh se h isliye khuda se maangte hain

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