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6th September 2013, 06:35 AM
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kabr pe aaye wo meri apne hamsafar ke sath,
kon kehta h"DAFNANE"k baad"JALAYA"nahi jata..
Not mine..
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Kya baat hai puneet jee..dono sher bahut khoob hain......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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11th August 2013, 02:31 PM
bahot acche acche sher post kiye hain aapne.................doston
Bahot Khuub......
Shaad.......
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12th August 2013, 09:16 AM
Aaj ka sher..
Jab tak rahee hai Teergii*, Sab ne uthaaye Sar yahaaN,
Khursheed* jo aane huaa to Shaher saara so gayaa.
Teergii- darkness, andheraa
khursheed- sun, sooraj
~Shaad~
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12th August 2013, 11:23 AM
aaye "SULTAAN" dard bya.N kar sake "abhi wo alfaz hi nahi bana hai"
warna.. hum par ek alag kitab hi hoti
~@ :SYLTAAN RAAJ
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
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meri dunyia hi jala dali
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12th August 2013, 11:26 AM
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Aaj ka sher..
Jab tak rahee hai Teergii*, Sab ne uthaaye Sar yahaaN,
Khursheed* jo aane huaa to Shaher saara so gayaa.
Teergii- darkness, andheraa
khursheed- sun, sooraj
~Shaad~
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dil ko chune ka kaam kiya hai aapke likhe hue alfazo ne....
Bahut hi khub
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
~@ :SULTAAN
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12th August 2013, 06:21 PM
Ek pal jo tujhe bhoolne ko sochta hu,
Meri saansen meri taqdir se ulajh jati hai
Puneet..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
Kuch log duniya mein aate h fakat TANHAAIYO ke liye
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13th August 2013, 10:59 AM
chod ke aana hi to tha...
sajaya bhi use "jis dil maine kiraye pe tha"
~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
~@ :SULTAAN
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13th August 2013, 04:17 PM
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Ek pal jo tujhe bhoolne ko sochta hu,
Meri saansen meri taqdir se ulajh jati hai
Puneet..
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13th August 2013, 04:19 PM
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dil ko chune ka kaam kiya hai aapke likhe hue alfazo ne....
Bahut hi khub
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behad shukriyaa aapka Sultaan bhai.....................
aapka ye sher hame accha lagaa..
aaye "SULTAAN" dard bya.N kar sake "abhi wo alfaz hi nahi bana hai"
warna.. hum par ek alag kitab hi hoti
likhte rahiye...........
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13th August 2013, 04:30 PM
Aaj ka sher...
phool aaye hain aise Gulshan mein,
tere Sehre ko jaise aaye haiN....
Shaad.....
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13th August 2013, 05:20 PM
Bhoot ehsaan hai teri khataao ka mujh per,
Teri ek THOKAR ne mujhe chalna sikha diya..
Not mine
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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13th August 2013, 08:35 PM
waaahhh kya sher hai Puneet bhaai....... too good
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14th August 2013, 10:42 AM
Thank you bhaiya.. meri puri kosish rehti hai ki achi se achi shayariya dhoond k laau or aapke samne pesh karu..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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14th August 2013, 10:48 AM
Aaj kal har shaks hume zindgi kaise jiye ye sikha jata hai,
Unhe kon samjhaye
Ek khwab adhura h humara warna humse behtar jina kise aata hai.. Puneet..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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14th August 2013, 11:08 AM
bite rat ke khayalo me subkhuch badl chuka tha..,
subah hui "or sub ek khawb hi to tha"
~: @SULTAAN RAAJ
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
~@ :SULTAAN
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14th August 2013, 09:12 PM
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bite rat ke khayalo me subkhuch badl chuka tha..,
subah hui "or sub ek khawb hi to tha"
~: @SULTAAN RAAJ
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waaahhh Accha likhaa hai Sultaan ji............................. likhte raheN,....
Shaad............
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15th August 2013, 06:45 AM
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waaahhh Accha likhaa hai Sultaan ji............................. likhte raheN,....
Shaad............
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..hosla baddane ke liye bahut bahut sukriya shaad shahab..
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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15th August 2013, 07:47 AM
milte fareb muskuraht.. kuch ko benaam kuch ka naam rakhunga..!!
gar raha salamt to.. "SULTAAN" tujhape kuch alfaz likhunga..!!
~: @SULTAAN RAAJ
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
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meri dunyia hi jala dali
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15th August 2013, 10:42 AM
Ranjishe to hoti hai mohobbat mein magar,
Tumse ye kisne kaha ki mujhe ADHOORA kar do..
Puneet..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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14th August 2013, 09:11 PM
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Aaj kal har shaks hume zindgi kaise jiye ye sikha jata hai,
Unhe kon samjhaye
Ek khwab adhura h humara warna humse behtar jina kise aata hai.. Puneet..
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14th August 2013, 09:38 PM
kaliyo.n ke ang ang me.n miThaa saa dard hai
biimaar nikahato.n ko zaraa gud_gudaayiye
[nikahat = fragrance]
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16th August 2013, 02:37 PM
Aaj ka sher...
Tumhaare saath chalte hain hazaaroN qaafile waale,
Main apnaa jism haanthoN meiN liye, tanhaa BhaTaktaa hoon.....
shaad....
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Aaj ka sher...
Tumhaare saath chalte hain hazaaroN qaafile waale,
Main apnaa jism haanthoN meiN liye, tanhaa BhaTaktaa hoon.....
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Bahut jayada pyaari lines likhi hai aapne bhaiya.. dil ko ander tak chu gayi.. kaha se laate h aap aise jajbat dil mein.. too good..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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tumhaare saath chalte hain hazaaron qaafile waale,
main apnaa jism haanthon mein liye, tanhaa bhataktaa hoon.....
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wah wah !!!!!!!! Bahut badhiya !!!!
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16th August 2013, 07:16 PM
koi bhi wakyat aaine layak nahi tha..!!
phir bhi har ek sawal chubhta raha haqiqt ban ban ke..!!
~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
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meri dunyia hi jala dali
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koi bhi wakyat aaine layak nahi tha..!!
phir bhi har ek sawal chubhta raha haqiqt ban ban ke..!!
~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ
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Bahut Achi lagi aapki shayri Sultaan ji..
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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Bahut Achi lagi aapki shayri Sultaan ji..
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behad sukragujar hu aapka..
Or khus bhi..
Taki aapke pasand ka likh ska
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
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karta raha tarif kabse.. anjane khata ho hi gai..
sar utha dekha aaj kuch sitare mujhase khafa the..
~: @SULTAAN RAAJ
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
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18th August 2013, 09:04 AM
Tere Payar ke siwa Kuch aur baki nahi is dil main ........
Dharkanon ki rooh tak jo kurbaan kar chuke hai tujh par.... Vikas
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16th August 2013, 09:49 PM
aap ko bhuul jaaye.n ham itane to bevafaa nahii.n
aap se kyaa gilaa kare.n aap se kuchh gilaa nahii.n
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17th August 2013, 10:41 AM
zindgi yu hue basar tanha, kafilla saath magar safar tanha,
apne saaye se chonk jaate hai, umr guzari hai es kadar tanha...nm
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17th August 2013, 11:08 AM
Uthti nahi nigaah KISI or ki taraf,
PAABAND kar gayi hai kisi ki NAZAR mujhe..
not mine
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18th August 2013, 02:47 PM
yaad aate haiN tumheN aaj bhi hum,
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18th August 2013, 04:29 PM
mout kisi dusman ka chehara nahi hoti..
kisi ki paband bhi nahi hoti..
tabhi to aaj ek or betajbadshah "a.M.r" ho gya..
~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
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meri dunyia hi jala dali
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19th August 2013, 11:19 AM
raat badi mushkil se sulaya hai maine kud ko
In aankho ko tere sapno ka laalch de ke..
..Puneet
har kisi k naseeb mein kaha likhi hoti h CHAHATE yaha,
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19th August 2013, 12:38 PM
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raat badi mushkil se sulaya hai maine kud ko
In aankho ko tere sapno ka laalch de ke..
..Puneet
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bahot hi accha sher share kiyaa hai mere bhai Puneet... mehfil sajaate raho, khush raho, aabaad raho...........
Shaad..........
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19th August 2013, 12:39 PM
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mout kisi dusman ka chehara nahi hoti..
kisi ki paband bhi nahi hoti..
tabhi to aaj ek or betajbadshah "a.M.r" ho gya..
~@ :SULTAAN RAAJ
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Acchey ehsaas hain aapke Sultan bhai.......... bahot acchey..
likhte rahiye
Shaad..........
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20th August 2013, 09:03 AM
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Acchey ehsaas hain aapke Sultan bhai.......... bahot acchey..
likhte rahiye
Shaad..........
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Sukriya janab ... Hosla hafjai ke liye bahut bahut sukragujar hu..
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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20th August 2013, 09:07 AM
dosto se na mile to taklif hoti hai..
par fayda hai pith maine khanjar nahi lagta..
~: NM
badde muddat se talash thi..!!
hume bhi...
ek "HAMRAAH" ki
mila bhi ek khwob to aaye dost..!!
meri dunyia hi jala dali
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Aaj ka sher...
Ab tak nahi bhuula hoon main maathey ki wo Bindiyaa sanam,
Jise dekh looN to din chaDhey, Chhup Jaaye to ho Shaam......
Shaad......
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