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qit'aa - 26th July 2016, 07:24 AM
zaKhm jo dooriiyoN ne baKhshe the
waqt ke saath, bhar gaye hoNge

din nayaa aur nayi ummeedeiN
puraane khwaab, mar gaye hoNge


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26th July 2016, 05:40 PM
Afsos ki purane khwaab marte nahi. Phir phir jaag kar tadpate hain.

Kaise hain ? Veer ji

Apko itne time baad yaha dekh kar acha laga...

Thoda zyada waqt nikala kijiye. Apko jitna padte hain utna kam lagtaa hai.

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27th July 2016, 11:03 AM
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zaKhm jo dooriiyoN ne baKhshe the
waqt ke saath, bhar gaye hoNge

din nayaa aur nayi ummeedeiN
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zaKhm jo dooriiyoN ne baKhshe the
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din nayaa aur nayi ummeedeiN
puraane khwaab, mar gaye hoNge


maikash
Bahut khoob......... waah!!!!!!!

Daad qubool karein..maikash sahab..ummeed hai jaldi jaldi apko padhne ka mauka milta rahega.....

Salamat rahein..


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Afsos ki purane khwaab marte nahi. Phir phir jaag kar tadpate hain.

ziNdagi, sabse ek jaisa bartaav naeeN karti behna, vaise hi jo shabd, misrey aapke liye kuch mayiine rakhte hoNge vo kisi aur ke liye alag matlab rakhte hoNge

kisi dukhti rag pe haaTh rakh diya ho mere in aawaara se lafzoN ne to muaaf kar dena

Kaise hain ? Veer ji

theek hi hooN choTi, aap logoN ko in dinoN bohat yaad karta hooN

Apko itne time baad yaha dekh kar acha laga...

Thoda zyada waqt nikala kijiye. Apko jitna padte hain utna kam lagtaa hai.

aane waale kuch dinoN ke baad waqt hi waqt hai, phir meri be'tukii shayari se aap sabko pakaata rahooNga


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rab raakha behna, bacchoN ko mujh khana-kharaab ka pyaar zaroor dijiyega


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Bohat khoob qita pesh kiya aapne maikash sahab

Acha laga padh ke
Mujahid bhai, salaam


aapse pehli baar mukhaatib ho raha hooN, farz ki hidaayat hai ke aapka mehfil meiN isteqbaal karooN, to mere bhai, khush-am-ded


zarra'nawaazi ke alag ke shukurguzaar hooN bhai


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Bahut khoob......... waah!!!!!!!

Daad qubool karein..maikash sahab..ummeed hai jaldi jaldi apko padhne ka mauka milta rahega.....

Salamat rahein..

daad tasleem, donoN haathoN se Madhu jee, bohat shukriya

kohshish jaari hai jee, baaqi rab jaane


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Afsos ki purane khwaab marte nahi. Phir phir jaag kar tadpate hain.

Kaise hain ? Veer ji

Apko itne time baad yaha dekh kar acha laga...

Thoda zyada waqt nikala kijiye. Apko jitna padte hain utna kam lagtaa hai.

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theek hooN choTi, aasha karta hooN ke Ghar meiN sab kushal-maNgal hoga


har ek ko khwaaboN se alag nisbat hai


kohshish to karta rehta hooN ke aata raha rahuN, aaj-kal sukhanfehmi utni sehal nahiiN jitni pehle hua karti thi isliye gaayab rehta hooN, ek Ghazal zer-e-ta'meer hai us meiN ek she'r raqm hua hai jo is baat ko wajeeh kar payega shayad

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zaKhm jo dooriiyoN ne baKhshe the
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waqt ke saath darya bhi ssokh jaate hein.......
jannab bahut hi khoobsurti se vyan kia hai aapne is falsafay ko.

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18th August 2016, 11:24 PM
maikash bhaiya:

SSA.. Pranaam

kaise hain aap? aur aapki tabiyat ab kaisi hain? mujhe bahot hi khushi hoti hai jab bazm mein aapka kuchh likhaa huaa dekhtaa huuN to.. bahot hi umdaah dil KhuSh ho gayaa... yuunhi bazm ki raunaq badhaate rahiye..

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