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4th March 2011, 11:28 AM
dosto bahut waqt ke baad ek nayi peshkash. Iss mein zindagi ke, awaam ke, samaajh ke aur hamaari soch ke bahut se daagdar pehlu hain jinka zikar na karte hue bhi kiya gaya hai. aap sab samajhdaar hain ummeed hai ki samajh lein gey.
main ruka hota to shayad, woh mujhe gale se lagaati
magar chal paDa us rah par jise khaak tak nahin apnaati
jal raha hai mera vaujood ab tak teri is tapash mein,
eh shamma, tum bhi ab buj kyun nahin jaati
sabko jaana, sabko parkha, sabko samajh liya magar,
main kaun hoon yeh duniya mujhe kyun nahin batlaati
ek razaai hai oDi hui, ek chaadar bhi hai maili si,
roz raat mujhe na-paak karein, yeh kyun nahin nahati?
woh bhi hain joh khudah ke naam par apradh karte hain,
mujhse gandgi gayi, magar unse yeh bandagi kyun nahin jaati
main na jaane kis gham main deewana ho gaya is kadar
ke meri maut bhi paas aane se hai hichkichaati
chain-o-aman na mila hai kissi ko markar bhi 'Anmol'
ya raakh ban jaaye ga, ya sone ko mile gi dharti ki chhaati
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5th March 2011, 11:05 AM
sabko jaana, sabko parkha, sabko samajh liya magar,
main kaun hoon yeh duniya mujhe kyun nahin batlaati
bohat khoob Anmol sahab.........................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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8th March 2011, 01:24 PM
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sabko jaana, sabko parkha, sabko samajh liya magar,
main kaun hoon yeh duniya mujhe kyun nahin batlaati
bohat khoob Anmol sahab.........................
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zainy ji thank you for appreciating the words
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8th March 2011, 02:12 PM
behad khoobsurat........ extremely beautiful......... keep writing.... mishka
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10th March 2011, 12:17 PM
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behad khoobsurat........ extremely beautiful......... keep writing.... mishka
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thanks a lot for the appreciation mishka
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15th March 2011, 11:31 AM
thanks for appreciation and the Reps++ ishq ek ibadat
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22nd March 2011, 11:22 AM
thanks for the reps++ Zainy ji
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22nd March 2011, 02:43 PM
sabko jaana, sabko parkha, sabko samajh liya magar,
main kaun hoon yeh duniya mujhe kyun nahin batlaati
ek razaai hai oDi hui, ek chaadar bhi hai maili si,
roz raat mujhe na-paak karein, yeh kyun nahin nahati?
Good One ..... Anmol Ji !
Very Impressive ... Nice Thougths ... !
dil se daad .........
aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ........ !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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23rd March 2011, 01:11 AM
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Originally Posted by zakhmee ashiq
dosto bahut waqt ke baad ek nayi peshkash. Iss mein zindagi ke, awaam ke, samaajh ke aur hamaari soch ke bahut se daagdar pehlu hain jinka zikar na karte hue bhi kiya gaya hai. aap sab samajhdaar hain ummeed hai ki samajh lein gey.
main ruka hota to shayad, woh mujhe gale se lagaati
magar chal paDa us rah par jise khaak tak nahin apnaati
jal raha hai mera vaujood ab tak teri is tapash mein,
eh shamma, tum bhi ab buj kyun nahin jaati
sabko jaana, sabko parkha, sabko samajh liya magar,
main kaun hoon yeh duniya mujhe kyun nahin batlaati
ek razaai hai oDi hui, ek chaadar bhi hai maili si,
roz raat mujhe na-paak karein, yeh kyun nahin nahati?
woh bhi hain joh khudah ke naam par apradh karte hain,
mujhse gandgi gayi, magar unse yeh bandagi kyun nahin jaati
main na jaane kis gham main deewana ho gaya is kadar
ke meri maut bhi paas aane se hai hichkichaati
chain-o-aman na mila hai kissi ko markar bhi 'Anmol'
ya raakh ban jaaye ga, ya sone ko mile gi dharti ki chhaati
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ghazal bahut achchi lagi
maqhta to kamal ka hai insaan mer ker bhi sukh nahin pa sakta
razia
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29th March 2011, 09:43 AM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
sabko jaana, sabko parkha, sabko samajh liya magar,
main kaun hoon yeh duniya mujhe kyun nahin batlaati
ek razaai hai oDi hui, ek chaadar bhi hai maili si,
roz raat mujhe na-paak karein, yeh kyun nahin nahati?
Good One ..... Anmol Ji !
Very Impressive ... Nice Thougths ... !
dil se daad .........
aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !
duaaoN ke saath ........ !
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Narsesh ji hounsla baDhane ke liye bahut shukriya
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31st March 2011, 11:24 AM
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ghazal bahut achchi lagi
maqhta to kamal ka hai insaan mer ker bhi sukh nahin pa sakta
razia
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yasmeen ji pasand karne ke liye shukriya
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