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hum... - 25th January 2009, 02:01 PM
Aaye hain tere ghar me.n,
yahi ke ho ke reh jayenge. . . .
Utha ke chhupa de aab-o-hawa bhi apni,
hum ise bhi apni khushboo se rang jayenge. . . .
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Aaye hain tere ghar me.n,
yahi ke ho ke reh jayenge. . . .
Utha ke chhupa de aab-o-hawa bhi apni,
hum ise bhi apni khushboo se rang jayenge. . . .
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Aaye hain tere ghar me.n,
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Utha ke chhupa de aab-o-hawa bhi apni,
hum ise bhi apni khushboo se rang jayenge. . . .
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Nice wordings......................................Ritu ji aap kahan hain......

Yahan Ghazal comp mein aap jaise achhe shairon ki zururat hai...............

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Nice wordings......................................Ritu ji aap kahan hain......

Yahan Ghazal comp mein aap jaise achhe shairon ki zururat hai...............

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bahut khoob dear................keep it up........................

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bahut khoob dear................keep it up........................
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