Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Shayri-e-Dard

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rating: Thread Rating: 3 votes, 5.00 average. Display Modes
tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......(nazam)
Old
  (#1)
rajveeer
shayri is my life
rajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud of
 
rajveeer's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,938
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Punjab(Phagwara)Now:(California) USA
Rep Power: 32
tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......(nazam) - 28th September 2006, 12:42 PM

dosto app sabko raj ka bhut sara pyar ,ajj main ek aise nazam ke saath appki mehfil main hazir hua hoon jo koi tasabur nahi ek haqkit hai jinda haqkit......jo meri apni kahani kehti hai..... maine yeh nazam sunita ji ki wo gazal ...milne par ek nagma pyar ka gaiya na gaya se mutasir hokar likhi hai.....wo ek tasabur thaa or yeh ek haqkit hai.......umeed karta hoon appka bharpoor pyar milega........


us waqt ki har yaad dil main jinda hai,
jab hum ek doje ke saath thay,
wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
jo teri aagosh main guzara thaa maine,
wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo raste ajj bhee wahi khare hai,
jin par chalkar hum mile bicchre,
wo aam ka pair sadiyon tak,
hamari kahani dohrata rahega,
mile thay do dharkte dil mere saye main,
yeh sacchai zamane ko batata rahega,
wo mazaar hamare pyar ki gawahi deta rahega,
yaha sajda karke manga thaa ek doje ko,
saath jeene marne ka wada kiya thaa......

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo mehkti huie khushbu,
jo shayad hamare jismo se aa rahi thee,
wo sheetal c hawa gungunati huie,
hamari chhahat ka geet gati huie,
wo bojhil saansain humme behkati huie,
teri aankho main uttra hua mera akas,
meri dharkano main tu samati huie,
chand lamho main poora jeevan jiya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo pakshiyon ka chechahana,
hamari dharkno ka madhur geet gana,
dil ki baatain ek doje ko batana,
wo haan haan wo na na,
tera roothna or mera manana,
bezubaan chhahat ka khamosh sa afsana,
saye ki tarha tera liptna mujhse,
mera tujhme saanso ki tarha sama jana,
tere badan ko apne honto se sehlana,
tujhe chupke se apne aang lagana,
tere badan pe apna naam likh diya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

ajj bhee wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
gar tu saath degi to har lamha,
yu hee sadiyon tak jinda rahega,
un guzre huye haseen lamho ki kasam,
jab tak hai mere dam main dam,
na hogi kabhi teri chasham nam,
haan main ye ikraar karta hoon,
main tujhse bepanah mohabat karta hoon,
tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......

apke jawaab ka muntzir appka..........raj.......


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
 Send a message via ICQ to rajveeer Send a message via Yahoo to rajveeer  
Reply With Quote
Re: tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......(nazam)
Old
  (#2)
dilip200
Adhoori Aas
dilip200 has much to be proud ofdilip200 has much to be proud ofdilip200 has much to be proud ofdilip200 has much to be proud ofdilip200 has much to be proud ofdilip200 has much to be proud ofdilip200 has much to be proud ofdilip200 has much to be proud ofdilip200 has much to be proud of
 
dilip200's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,543
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: india , shivpuri
Rep Power: 30
Re: tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......(nazam) - 28th September 2006, 01:12 PM

us waqt ki har yaad dil main jinda hai,
jab hum ek doje ke saath thay,
wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
jo teri aagosh main guzara thaa maine,
wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo raste ajj bhee wahi khare hai,
jin par chalkar hum mile bicchre,
wo aam ka pair sadiyon tak,
hamari kahani dohrata rahega,
mile thay do dharkte dil mere saye main,
yeh sacchai zamane ko batata rahega,
wo mazaar hamare pyar ki gawahi deta rahega,
yaha sajda karke manga thaa ek doje ko,
saath jeene marne ka wada kiya thaa......

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo mehkti huie khushbu,
jo shayad hamare jismo se aa rahi thee,
wo sheetal c hawa gungunati huie,
hamari chhahat ka geet gati huie,
wo bojhil saansain humme behkati huie,
teri aankho main uttra hua mera akas,
meri dharkano main tu samati huie,
chand lamho main poora jeevan jiya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo pakshiyon ka chechahana,
hamari dharkno ka madhur geet gana,
dil ki baatain ek doje ko batana,
wo haan haan wo na na,
tera roothna or mera manana,
bezubaan chhahat ka khamosh sa afsana,
saye ki tarha tera liptna mujhse,
mera tujhme saanso ki tarha sama jana,
tere badan ko apne honto se sehlana,
tujhe chupke se apne aang lagana,
tere badan pe apna naam likh diya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

ajj bhee wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
gar tu saath degi to har lamha,
yu hee sadiyon tak jinda rahega,
un guzre huye haseen lamho ki kasam,
jab tak hai mere dam main dam,
na hogi kabhi teri chasham nam,
haan main ye ikraar karta hoon,
main tujhse bepanah mohabat karta hoon,
tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......


waah raj sahab
aapki is poori nazm ki maine gunguna ke dekha hai... bakai aapki dastane mohhabe behad sanjeeda hai.... ek doosre ke sanh bitaye har palo.n ko aapne behad khoobsurati se kagaz per utara hai .... padte padte ek dhundhli si tasveer aankhone ke samne se gjarne lagi thi ..... bakai kisi ko pyar karna to apne aap main khuda ki iwadat hai hi per pyar main kisi kop khuda man lena......
shawad nahi hai mere paas is nazm ki tarif ke liye ...................
dil se nikli hui daad kabool farmaiyega. janab

apna khyal rakhiyega

aapka dost
dilip


" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab


Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
  Send a message via Yahoo to dilip200  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
Dhaval
Shayri.com Moderator
Dhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comDhaval is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
Dhaval's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 10,518
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 58
28th September 2006, 02:37 PM

BIG B KYA KHU AN AAPKI IS NAZAAM K BARE ME JAISE LAGTA HAI AAPNE APNE UN BITAYE HUE PYAAR KE LAMHE KO JAIS SAMNE RAKH DIYA HO AISA LAGTA HAI

BAHOT HI BEHTARTIN TARIKE SE AAPNE ISE PESH KIYA HAI AAPKA CHHOTU BAHOT KHUS H GAYA ISE PADHKE

MERI DAAD KUBUL KIJIYEGA BIG B

APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE

AAPKA SHAITAAN
DHAVAL


*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#4)
moon
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
28th September 2006, 04:49 PM

buhut khub raj buhut acha likha hai buhut gehray ehsaasat hain
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
munfairy
Registered User
munfairy is a jewel in the roughmunfairy is a jewel in the roughmunfairy is a jewel in the roughmunfairy is a jewel in the rough
 
munfairy's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 850
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 20
28th September 2006, 05:06 PM

HI RAJ,,sach kahun raj aapki nazm hai to lajawab,,magar pasand is liiye nahi aayi,, kyunki, yeh ek HAQIQAT HAI,...aur hamare raj ko kisi se itni be panah mohabbat hokar bhi wo uske saath nahi too,,,,,achha nahi laga yeh jaan kar.....

well agar sirf nazm ki tarif karun,,to i hv no words,bcoz really bohoot hi achhi likhi hai aapne..hye raj b happy ok,aur haan intezaar rahega aapki agli nazm ka,,jismain aaap apni khushi ko zahir karoge ok,,

************************************

kisi na kisi ko kisi pe aitbaar ho jata hai,
ajnabi koi shaks yaar ho jata hai
khubiyon se hi nahi hoti pehchhaan
ek ada se bhi pyar ho jata hai

************************************


(( khuwahishaat woh bhanwar hai,jismein fanskar Insaan apna Maksad_hayat bhul jata hai ******Isi liye insaan ko usi cheez ki khuwahish karni chaiyiye jo puri ho sake! ))

kuch samjhe raj ji,so b happy like this:-)


*************(`.) Always *********
`.(`.) Keep
(`.). Smiling!
`..


Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(`.) Always *************
`.(`.) Keep
(`.). Smiling!
`..
   
Reply With Quote
Re: tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......(nazam)
Old
  (#6)
pooja_d
Registered User
pooja_d has much to be proud ofpooja_d has much to be proud ofpooja_d has much to be proud ofpooja_d has much to be proud ofpooja_d has much to be proud ofpooja_d has much to be proud ofpooja_d has much to be proud ofpooja_d has much to be proud ofpooja_d has much to be proud of
 
pooja_d's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 3,896
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: currntly : Italy and ( home'town : Jaipur )
Rep Power: 32
Re: tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......(nazam) - 28th September 2006, 05:23 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by rajveeer
dosto app sabko raj ka bhut sara pyar ,ajj main ek aise nazam ke saath appki mehfil main hazir hua hoon jo koi tasabur nahi ek haqkit hai jinda haqkit......jo meri apni kahani kehti hai..... maine yeh nazam sunita ji ki wo gazal ...milne par ek nagma pyar ka gaiya na gaya se mutasir hokar likhi hai.....wo ek tasabur thaa or yeh ek haqkit hai.......umeed karta hoon appka bharpoor pyar milega........


us waqt ki har yaad dil main jinda hai,
jab hum ek doje ke saath thay,
wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
jo teri aagosh main guzara thaa maine,
wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo raste ajj bhee wahi khare hai,
jin par chalkar hum mile bicchre,
wo aam ka pair sadiyon tak,
hamari kahani dohrata rahega,
mile thay do dharkte dil mere saye main,
yeh sacchai zamane ko batata rahega,
wo mazaar hamare pyar ki gawahi deta rahega,
yaha sajda karke manga thaa ek doje ko,
saath jeene marne ka wada kiya thaa......

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo mehkti huie khushbu,
jo shayad hamare jismo se aa rahi thee,
wo sheetal c hawa gungunati huie,
hamari chhahat ka geet gati huie,
wo bojhil saansain humme behkati huie,
teri aankho main uttra hua mera akas,
meri dharkano main tu samati huie,
chand lamho main poora jeevan jiya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo pakshiyon ka chechahana,
hamari dharkno ka madhur geet gana,
dil ki baatain ek doje ko batana,
wo haan haan wo na na,
tera roothna or mera manana,
bezubaan chhahat ka khamosh sa afsana,
saye ki tarha tera liptna mujhse,
mera tujhme saanso ki tarha sama jana,
tere badan ko apne honto se sehlana,
tujhe chupke se apne aang lagana,
tere badan pe apna naam likh diya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

ajj bhee wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
gar tu saath degi to har lamha,
yu hee sadiyon tak jinda rahega,
un guzre huye haseen lamho ki kasam,
jab tak hai mere dam main dam,
na hogi kabhi teri chasham nam,
haan main ye ikraar karta hoon,
main tujhse bepanah mohabat karta hoon,
tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......

apke jawaab ka muntzir appka..........raj.......
aaj nishabd hu.............sirf itna kaha sakungi ki unhi likhte rahana bas

graze

aapki dost
pooja


===========Deepika===========
Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa
Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
   
Reply With Quote
Re: tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......(nazam)
Old
  (#7)
sunita thakur
Moderator
sunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.comsunita thakur is the among the best Shayars at Shayri.com
 
sunita thakur's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 15,197
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 62
Re: tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......(nazam) - 29th September 2006, 10:52 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by rajveeer
dosto app sabko raj ka bhut sara pyar ,ajj main ek aise nazam ke saath appki mehfil main hazir hua hoon jo koi tasabur nahi ek haqkit hai jinda haqkit......jo meri apni kahani kehti hai..... maine yeh nazam sunita ji ki wo gazal ...milne par ek nagma pyar ka gaiya na gaya se mutasir hokar likhi hai.....wo ek tasabur thaa or yeh ek haqkit hai.......umeed karta hoon appka bharpoor pyar milega........


us waqt ki har yaad dil main jinda hai,
jab hum ek doje ke saath thay,
wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
jo teri aagosh main guzara thaa maine,
wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo raste ajj bhee wahi khare hai,
jin par chalkar hum mile bicchre,
wo aam ka pair sadiyon tak,
hamari kahani dohrata rahega,
mile thay do dharkte dil mere saye main,
yeh sacchai zamane ko batata rahega,
wo mazaar hamare pyar ki gawahi deta rahega,
yaha sajda karke manga thaa ek doje ko,
saath jeene marne ka wada kiya thaa......

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo mehkti huie khushbu,
jo shayad hamare jismo se aa rahi thee,
wo sheetal c hawa gungunati huie,
hamari chhahat ka geet gati huie,
wo bojhil saansain humme behkati huie,
teri aankho main uttra hua mera akas,
meri dharkano main tu samati huie,
chand lamho main poora jeevan jiya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

wo pakshiyon ka chechahana,
hamari dharkno ka madhur geet gana,
dil ki baatain ek doje ko batana,
wo haan haan wo na na,
tera roothna or mera manana,
bezubaan chhahat ka khamosh sa afsana,
saye ki tarha tera liptna mujhse,
mera tujhme saanso ki tarha sama jana,
tere badan ko apne honto se sehlana,
tujhe chupke se apne aang lagana,
tere badan pe apna naam likh diya thaa.....

wo har ehsaas chal phir raha hai,
jo humne ek doje ko diya thaa......

ajj bhee wo har lamha saans le raha hai,
gar tu saath degi to har lamha,
yu hee sadiyon tak jinda rahega,
un guzre huye haseen lamho ki kasam,
jab tak hai mere dam main dam,
na hogi kabhi teri chasham nam,
haan main ye ikraar karta hoon,
main tujhse bepanah mohabat karta hoon,
tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......tu mera khuda hai main teri ibadat karta hoon......

apke jawaab ka muntzir appka..........raj.......
rajveer ji namaskar,

phele to mai.n aapko thanks kahna chahugi ki aapne mujhe etna sanmaan diya, ki aapne meri gazal "Milney par ek geet pyar ka gaaya na gaya" se mutasir hokar yeh nazam likhi hai.n to mujhe aapni us gazal par naaz ho aaya, ki etne badey shayer aur meri gazal se mutasir.....!

ji ha sir aapki nazam kuad aapki kahani kah rahi hai, to hum kaya kahey, bas yehi kaheygey ki aapka pyar aapko miley yehi dua kar sakte hai.n

aap yu hi likhtey rahiye, aapko padna aacha lagta hai.



aapki dost


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
Reply With Quote
hi
Old
  (#8)
rajveeer
shayri is my life
rajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud of
 
rajveeer's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,938
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Punjab(Phagwara)Now:(California) USA
Rep Power: 32
hi - 30th September 2006, 10:46 AM

waah raj sahab
aapki is poori nazm ki maine gunguna ke dekha hai... bakai aapki dastane mohhabe behad sanjeeda hai.... ek doosre ke sanh bitaye har palo.n ko aapne behad khoobsurati se kagaz per utara hai .... padte padte ek dhundhli si tasveer aankhone ke samne se gjarne lagi thi ..... bakai kisi ko pyar karna to apne aap main khuda ki iwadat hai hi per pyar main kisi kop khuda man lena......
shawad nahi hai mere paas is nazm ki tarif ke liye ...................
dil se nikli hui daad kabool farmaiyega. janab

apna khyal rakhiyega

aapka dost
dilip

dilip ji appko raj ka pyaar bhara parnaam.....yeh nazam maine jab likhi thgee to soach raha thaa ki sab ka kaya jawaab hoga ....magar khushi huie tere reply parh kar.....tumko meri nazam pasand i iske liye main tahe dil se tera shukria aada karta hoon umeed karta hoon yu hee tum dosto ka pyaar milta rahega.......take care......raj.....


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
 Send a message via ICQ to rajveeer Send a message via Yahoo to rajveeer  
Reply With Quote
hi
Old
  (#9)
rajveeer
shayri is my life
rajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud of
 
rajveeer's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,938
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Punjab(Phagwara)Now:(California) USA
Rep Power: 32
hi - 2nd October 2006, 03:00 PM

BIG B KYA KHU AN AAPKI IS NAZAAM K BARE ME JAISE LAGTA HAI AAPNE APNE UN BITAYE HUE PYAAR KE LAMHE KO JAIS SAMNE RAKH DIYA HO AISA LAGTA HAI

BAHOT HI BEHTARTIN TARIKE SE AAPNE ISE PESH KIYA HAI AAPKA CHHOTU BAHOT KHUS H GAYA ISE PADHKE

MERI DAAD KUBUL KIJIYEGA BIG B

APNA KHAYAL RAKHIYE

AAPKA SHAITAAN
DHAVAL

dhaval tumko raj ka pyaar tum meri post par aiye or mujhe itne pyaar se parha or pasand kiya main tahe dil se tera shukarguzaar hoon.....umeed karta hoon yu hee tera pyaar milta rahega......take care.......raj.....


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
 Send a message via ICQ to rajveeer Send a message via Yahoo to rajveeer  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#10)
anupreet
Registered User
anupreet is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 2
Join Date: Sep 2006
Rep Power: 0
3rd October 2006, 12:35 PM

hi raj.....kya likhu samhj hi nahin aa raha.... lekin acha laga jo tum ko itna acha reply mila..... i hope ab bina kisi ko sunaye hi apni ghazals , nazam yahan send kar diya karo gay..... may god bless u
   
Reply With Quote
hi
Old
  (#11)
rajveeer
shayri is my life
rajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud of
 
rajveeer's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,938
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Punjab(Phagwara)Now:(California) USA
Rep Power: 32
hi - 9th October 2006, 10:29 AM

buhut khub raj buhut acha likha hai buhut gehray ehsaasat hain
__________________
moona

moona ji appko raj ka pyar bhara salaam....app meri post par i usko itne dil se parha or reply kiya iske liye main tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon......umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath milta rahega.....take care.....raj........


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
 Send a message via ICQ to rajveeer Send a message via Yahoo to rajveeer  
Reply With Quote
hi
Old
  (#12)
rajveeer
shayri is my life
rajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud ofrajveeer has much to be proud of
 
rajveeer's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,938
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Punjab(Phagwara)Now:(California) USA
Rep Power: 32
hi - 16th October 2006, 01:44 PM

HI RAJ,,sach kahun raj aapki nazm hai to lajawab,,magar pasand is liiye nahi aayi,, kyunki, yeh ek HAQIQAT HAI,...aur hamare raj ko kisi se itni be panah mohabbat hokar bhi wo uske saath nahi too,,,,,achha nahi laga yeh jaan kar.....

well agar sirf nazm ki tarif karun,,to i hv no words,bcoz really bohoot hi achhi likhi hai aapne..hye raj b happy ok,aur haan intezaar rahega aapki agli nazm ka,,jismain aaap apni khushi ko zahir karoge ok,,

soni ji appko raj ka salaam....app meri post par aiye or isko itne gaur se parha or apne khylaat byaan kiye main tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon....umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath bana rahega....take care....raj......


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
 Send a message via ICQ to rajveeer Send a message via Yahoo to rajveeer  
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
ibadat-e-yaar ko aiya hoon main kafar nahi,........... rajveeer Shayri-e-Dard 11 6th October 2006 08:44 PM
ibadat-e-yaar ko aiya hoon main kafar nahi,......... rajveeer Shayri-e-Ishq 7 19th July 2006 01:34 PM
aaj bhi main tujhse pyaar karta hoon. sushiljain Shayri-e-Dard 5 15th April 2006 10:58 AM
Aaj bhi main tujhse karta hoon pyar itschahat Shayri-e-Ishq 0 14th April 2006 12:23 PM
main tujse pyaar karta hoon......... passionatelover Shayri-e-Ishq 0 7th April 2006 09:37 PM



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2022, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com