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mera naseeb -
17th February 2003, 05:00 PM
sochti hoon naa jaane kyon main tumko bhula paati nahin
aur bhool kar bhi tumko kabhi yaad aa paati nahin hamaari tumhaari chaahat ki yeh daastaan ajeeb hai tumhein chaaha magar paaya nahin yahi mera naseeb hai ab duriaan aur faasle yahi meri kismat hai hum nahin milenge kabhi yahi bas haqeeqat hai jiske thae tum naseeb mein woh tumhaare kareeb hai tumhein chaaha magar paaya nahin yahi mera naseeb hai |
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18th February 2003, 06:12 AM
waah!
bahot acha likhte haiN aap mahima ji.. ek ek lafz tareef ke qaabil hai! maafi chahta huuN waise, har thread meiN maiN jawaab nahiiN de pata =\ umeed hai ki aap isi taraH likhte raheN ge..! aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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Aman.yahan bhi -
11th March 2003, 02:43 PM
Aman .
Mujhe asha to thi ki tum is meinreply zaroor karoge.Mahima ji ladki jo hain. Critics |
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hi -
11th March 2003, 03:11 PM
hi mahemaji
as usuall aap yeh shayr bi bhut acha likha hein i like these lines lot ab duriaan aur faasle yahi meri kismat hai hum nahin milenge kabhi yahi bas haqeeqat hai keep it up bye |
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pad lena -
11th March 2003, 10:45 PM
wah wah wah ,
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11th March 2003, 11:31 PM
wah wah wah wah.. kya khoob likha hai.. very nice, aise hi likhte rahiye ga...
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aww -
12th March 2003, 12:07 AM
aww mahima ji aapke gajab ka likha hai aansu aa gaye padhkar.....dil ko chu gaya aapka likhna
Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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reply -
11th April 2003, 01:56 PM
Thanx a lot for ur apreciation.......Keep on replying and encouraging me all of u....love mahima
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13th April 2003, 12:07 AM
hi mahima ji,
wakai bohat achcha likha hai aapne... khas taur per pehla sher bohat pasand aaya.. sochti hoon naa jaane kyon main tumko bhula paati nahin aur bhool kar bhi tumko kabhi yaad aa paati nahin hamaari tumhaari chaahat ki yeh daastaan ajeeb hai tumhein chaaha magar paaya nahin yahi mera naseeb hai aise hi likhti rahiye aur muskurati rahiye... __________________________________________________ __ Critics ji please yaha ka mahol kharab kerne ki koshish mat kariye |
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