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main taaron se ghar ko sajounga jab tum milne aaogi....(nazam) |
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main taaron se ghar ko sajounga jab tum milne aaogi....(nazam) -
28th July 2006, 11:00 AM
dosto apni ek nazam pesh kar raha hoon jis main kisi ke aane ka intzaar hai or uske aane pe is dil ka kaya haal ho wo main is main byaan kar raha hoon.......
main taaron se ghar ko sajounga jab tum milne aaogi.... main chaand ko payal pehnaounga jab tum milne aaogi....... main raat ki aankh main kajal lagounga jab tum milne aaogi...... main suraj ko chiraag dikhaounga jab tum milne aaogi..... main phoolon se khushboo churaounga jab tum milne aaogi..... main sehra main nadiya bahaounga jab tum milne aaogi....... main aakash ko zamee pe laounga jab tum milne aaogi...... main saray dardo ko bhool jaounga jab tum milne aaogi........ main tere qadmon main bicch jaounga jab tum milne aaogi...... main us din mar hee jaounga jab tum milne aaogi..... main us din mar hee jaounga jab tum milne aaogi.......... umeed karta hoon apke dil main jagha milegi......raj....... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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28th July 2006, 11:11 AM
Kya oomda likhte ho boss, aapka to jawab hi nahi. Mere paas to koi alfaz hi nahi jo aapki taarif kar sake. Dil Khush kar diya. Bas isi tarah likhte rahiye. - RK
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28th July 2006, 04:24 PM
raj ji..
sach kahu? lagta hai aapne kisi se beinthaan mohabbat ki hai.. jiski tadap aapke nazmo mein saaf dikhti hai.. is nazm ko pad ke na jane kyu palkein bheeg gai.. par ek shikayat hai.. kya unke mil jane ke baad aap unhein aur humein chod kar chale jaenge? nahi na? to marne ki baat kyu? yu kahie ki aap jee uthenge jab wo milne aaengi.. aapki nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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hi -
11th August 2006, 06:24 PM
gulzar bhai app pehli daffa meri post par aiye main appka khairmaqdam karta hoon appko meri nazam pasand i iske liye main appka shukarguzaar hoon.....umeed karta hoon appka saath yu he milta rahega.......raj........
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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main taaron se ghar ko sajounga jab tum milne aaogi....(nazam) |
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main taaron se ghar ko sajounga jab tum milne aaogi....(nazam) -
11th August 2006, 08:30 PM
veer ji bahot achhi nazam likhi hai aapne. aur kuch nahi kaungi bas itna kahungi ki aapka likha hame bahot pasand aata hai. aapke liye hamare dil me hamesha jagaha rahegi
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hi -
14th August 2006, 05:27 PM
raj ji..
sach kahu? lagta hai aapne kisi se beinthaan mohabbat ki hai.. jiski tadap aapke nazmo mein saaf dikhti hai.. is nazm ko pad ke na jane kyu palkein bheeg gai.. par ek shikayat hai.. kya unke mil jane ke baad aap unhein aur humein chod kar chale jaenge? nahi na? to marne ki baat kyu? yu kahie ki aap jee uthenge jab wo milne aaengi.. aapki nisha nisha ji appko meri nazak achi lagi appka bhut bhut shukria.....yaha tak pyar ki baat hai....haan main kisi se bhut mohabat karta hoon lakin wo meri kabhi nahi ho sakti......bass uski baatain hee is zindagi ka sarmaya hai........raj...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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hi -
26th August 2006, 11:27 AM
veer ji bahot achhi nazam likhi hai aapne. aur kuch nahi kaungi bas itna kahungi ki aapka likha hame bahot pasand aata hai. aapke liye hamare dil me hamesha jagaha rahegi
aapki dost pooja pooja app dosto ki badaulat hee raj ka wajood kayam hai gar app ka saath na ho raj kab ka bikhar gaya hota....appko meri nazam achi lagi main appka shukarguzaar hoon.....raj..... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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