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"KaanTe" - 25th June 2011, 12:21 PM
woh raahon mein humaari kaanTe hi bichhaate rahe,
shikhar par tha dard, hum phir bhi muskuraate rahe,

jab kabhi bhi hone laga, andhera unki duniya mein,
khud apne hathon se hum, ashiana apna jalate rahe,

kya ehmiat baaki hai mere vaujood ki unke liye?
ghairon ki aghosh mein jaakar har bar batlaate rahe,

kuchchh purani dushmani hogi naseebon ki mujhse,
bichhaDne ke baad jo un se baar baar milaate rahe,

kuchchh is kadar numaaish hui 'Anmol' ki barbaadi ki,
dil ke tukDe ho rahe the, aur woh taaliyaan bajate rahe.
   
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Wah! - 30th June 2011, 08:12 AM
Adaab Janaab Zakhmi Aashiq Sahab!

Very deep emotions beautifully put into words. A great effort indeed! Jazbaat aur khayalaat boht pasand aaye humein! Khush Rahein!

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1st July 2011, 08:23 AM
kuchchh is kadar numaaish hui 'Anmol' ki barbaadi ki,
dil ke tukDe ho rahe the, aur woh taaliyaan bajate rahe.

Bahut Acchey ... Anmol Ji !!!!!!!!!!!



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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6th July 2011, 08:32 AM
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Adaab Janaab Zakhmi Aashiq Sahab!

Very deep emotions beautifully put into words. A great effort indeed! Jazbaat aur khayalaat boht pasand aaye humein! Khush Rahein!
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kuchchh is kadar numaaish hui 'Anmol' ki barbaadi ki,
dil ke tukDe ho rahe the, aur woh taaliyaan bajate rahe.

Bahut Acchey ... Anmol Ji !!!!!!!!!!!
Naresh ji Ghazal ko pasand karne ke liye shukriya!!!
   
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10th July 2011, 03:11 PM
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woh raahon mein humaari kaanTe hi bichhaate rahe,
shikhar par tha dard, hum phir bhi muskuraate rahe,

jab kabhi bhi hone laga, andhera unki duniya mein,
khud apne hathon se hum, ashiana apna jalate rahe,

kya ehmiat baaki hai mere vaujood ki unke liye?
ghairon ki aghosh mein jaakar har bar batlaate rahe,

kuchchh purani dushmani hogi naseebon ki mujhse,
bichhaDne ke baad jo un se baar baar milaate rahe,

kuchchh is kadar numaaish hui 'Anmol' ki barbaadi ki,
dil ke tukDe ho rahe the, aur woh taaliyaan bajate rahe.


Bhut he umda hor adab se likha gaya hai
ek ek shabad apni jubani aap ne bayan kiya hai

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10th July 2011, 11:01 PM
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